how bout 14...???

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Sigs cause Cancer

don't make no difference to me dawgy

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Lyrical Rapsody

yo

It's nothing for me to get rid of this new league poser
he couldn't put up a good fight hangin a Bruce Lee poster
ur to stupid to get my disses, so if u don't get beatdown
its cuz my punches Ben over ya head, like a Wallace rebound
iono shit about u, but ur gay & I can win with lame rhymes
a show about fags? is when u see Will & grace in the same line
it's nothin to pull ur hoe nigga, fo real I hate sluts
but, I always suck face with ya chick, cuz she says ur face sucks
girls just don't say no..when they don't wanna kiss u dude
they say,
in the kitchen with a candle stick..just so u'd get a clue
u must be new to gettin schooled, but look he's shook foreal
I told em to take notes..& he looked for music books to steal
ya name sucks too...matta of fact ur the worst guy ever
I left u ova the ground, cuz I was WillN to drop ya 1st five letters

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Sigs cause Cancer

write commandments wit fine print in stone
invincible, this dude ain't even attempt to show
thou shalt not commence to flow, wit one more lyrical
no miracle coulda saved his life from this burial
hysterical, merely my presence'll scare 'em off
embarrasin way to obtain ya first loss
u served soft, like local ice cream shoppes
the moshberg I'm holdins scoldin piping hot
u rollin, tightenin spots where u missin limbs
and keep going on like them spinnin rims
heres the end of him, didin't have to waste no bars
ya fate's to strave, I eat like my weights enlarged
I'm takin charge, since u want to act juvenile
my brutal style, lets off like rugars wild

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Lyrical Rapsody

damn , why u had to get all mean 'bout it.... I ain't even kno u dropped til' I finished writin mine, but now I see how it wurkss..... goode drop dawgy, I'll bring heat at the rematch

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Lyrical Rapsody

Up over no-shows.

iono shit about u, but ur gay & I can win with lame rhymes
a show about fags? is when u see Will & grace in the same line
it's nothin to pull ur hoe nigga, fo real I hate sluts
but, I always suck face with ya chick, cuz she says ur face sucks
girls just don't say no..when they don't wanna kiss u dude
they say,
in the kitchen with a candle stick..just so u'd get a clue

WAS DIGGING THIS VERSE YOU CAME WITH SOME GOOD BARS
SOME FELL SHORT OF BEING QUOTABLE BUT STILL SOLID


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WILL YOU POSTED A NOSHOW VERSE SO I CANT REALLY QUOTE ANYTHING
BUT I DONT UNDERSTAND WHY YOU THOUGHT HE'D NO SHOW IF HE POSTED BEFORE YOU BUT LIKE YOU SAID, YOU'LL GET A REMATCH EVENTUALLY

V/ BROCK

It's nothing for me to get rid of this new league poser
he couldn't put up a good fight hangin a Bruce Lee poster
iono shit about u, but ur gay & I can win with lame rhymes
a show about fags? is when u see Will & grace in the same line
girls just don't say no..when they don't wanna kiss u dude
they say,
in the kitchen with a candle stick..just so u'd get a clue

vs.

Nothing

Will n' Grace shit was hot, a few played lines but decent verse. Will, dawg you just aren't ready for this league, not even close. You gotta figure out how to use wordplay n' personals to hit hard punchlines, you didn't have anything even close to a quotable. Read some battles from the top ranked people here and keep practicing.

Vote - Brock

Brock Sampson-It's nothing for me to get rid of this new league poser
he couldn't put up a good fight hangin a Bruce Lee poster
ur to stupid to get my disses, so if u don't get beatdown
its cuz my punches Ben over ya head, like a Wallace rebound
it's nothin to pull ur hoe nigga, fo real I hate sluts
but, I always suck face with ya chick, cuz she says ur face sucks

WillNova -u served soft, like local ice cream shoppes
the moshberg I'm holdins scoldin piping hot

Didnt really feel much of Will , Brock had sum punches I liked so i give it to himm
Vote-Brock Sampson

Not really close here. I respect Will for bringin somethin different to the table, but I wasn't feelin' it at all. Brock's more polished. He had some pretty nice quotables there.

vote - Brock Sampson

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yeah Will....this is battle kid. I don't actually hate you...it's just comp. Check out some other leagues of battles and make it happen. Respect fam.


http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2806741
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2806747
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2806751
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2806950

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Sigs cause Cancer

yeah, this battles not really close at all

will u need to work on ur punchlines n concepts homie. u got the lyrical aspect of it down, but u need to punch.

again, not even close here.

brocks bruce lee line was cool. so was the candlestick line. closer was aight too.


vote- brock

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v: brock, for real....do i need to explain?

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