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Old 03-29-04, 10:25 PM   #1
#1~soldier~#1
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*got shit runnin thru my head*

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hold up dont come at me wit dat 8 mile shit/
i got guns dat hol up dem 8 mile clips//
im back in dis bitch,n im not speakin about Denny's/
ya moms legs is open 24-7 like wendy's//
Im from da castle, I cock Hammaz das invisible to cameras/
n dey big with clips shaped like bannanas//
Im on da front-line and my punch-lines/
eat at u like it was fuckin lunchtime//
Da game is hungry n ya'll ain feedin it/
ur rhymes is wack. I ain eva readin it//
If i pull Da GLOCK out yall gunna miss dis cat//
ill leave ya white tee red like a christmas hat//
But YO.....Im da type to PoP-A-Fella/
and im not Jay-Z buh i sure know how to Roc-A-Fella//
Wen i Pop-a-Fella yall cant knock da Fella im bouta drop a fella//
Roll up on U n naww i ain havin no fun/
U'll see da gun N act like JaDa wit GHost n run//
U dont wanna kill my crew/
cuz my whole crew know u an dey''ll fuckin Expose u//
Niggas hate on me till i clap da steel/
Wen I say run ya Shit i dont mean Track-N-Field/


what do ya think??????????????????????????????????
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Old 03-29-04, 10:34 PM   #2
Gambino
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yo thought it was better than the last one.......

still need to work on rhymes........

one love.......
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Old 03-30-04, 01:55 AM   #3
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yea work on it
some of the lines look really familiar lol fuck it elevate
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