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Old 11-27-05, 08:05 PM   #1
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Shodown & Trikky vs. DramaQueen & The Revelation

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Old 11-28-05, 05:14 AM   #2
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Check... and considering i'm new im not sure about the whole link thing ... but i'm pretty sure i know what you mean ... just need a slight bit more detail than that
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Old 11-28-05, 11:37 AM   #3
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Old 11-28-05, 05:34 PM   #4
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Quote:
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Check... and considering i'm new im not sure about the whole link thing ... but i'm pretty sure i know what you mean ... just need a slight bit more detail than that


You vote on a battle, then copy and paste the link of the battle in a post. Best to get all 4 at once.

This is my check.
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^^I think this explains my view on gangster rap perfectly.
 
Old 11-29-05, 07:50 PM   #5
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check....................i will drop...........soon...........hahaha
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Old 12-02-05, 05:07 PM   #6
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the piano stands in the light given night and day
pleasing yet teasing in disguise for dismay
each key every tune to go sense w/ a voice
but broken chords yet occur, react w/ no choice
polluting secretly as tunes infect slowly within
from big to small hallowed halls become thin
every sound thats played w/ emotion that is touched
is the yerning and burning of irrated pain, brain crushed
solo in the day but 2nd quarrel by night in the dark
rippin and scratchin, one by one, from enemies hearts
gritting ur teeth as you cant do to interfere
take the wheel and steer, only to drop bombs of fear
to my dear, fingers keep movin for reason i cant stop
i hear there's and empty slot tell satan thats my empty spot.
tryin to focuss mentally incline with my mind
yet voice of persuasion dated off the enkindled kind
brain lost in a trance cant dance cant demand
pursuind death first GLANCE being led bt satans hand
grand, to invoke the triumoh of the FEW
falling fast yet slowly i die to whom is I, is you
shaked off suspense, TENSED grasp for GRIP failed
heart beating, piano stands still to a diseased face so pale
cuts of inner dwellings blood drippin to leave a trail
to the end of the pendolum host of; to tella tall tale
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Old 12-02-05, 10:42 PM   #7
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Ah, such a piano never seen before, amazing piece of machine,
Look at it's body, so fresh, so clean. What else will give you this pride?
Something you have never felt inside, as you play the keys and learn,
A little thing bout yourself and how your turn is something to hold close,
And all those little things you do...no one knows and it will stay that way,
Time to learn "chopsticks" today. My process has already begun,
One key, two key, where does this come from? Three key, music to ears,
Dreams among peers, recidals cause fears. But I'm ready, practiced daily,
You walk confident even though you're a bit dizzy. Sit down and play,
Listening to the music and people takes you away. Then, flat note, oh no,
Everyone cringes and you no longer have hope. As you walk off, people clap,
You feel horrible, you shake at your kneecaps. Judges score you last,
But your mom tells you to keep at it, this competition is all in the past.
But you are depressed and feel like an outcast, then your dad tells you,
You lost, if you want to give up I won't blame you. But you won't do it,
No matter the pain, you will go through it. So this piano taught you one thing,
That you may lose hair and height, but wisdom only comes with aging.
That was a long time ago for me, but the lession is something I won't forget,
Partner next to me as we continue our duet. First place again, such a wonderful day,
Amazed at the joy I feel, I wander away. I look at my music I've written and yet,
I feel like there is something I might forget. Oh well, I go and write more,
I look out and feel my spirit leap out and soar. Looking back, I loved my life,
But I did a lot of things I knew was wrong, wish I could reverse fights.
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But then my beat suddenly slowed down...these keys spoke more to me
As though I could now finally see realistic reflection in the polished wood
An image that used to be misunderstood, I got to see behind the disguise
Into my own invisible greyish eyes I viewed all the mistakes I have made
All fun and games as that masquerade to hide a true identity, the real me
The sounds spoke: "not conceal thee!". And I chose to listen to the voice
That led me to this inevitable choice, to get back on the path I belong on
And no longer be so tempted by Satan's Spawn but follow the Lord's road
With Him I've found my final, safe abode where I've got that peace of mind
Sending those notes to mankind to let them know I'm back to who I was
But my fingers are in need of a pause so I sit back, relax and be at ease
Before I prepare myself for the last reprise to show what I am able to do
To tell story of what I have been through, prove that I am a changed man
A little example of what faith can change in a life if you only believe in it
If you aren't afraid to admit that at times you too have been in the wrong
This is why I play my sad song and let these black and white keys talk.
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Old 12-02-05, 10:53 PM   #8
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1st Verse- Me
2nd Verse- Drama Queen
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^^I think this explains my view on gangster rap perfectly.
 
Old 12-03-05, 12:38 PM   #9
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V/Rev & DQ..............

Good shit, plus - Trikky never showed by the looks of it.

The length of Shodowns topical was as long as my text battles usually are....

but jea, gotta give it to that red headded fellow and his sexy partner.
 
Old 12-03-05, 02:48 PM   #10
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DramaQueen n The Rev. beat Shodown n Trikky due to no-show
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