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06-13-05, 12:46 AM
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.Barz Of Steel. vs BIG Spook
IP: 57B0 EFC2
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06-13-05, 12:47 AM
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IP: 57B0 EFC2
BIG Spook has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-13-05 12:47 AM.
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06-13-05, 03:32 PM
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IP: 7BAB 1CDD
.Barz Of Steel. has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-13-05 03:32 PM.
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06-13-05, 03:33 PM
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Don't Even Think About It
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IP: 7BAB 1CDD
This dude's the best? dawg ya horrible, I heard ya flow
And you couldn't "raise a roof" sittin in "convertibles" Intimidating? Please, watch me murk this shallow teen Who couldn't get a "Big Spook" if it was "Halloween" You've got shit text, so how can you claim to be a big threat?? When your record is "0-2" you don't even have a win yet!! Watch me murder this man, You're unheard of, this herb'll get slammed Shit, you wouldn't "drop hot" if it was "burning your hands" All your battles suck, you acting like it's all about fun But when I say your "text blows" dawg I ain't "talking bout guns" * * Text=techs blows=shooting
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06-13-05, 05:09 PM
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IP: 57B0 EFC2
check it...
Its ya boy BIG Spook doin his thang If .Barz Of Steel. dont live in fame im da one to blame cuz imma fuck up his game... no matter da circumstances you see .Barz Of Steel. falls down and BIG Spook advances ill break through ya bars like a drill through dirt ill be your worst thrill until ya mind starts to hurt dont bother battling back... save yourself the humiliation yo lines are straight up wack... your just a discrimination that verse is a wreck... and now im through im done humiliating your rec...so shove that 1 up your ass and accept loss number 2 GOOD LUCK
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06-13-05, 05:11 PM
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IP: 57B0 EFC2
uppin............................................. ....................
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06-13-05, 05:15 PM
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#7
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Don't Even Think About It
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IP: 7BAB 1CDD
Lets Get Some Votes On this bitch!!!!!!!
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06-13-05, 05:32 PM
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.The Dark Knight Returns.
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IP: 8355 3BDA
Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.
This dude's the best? dawg ya horrible, I heard ya flow And you couldn't "raise a roof" sittin in "convertibles" lmao...7/10 Intimidating? Please, watch me murk this shallow teen Who couldn't get a "Big Spook" if it was "Halloween" good...7/10 You've got shit text, so how can you claim to be a big threat?? When your record is "0-2" you don't even have a win yet!! damn...thats just mean  ...9/10Watch me murder this man, You're unheard of, this herb'll get slammed Shit, you wouldn't "drop hot" if it was "burning your hands" nice...8/10 All your battles suck, you acting like it's all about fun But when I say your "text blows" dawg I ain't "talking bout guns" * genius...10/10 barz...u really ripped it on this 1...nothing less than wut id expect from u...theres really not much i can tell u to improve on...so keep droppin...41/50 SPOOK... Its ya boy BIG Spook doin his thang If .Barz Of Steel. dont live in fame im da one to blame played as fuck...3/10 cuz imma fuck up his game... no matter da circumstances you see .Barz Of Steel. falls down and BIG Spook advances gay...no fillers in battle verse  ...0/10ill break through ya bars like a drill through dirt ill be your worst thrill until ya mind starts to hurt again...no self glorification or fillers...0/10 dont bother battling back... save yourself the humiliation yo lines are straight up wack... your just a discrimination doesnt make sense...2/10 that verse is a wreck... and now im through im done humiliating your rec...so shove that 1 up your ass and accept loss number 2 ok...5/10 u need work on wordplay...structure...punches especially...and metas...keep workin on it...10/50
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06-13-05, 05:47 PM
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Don't Even Think About It
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IP: 7BAB 1CDD
1-0 iight thanx for the vote uppin this shit
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06-13-05, 06:19 PM
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IP: E9AC 5E73
Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.
Its ya boy BIG Spook doin his thang If .Barz Of Steel. dont live in fame im da one to blame 3/10...No Comment cuz imma fuck up his game... no matter da circumstances you see .Barz Of Steel. falls down and BIG Spook advances 3/10...You Comin Weak, & You Talkin About Yaself More Than Bars ill break through ya bars like a drill through dirt ill be your worst thrill until ya mind starts to hurt 1/10...Weak Lines dont bother battling back... save yourself the humiliation yo lines are straight up wack... your just a discrimination 1/10...Had No Real Meanin You Jus Tried 2 Rhyme that verse is a wreck... and now im through im done humiliating your rec...so shove that 1 up your ass and accept loss number 2 2/10...1st Line Stretched As Fuck, 2nd Not Worded Well This dude's the best? dawg ya horrible, I heard ya flow And you couldn't "raise a roof" sittin in "convertibles" 5/10....Heard Diff Lines Thats Similiar So Nothin New 2 Me Intimidating? Please, watch me murk this shallow teen Who couldn't get a "Big Spook" if it was "Halloween" 6.5/10...Nice Play On His Name You've got shit text, so how can you claim to be a big threat?? When your record is "0-2" you don't even have a win yet!! 7/10...Good Personal Watch me murder this man, You're unheard of, this herb'll get slammed Shit, you wouldn't "drop hot" if it was "burning your hands" 7/10...Anotha Tight Line All your battles suck, you acting like it's all about fun But when I say your "text blows" dawg I ain't "talking bout guns" 6.5/10....Clever But Worded Funni Punches: Bars Personals: Neitha Creativity: Bars Structure: Neitha Multiples: Neitha Wordplay: Bars Enjoyment: Bars OVERALL VOTE: .Bars Of Steel. RTF....In My Battle Wit NewKid
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06-13-05, 07:24 PM
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Don't Even Think About It
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IP: 7BAB 1CDD
Drop a link and I will RTF (Ackrite)
Uppin This Fucking Shit!!!
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06-13-05, 07:26 PM
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~*This Worldz A Sin So Why Hate Me For My Habits~*
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IP: 2029 97B3
Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.
This dude's the best? dawg ya horrible, I heard ya flow And you couldn't "raise a roof" sittin in "convertibles" ^ alright 7/10 Intimidating? Please, watch me murk this shallow teen Who couldn't get a "Big Spook" if it was "Halloween" ^alrght 7/10 You've got shit text, so how can you claim to be a big threat?? When your record is "0-2" you don't even have a win yet!! ^Basic 6/10 Watch me murder this man, You're unheard of, this herb'll get slammed Shit, you wouldn't "drop hot" if it was "burning your hands" ^Umm 6.5/10 All your battles suck, you acting like it's all about fun But when I say your "text blows" dawg I ain't "talking bout guns" * ^Nice closer 7.5/10 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Its ya boy BIG Spook doin his thang If .Barz Of Steel. dont live in fame im da one to blame ^Weak 5/10 cuz imma fuck up his game... no matter da circumstances you see .Barz Of Steel. falls down and BIG Spook advances ^Weak Also 5/10 ill break through ya bars like a drill through dirt ill be your worst thrill until ya mind starts to hurt ^??5/10 dont bother battling back... save yourself the humiliation yo lines are straight up wack... your just a discrimination ^Weak Punch 5/10 that verse is a wreck... and now im through im done humiliating your rec...so shove that 1 up your ass and accept loss number 2 ^Weak 5/10 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Barz Took This Battle Due To HAVIN PUNCHES N personalz n havin everything a Battlez Requested!BIG SPOOK homie you need to work on EVERYTHING!(Punches,Wordplay,Metaz,Personalz,Rhymi n Scheme) i seen You Tried Usin Some VOCAB just didnt do good!Prolly cuz you didnt really make sense of what you said!but my vote goes to!.. VOTE=BARZ Punches=Barz Personalz=Barz Structure=Barz Opener=barz Close=Barz Do i Need to proceed...??no i dont think so homie!RTF in my Battle with E.C if you havent!HOLLA BACK ATCHA BOY!
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06-13-05, 08:03 PM
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10:23 till i'm 86
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IP: 3EC9 2F38
Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=194585 ^^^link This dude's the best? dawg ya horrible, I heard ya flow And you couldn't "raise a roof" sittin in "convertibles ^^^best punch... nice concept, somethin new... this punch alone would of won the battle for you... i like this and your last bar was decent... the rest were either too basic or played... but decent drop spook- that verse is a wreck... and now im through im done humiliating your rec...so shove that 1 up your ass and accept loss number 2 ^^ i think this was an attempt at wordplay so i see u might know how to do it, add more to your verse wit punches and you'll be on a better track... think of a diss while havin having their name in in your head at the same time like... this kids soft wack and plane, needs to add somethin gangsta to his game cuz the last time he had a bar that was hard was when he wrote his name
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06-14-05, 09:25 AM
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Don't Even Think About It
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IP: 7BAB 1CDD
Iight Thanx Uppin This Fucking Shit...
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06-14-05, 10:34 AM
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IP: 3E49 2305
Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.
This dude's the best? dawg ya horrible, I heard ya flow And you couldn't "raise a roof" sittin in "convertibles" ^decent flow, ok pun Intimidating? Please, watch me murk this shallow teen Who couldn't get a "Big Spook" if it was "Halloween" ^nyce personal, good metta You've got shit text, so how can you claim to be a big threat?? When your record is "0-2" you don't even have a win yet!! ^nyce wordplay & good personal Watch me murder this man, You're unheard of, this herb'll get slammed Shit, you wouldn't "drop hot" if it was "burning your hands" ^nah not feeling da concept All your battles suck, you acting like it's all about fun But when I say your "text blows" dawg I ain't "talking bout guns" * ^good wordplay, culd ov used da ending punchline alot better Good verse here dawg, nyce flow throughout, few good personalz in yo verse. poretty decent wordplay throughout, punbches were nuthin special but u certainly did enough 2 get diz win, hands down, really good job.. Its ya boy BIG Spook doin his thang If .Barz Of Steel. dont live in fame im da one to blame ^self glory, very weak second line cuz imma fuck up his game... no matter da circumstances you see .Barz Of Steel. falls down and BIG Spook advances ^baarely even a diss, u on sum freestyle shit, think through ur disses ill break through ya bars like a drill through dirt ill be your worst thrill until ya mind starts to hurt ^very weak again dont bother battling back... save yourself the humiliation yo lines are straight up wack... your just a discrimination ^probably ur best bar, styll wasnt nyce tho that verse is a wreck... and now im through im done humiliating your rec...so shove that 1 up your ass and accept loss number 2 ^first line wuz 2 short, 2nd line wuz 2 stretch, not a good personal Very weak verse, u had no wordplay ithin ur rhymes, punches were non-existant, & u came very basic wit ur flow, all rhymes dat i seen b4 juz worded diffrently, nuthin at all on a personal level, step ur rap game up dawg, u on sum lil jon rhyme scheme lol Vote-BARZ OF STEEL, EZ WIN...SELF EXPLANATORY IN FACT LOL rtf, vote honestly & explain it plz. links in da signature
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