Battle Rules:

12 - 16 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
3 - 0 = k.o.
4 - 1 = T.K.O.

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-14-06 at 08:06 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.


Win by 3-0 KO

Uno has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-11-06 08:07 AM.

Raw King has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-11-06 09:19 AM.

How u claim to be a king when your bloodline shows no royalty...
It shows your a loyal freek who has Hepatitis A, B, C, Aids and HIV. How I know?... Cause i killed your family lyrically from A-Z

Your right that your a RAW king cause ya rhymes got freezer burn
I see you've been serving dudes up but now its ya turn

You should'nt have battled,.....Im a master chef with my rhymes
Your verse was well done but i served it at dinner time

Your bars like lays chips, bet i cant eat just one
Then throw da rapper in da dumpster cause he's nothing but trash when im done

Challenging me made u a jackass and i aint talkin bout da show....
U at tha other end of tha pistol but tha smoke i blow

Like Shaq ya punches miss me even if i gave u free throws
Like Noahs flood i bring an end to ya reign and off on wave he goes

Im laughin at dis king cause im da joker
I'll get more Aces off dis dude then in a game of poker

Your lifes a movie dawg and right now its Showtime....
Thats why dudes on da internet getting tha showtimes, to see when u started playing, when it came to your lines



I dropped dis dude just like my verse!
*Explanation*
*In tha second bar RAW means frozen or not cooked*
*In da fifth bar tha show jaackass they do crazy shit so i was saying he was crazy for challenging me. And after u shoot someone in movies they blow tha smoke*
*In tha sixth bar ya should know that shaq misses a lot of free throws. For Noahs floods god stop the rain after it rained for 40 days and 40 nights. So i switch rain with reign and i said off on a wave he goes. Which i put instead of off and away he goes because Noah and his family floated away on waves and shit. Plus it can mean he waved goodbye*
*In da seventh bar Aces means a victory over a monarchy, in this case a king*

If anyone needs me to explain anything just PM me ~1~

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lol...I forgot all about this shit...oh well

this match aint even at all, dawg to tell the truth I aint worried
cuz u from where niggaz wit flows are born...and Im from were they come to get buried
so u can get drag'd against a brick wall like a missplaced poster
lil niggaz like u get stacked up, till ur mom screams...........................................thats how we know the games over
and I could ramble about random shit and still steam the shop
cuz man, Iv seen u drop befor, no not a verse...Iv just...seen u drop
doggy I'll mop the floor wit u even wit out dreads
cuz me battling u dont make sense, like playing soccer wit out legs
cuz I could bitch slap the shit out...wit out posting a thread
and if u didn't get that punch, then u can take these to the head...
that means I dont care, I'll beat u wit out effort
cuz if u plan to beat me wit flow, then I hope that means u'll stop wetting ur bed first
so lil buddy, I'll scramble ur brains wit the toast, thats the way we serve u
cuz the only time u ever roll deep...is when I take a shovel and earth u


I dropped really late so Im a bit woozy from the loss of sleep so if it sounds a bit jumpy..then its cuz it is..lol

good luck man.

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can i get some votz here....lol.....

uppin 4 votz

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Voted For: Raw King

i liked ur humor on this...u had more harder punches..the metaz were much more decent..ur flow was better,first,cos u didnt space ur bars,and secondly cos ur syllab count was a lil more...idk what to call it but better...i'ld like to let u know that the uno line didnt rhyme that much but w/e the game over backed it up...structure was not that gd but way better fo sho!..and i have seen u drop way much more better things..but meh guess u rushed it...w/e..still decent


uno...dont space ur bars it puts ur flow off...ur punches didnt hit as hard as raw's...u needa hit the haiku cyphers alot for u to get a better flow/syllab count...and ummm...u dont really need to explain all ur lines mayne...screw that..u cud xplain like 2 lines if they dont get the rest of ur verse..tell em to eaither not vote or,like u stated,pm u for xplanations...ummm whatelse...work on ur punches a lil more..u had some idead but u didnt mount the punches up that well...i wish u luck on elevating tho...



u took this hands down raw...

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thanks for the vote and feed back.

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thanks for da feedback...................uppin 4 votz

Much love ~1~

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uppin 4 votz.................return da favor!!!

Thats real ~1~

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Voted For: Raw King

Punches-Raw king had some funny punches in here that made me laugh and caught my eye..uno your style is old and whack...structure wise..you had some good punches for ideas but did not execute them properly..keep working it out.

personals...-raw king had the only apparent personal yet the first diss from uno was kinda funny and appealing.....idk close on this catergorie

flow-raw king better put together flow and organized....uno ur shit was just all over the place and annoying structure work on it u can only get better..

v/raw king

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good looking out on that shit dawg....1 more for a ko.

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good looking on feedback..........can i get some votz........uppin 4 some votz

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