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Old 03-22-04, 03:35 PM   #1
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Talking strait freestyle check it out

IP: C1DA C961

on tha hip i hold 8 like aikman/
in tha clip i hold 20 like peyton/
im bout to let hot shit start fires like satan/
u can get your chest fried like bacon/
and u can catch it early/
i got gats that'll throw bullets like testerverty/
get smacked in your chest get thirty/
damn right them texas birdies/

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Old 03-22-04, 04:20 PM   #2
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ummm...not realy long enough dawg....nice try for anewb....try loner words and lines....make it more complex...use mulit' to make it dope...as i sed not bad for your first go bro...but u gota try to mix up da wordplay and advance on da vocab....yo coment on some open mics.....then you will see ways in witch to make dis beta...nice try ...pz
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Old 03-22-04, 04:20 PM   #3
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it was alright wasnt really good

punches wernt good

is this a sports freestyle or something gangsta

one love......
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Old 03-22-04, 04:32 PM   #4
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hey im gonna tell you right you aint got shit yep the next master p is talking to you
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Old 03-22-04, 04:44 PM   #5
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Quote:
Originally Posted by #1~soldier~#1
on tha hip i hold 8 like aikman/
in tha clip i hold 20 like peyton/
im bout to let hot shit start fires like satan/
u can get your chest fried like bacon/
and u can catch it early/
i got gats that'll throw bullets like testerverty/
get smacked in your chest get thirty/
damn right them texas birdies/


hey you wanna hear a real freestyle. here it comes
Gunit beats all of you fake ass punks
theres no one that could beat me
when you see me comin you all know what to do
duck cause you dont wanna be the goose
im the lyric master you all are fake
you eminem niggas wanabe
i know you probably think this aint my best freestyle
but remeber me when im selling all my records
im the next master p
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