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Check In Due: Wednesday 10-29-03
Verses Due: Friday 10-31-03


Good Luck & Dont Drop Half Assed......

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your lines are drooping, and your rhymes aren't lucrid
cuz only time your mentioned is when someone says...
get outta here.. u beat hottie and feel special? then just try son
guess ya whole life was pussy.. u were born in & just died one
u suck, bow down & praise w/ love
cuz ur careers getting cut short.. ^ kinda like the phrase above
im lazy, duh.. but move faster thru, own u, all these bastards do
cuz like food on the other side of the table.. everyones passing u
but faggot do, you come staggering through, im dragging you
its pretty bad when ur verse is more boring than my rb mag review..
bet you didn't see that coming though - u froze my doubts
cuz u didnt close off the rest of the world.... the world closed u out

bit like you

the 'im with stupid' line was funny = )

? whered that come from . whatever. dont matter...

i see he no-showed but i'll have my say anyway..



your lines are drooping, and your rhymes aren't lucrid
cuz only time your mentioned is when someone says...
^^ very nice opener (funny)

get outta here.. u beat hottie and feel special? then just try son
guess ya whole life was pussy.. u were born in & just died one
Ok line, didnt really get the wordplay though

u suck, bow down & praise w/ love
cuz ur careers getting cut short.. ^ kinda like the phrase above
^^ILL i liked this line a lot

im lazy, duh.. but move faster thru, own u, all these bastards do
cuz like food on the other side of the table.. everyones passing u
^^^^OK wordplay but not as dope as the rest

but faggot do, you come staggering through, im dragging you
its pretty bad when ur verse is more boring than my rb mag review..
^^ LMAO

bet you didn't see that coming though - u froze my doubts
cuz u didnt close off the rest of the world.... the world closed u out
^^ nice closer probably my favourite lines of the verse