^ Dude, people told him about that a long time ago... he still hasn't corrected it.

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No I was gonna bring that up also but I found intelligence in his retardation

#1 comes first

Then You

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Here.. it's a better dumbed down version..

An irritating buzz caused Mack to stir uncomfortably in his sheets as he glanced over to read an illuminated 6:00 on his alarm clock in the corner. His body was begging for a few extra minutes of sleep, but his mind knew that he’d have to shut the alarm off due to the state his mother came home in the previous night. As he walked across the cold apartment floor and switched the alarm off his mother let out a sigh of relief and clenched the comforter tighter before falling back asleep.

heres and even better one...

that dude mack was salty as fuck cuz that damn alarm kept buzzin...knowin his junkie ass moms and them wasnt gonna hit the fuckin snooze buttin...this cat right here threw that fucker against the wall...then his mom farted...beledat

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southbeachmiamiho

lmfaoo if you go by what Cali was saying, then that would be a new york times best seller

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rofl @ summers version

i'd cop it

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word you should al write your own books instead of just trying to rewrite mine.

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Buhhh, I already am.

Man, it is uncanny how many people I have met online through these rap/hip hop sites who are actually writing books. Limited Edition wrote one, CALI has wrote one, I am writing one, Adam is apparently writing one although you can never tell when he is being sarcastic or sincere, rofl... In-Vision is doing one, this dude Vivify from RM is writing one, and I know SPuL is thinking of doing one also.

Word, the fucking Writers Guild of RapSites.

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I am, for realz.

well do to the fact that it costs over 1500 dollars to get your book edited most peoples book wont be coming out cuz thier broke.i wrote 9 books not one and will be posting them all on myspace over time.lastly books take 3 months to a year just to get reviewed and cost 47.00 a piece to prepare in manuscript form for the publishers.hence why i will probally be the only one whos book goes in a store.

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Limited Edition has already beat you to it, he was published like 2 years ago.


And as for manuscript form, if you got a computer, a printer with some fresh ink you can do it all at home. Then pay for postage to send it to publishers. And if any publisher asks you for money then they are trying something fishy. Because the idea of publishers is that they see your work as a way to make them money so they wouldn't ask you for anything if they are truly legit and do see your work as being successful.

I know about six people who got published and it didn't cost them a thing. So everyone on here who wants to write a book has a chance of being published.

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That is LE's book. And word to the fact that he used to upload shit on that same site I told you about, the one I upload my stuff onto.

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fuck it cali pay me to fix up your fucking elementary school book lol

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