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View Poll Results: BIG Spook vs. Oz™
Oz™ 5 83.33%
BIG Spook 1 16.67%
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Old 06-10-05, 01:20 AM   #1
BIG Spook
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Oz™ vs BIG Spook

IP: 57B0 EFC2

Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
5 votes to win
3-0=KO

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 06-14-05 at 01:20 AM

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Old 06-10-05, 01:21 AM   #2
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Oz™ has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-10-05 01:21 AM.
 
Old 06-10-05, 01:24 AM   #3
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BIG Spook has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-10-05 01:24 AM.
 
Old 06-10-05, 01:31 AM   #4
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think and stop...becuz defeatin's a hard job..
Bcuz i'll blow your mind like skull blow-jobs..
dawg nobody sees you...just a tale like fairys..
he says hes hard...but then again casper wasnt too scary..
beatin me...just wait and see...that'll be a tough bid..
try n keep up dont fall behind...bcuz ur record already did..
its said done...trust this battle has already been handled..
i'll cut your life line short, and NO jeapordy aint get canceled..
show is done...but no big spook dont get an encore..
cuz i could spit half assed n my shit would be better den urs..

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Old 06-10-05, 02:01 AM   #5
BIG Spook
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check it...

aeyo its BIG Spook da 'Wizard of 'Oz™'
Oz be wishin for a verse to reverse his losing curse
so i burst... make him look like da worst
and i run all over him like 'Garrison Hearst'
i make your head empty like 'Scarecrow'... why did you ever accept?
this is a battle... do you understand that concept?
your just like michael jackson...the only lines that 'cum' outta you is the lines from your dick
theres a million little boys to melest just go ahead and take your pick
you aint even on my level son... dont make anotha mistake
you must be dreamin of beatin me so imma 'Spook' you and put you awake

1)Wizard of Oz-the damn movie
2)Scarecrow--the dude in Wizard of Oz that wishes for a brain
3)Garrison Hearst-NFL running back


i didnt go over the line limit!!!
GOOD LUCK
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Old 06-10-05, 03:55 AM   #6
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uppin............................................. ..
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Old 06-10-05, 04:14 AM   #7
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Voted For: Oz™

umm i hope that was a keystyle

Oz won this based on the fact that Spook u really need to work on being more creative with punches and personals..u had some good ideas but jus find a way to make them hit harder by re-wording them or rearrangin the whole bar..and do not ever use a michael jackson line again..those are played out.....


Oz wins
 
Old 06-12-05, 07:03 PM   #8
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Old 06-13-05, 04:16 PM   #9
.Barz Of Steel.
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Voted For: Oz™

Wow

Eassy win for OZ

Punches: Oz
Personals: Oz
Wordplay: Oz
Structure: Oz
Flow: Oz

As we can see, Oz took it in every category. Spook, you need major elevation man.
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Old 06-18-05, 04:44 PM   #10
King Solo
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Voted For: Oz™

aeyo its BIG Spook da 'Wizard of 'Oz™'
Oz be wishin for a verse to reverse his losing curse
0...doesnt rhyme...nuff said.
so i burst... make him look like da worst
and i run all over him like 'Garrison Hearst'
1...wack!! too basic and no real punch.
i make your head empty like 'Scarecrow'... why did you ever accept?
this is a battle... do you understand that concept?
3...kinda resembled a diss.
your just like michael jackson...the only lines that 'cum' outta you is the lines from your dick
theres a million little boys to melest just go ahead and take your pick
2...GAY!!! MJ lines are played.
you aint even on my level son... dont make anotha mistake
you must be dreamin of beatin me so imma 'Spook' you and put you awake
3...basic resemblance of attempted wordplay here.

OVERALL: 9/50



think and stop...becuz defeatin's a hard job..
Bcuz i'll blow your mind like skull blow-jobs..
4...weak, played concept and too basic.
dawg nobody sees you...just a tale like fairys..
he says hes hard...but then again casper wasnt too scary..
5...kinda good, if worded better cud've been dope.
beatin me...just wait and see...that'll be a tough bid..
try n keep up dont fall behind...bcuz ur record already did..
5...LoL!!! kinda basic but decent punch on his rec.
its said done...trust this battle has already been handled..
i'll cut your life line short, and NO jeapordy aint get canceled..
5...again, good concept but not used properly.
show is done...but no big spook dont get an encore..
cuz i could spit half assed n my shit would be better den urs..
4...little self-glorifying going on there.

OVERALL: 23/50



weak battle....
oz came with the quick key so its understandable that his verse was weak....spook, i am yet to see a decent punch from you......you lost this battle easily.....

V/ - Oz

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Old 06-18-05, 06:04 PM   #11
SNE DAWG
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Voted For: Oz™

one sided battle aight here....

BIG Spook: your structure n´flow got u down dawg you should be carefull of the even lines..you had sum nice punchez but nuthin that blow me off ma mind, vocab was nuthin impressive but it was aight cause you used your creativity and used Oz´s name against him though you did that with sum wack rhymes

Oz: you took this ez your punches were off the hook dawg you did sum good shit right there, flow wuz tight, n´good vocab though nuthin impressive..structure was betta than spook´s...........good rhymes dawg
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Old 06-18-05, 06:07 PM   #12
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oz rtf on ma ax dogg battle.......................
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Old 06-18-05, 11:14 PM   #13
NaRc-UzI
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Voted For: BIG Spook

i felt that oz had a harder verse and i was enjoying his flow

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Old 06-18-05, 11:17 PM   #14
NaRc-UzI
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I voted for OZ not BIG SPOOK and return the favor in my batteles so vote on this battle
NaRc-UzI vs Black Queen
 
Old 06-24-05, 07:22 PM   #15
K-Trini
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Voted For: Oz™

aeyo its BIG Spook da 'Wizard of 'Oz™'
Oz be wishin for a verse to reverse his losing curse
so i burst... make him look like da worst
and i run all over him like 'Garrison Hearst'
i make your head empty like 'Scarecrow'... why did you ever accept?
this is a battle... do you understand that concept?
your just like michael jackson...the only lines that 'cum' outta you is the lines from your dick
theres a million little boys to melest just go ahead and take your pick
you aint even on my level son... dont make anotha mistake
you must be dreamin of beatin me so imma 'Spook' you and put you awake.No metas,werdplay,.....nutin.Flow suked too.

think and stop...becuz defeatin's a hard job..
Bcuz i'll blow your mind like skull blow-jobs.
^^nice werdplay
dawg nobody sees you...just a tale like fairys..
he says hes hard...but then again casper wasnt too scary..
^^^kinda weak
beatin me...just wait and see...that'll be a tough bid..
try n keep up dont fall behind...bcuz ur record already did..
^^Good
its said done...trust this battle has already been handled..
i'll cut your life line short, and NO jeapordy aint get canceled..
^^OK
show is done...but no big spook dont get an encore..
cuz i could spit half assed n my shit would be better den urs..
^^wak....but the 2nd line is true

This was a Ok verse....but excellent for a keyed.The best line was the opener.The worst was that casper one.Overall though.....you killed that muther fucker easily.

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