dropped this on my other site, and got decent feed...thought id come over here and see wut yall thought...anyfeed appreciated, as long as its honest and well explained! ThAnk Ya!

new to tha spot, but quite aware of the shots //
I’ll still continue to share the shots at these scared spots //
You can say im snitchin, but aint true, im scared-a-cops //
But you’ll need “two physicians” tha real “paradox” //
You wont ever have the power, you trash, a coward //
Ya spit sour, this kid a “hoe” like the first “half hour” //
Burn a tape like I burn tha hate, my turn fa great //
Yo turn can wait, you hate cuz I burn tha great //
Ya audio don’t got slide, practice annunciation //
Put dots on both ya sides like Spanish punctuation //
Time ta Stop pullin ya fronts or be full-a-them cuts //
wont be able ya clean ya up like them culligan cups //
got em full-a-my-strut, start runnin ya luck //
you fags spit bad, jus to have something ta suck //
If you kids want inspiration, you should begin racin //
You wont win chasin, soon we start replacin //
so dont miss words but, jus stall with tha hatin //
or end up in more "Blizzards" than a Disqualfication // (DQ)
You got nothing fa sale, and ill drop something ta mail //
Tha kid put more clips on tha floor than cutting ya nails //
need ta man up more, drive ya crazy til ya ran out stores //
Be in a room with more padding than ran up scores //
I stand up when sore, and tha lands tough before //
Think you was a cop how you always handcuff-a-whore //
You scrunch in cars, but im still punchin bars //
And swiping more clocks than punch-in cards //
Im handeling the green, and I aint never gon leave //
hear me even when im gone like answering machines //
they say I fell so off, but I can still tell yo soft //
but youd think I had a sex line how I talk so hot //

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