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Old 02-17-05, 05:23 PM   #1
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Exclamation Ode to tha rudest muthafucka.......................ME!

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Aeyo....I hate my Life...and tha way that everything Remains alike/
Monotonous experiences....uncured, given me tha Rage to fight/
Growing up without any friends...my mother said I may ignite/
she's right...and now here I am age of 18...a Bastard day and night/
Lets say $eed's quite tha Egocentric guy...I'll tell a chick to die/
Flip tha bird....and use Obscene names until tha Bitches cry/
Listen...Im tha scrooge at Christmas...bias with Rude Intentions/
Violent...I've used my fists with a Pious polluted Tension/
I lie and make Cruel decisions......tha guy that Refused to Listen/
Inside of a school....cause kids then were Silent to me, I wish then/
that i would be sent to Really....i never ever had any Motives/
tha Pressure that built Inside of me sent me through a Lack of focus/
Now im back and Hopeless, an Asshole...and when trash Approaches/
Regardless of who it is.....I'll even run up and Smack tha homeless/
My acts are potent...I look at people Now like a Pack of Roaches/
....fuck tha world and everyone in it....they suffer from Haletosis/
I crashed a moment....regained my strength...basically I stayed awake/
Remained insane...but Kept myself from Toungue kissing a Razor blade/
Day to Day my anger flames....my Mind burns with hatred/
My pass was a Girl thats naked...open for tha whole World to rape it/
Twirled and anxious...now my head is known to quickly Spin and Roam/
....With a motion thats so tense,..its been known to Bend a comb/
Listen yo....If $ick goes....and I get a Hold of my Breath/
I'll get a Grip on Reality so Hard....I'd probably Choke it to death/
Im open to stress....tha Biggest asshole tha World has to offer/
Im not apologizing...shit!.....I dont even respect my Father!!!!/
You cant neglect this author....So as I cuss and spit it Lingers/
But since this is Text....close your Eyes and picture my Middle finger.....



Scream at me....




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Old 02-17-05, 10:36 PM   #2
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aight ya shit was pretty dope but take some advice....
try to make it a lil shorter cuz when people see how long it is, right off the bat they not gonna want to sit there and read sumtin very long

But i liked it so keep it up jus remember to make ya next short and sweet
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Old 02-18-05, 07:57 AM   #3
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Old 02-20-05, 08:01 PM   #4
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