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Old 03-09-09, 08:21 AM   #1
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Jonathon (1-0) vs Mr.Write (1-0)

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Week 2 of Write Away Your Thoughts Topical League

Jonathon vs Mr.Write

Rules

RULES


No biting
No recycling
No Swaying

If caught biting, auto boot from league, and ban request given.
If caught recycling, auto loss for the week, possible boot from league.
If caught swaying, 3 votes off per comment in which you 'swayed'.

Dates
Battles set on Monday.
Checkin in Wednesday Midnight Pacific.
Drop by Friday Midnight Pacific.
Battles Close Sunday Midnight Pacific and new Battles will be posted as well.

Once your verse is up you can't explain what it is about or complain it was a 15 minute drop or whatever GOT IT! get it straight writing is never a mistake.... if you fail to make it a good write blame yourself in not having enough influence to getting it down right! If you do this, I consider it swaying so you'll get 3 votes off per comment in which you swayed.

LINE LIMIT
You must drop more than 8 bars (16 lines) for your verse to be considered official. But, you may not drop more than 25 bars (50 lines), if you do so you will be DQ'd for the week and given a loss.

NO SHOWING
If you no show, you get an auto loss for the week. If you no show two weeks in a row you will be booted for the remainder of the season. After you no show the first time, I will send a PM to you reminding you about WAYT. If you don't think you can show a week, let me know - ask for an extension, sign out the week before. Do something to prevent no showing. We do not want this league to become inactive.

EXTENSIONS!
Extensions will be granted by Write & I. If you don't have a good explination, your fucked. & you also will need to PM us ahead of time, not 5 minutes before they're due, we're not dumb your just lazy. I'm gonna say you need to send us your extension request by Thursday Midnight Pacific. Any extension request after that time will be denied. Note: We won't be granting extensions to those who repeatedly request every week. If you are having trouble showing, you'll take the loss.


Duration of Season
this is goes on for 12 weeks not including a one week pre-season. the playoffs is elimination so once you lose in the playoffs your OUT there is no second place winner or third, only one WINNER!

Playoffs
We let everyone get a chance at playoffs. But, the better your record the higher your seed. If you get a number one seed, you'll be battling the bottom of the rack.
So get those records up.

Voting
You MUST vote on 2 battles before Sunday, and post the links of those battles in your 'check in' post. IF YOU DO NOT DO SO: you will be DQ'd. One link will not cut it, both or an auto loss. I don't care if you are winning by 15 votes, if you don't have links and your opponent does, he'll take the win. No if, ands, or buts about it. Follow this rule. Once champ/contender matches are up, you will be required to vote on three battles, at least one has to be on a champ/contender match. I'm so tired of seeing people not voting on champ matches because they're a little longer or they feel they'll be dickriding. Just vote, it makes the league run smoother. It doesn't take but about 4 minutes.

So, if you don't follow these rules, I'm giving no warnings. I'm very strict about this, and the rules will be linked in every battle every week. No excuses.



Checkin in Wednesday Midnight Pacific.
Drop by Friday Midnight Pacific.
Voting ends Sunday Midnight Pacific.

Topics

MUST HAVE 2 LINKS IN CHECK-IN
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Old 03-09-09, 08:33 AM   #2
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check
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Old 03-10-09, 09:31 PM   #3
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Hotel for Dogs

Its Friday, so let me make this my day of relaxation...
My wife's on vacation, the kids are in my parent’s basement
Playin’ some kinda game &, I just got paid, a fat check too
Just found a decent price on a ride that's brand new...
Hit the town, guys night out so you know we're actin' a fool
They're all high but I haven't smoked bud since highschool
Slipped by the liquor store, spend a pretty penny on some
Patron with lime, a fifth of whiskey, a little henny & rum...
I'm tryna get fucked up, forget all the shit that’s on my mind
hell who knows we might get a whore once I'm drunk blind.

For some reason they wanted a hotel, so we got a suite
so I sit back, kick back my feet & treat myself to a drink
I pounded a couple shots, not a lot - less that I usually do
those high ass's were laughin at shit, then I already knew
I'm gonna have some regrets tonight, no fights though
I might go find me tang & nothin' below a nice hoe...
All my friends were single, bachelors of the city -
ever since I married into a rich bitch I haven't seen tities...
So who knows what might go down later on, I shudder
the last cup of whiskey & coke just might take me under.

At this point I can hardly open my eyes -
but I see in my peripheral nothin' but open thighs.
In just that second, merely a memory at the moment
I couldn't help but get some ass & definitely show'd it.
We went in the back room, I paid so they couldn't be bitchin
I don't remember a rubber - maybe I forgot to mention...
All I know is me and this hoe got it on for a couple hours
I couldn't get off so after the sheets we hit the shower...
She started suckin' me up, I felt like I lucked up as an adult
cuz before the night started I didn't think of this as a result...

This is the part that's scary, I wake up with her layin' beside me
& then I notice her lips, look liked they were dipped in poison ivy
I was shocked, so I knocked the bitch out and drug her down stairs
put the dirty bitch in the truck & dropped her off at the fair...
My friends stared as I glared at them in pure anger -
'You stupid fucks, you saw her lips n' knew that was danger'
I was pissed at my friends, but they were all laughin' n' shit...
They didn't have a wife to live their lives for eternity with...
She was still on vacation, but my kids came back to the house
they asked about me cheating, I denied it despite of their doubts...

Two weeks later, my lips look like the toppings off a pizza
Found out she died later that night, the bitch's name was Lisa.
Simply an hour till my spouse was back, I was worried n' shit
went to take a piss & was scared to even look at my dick...
Then the moment of truth, she got out and gave me a glance
simply said, 'I'm sorry, I fucked around with a man named Lance...'
then we talked out, she cheated on me with some random guy
apparently I wasn't the only member of our family with a crazy night.
Then we hit the bed for one last time, there wasn't a chance
cuz I saw the same shit that's on my lip when I pulled down her pants...

Hotels are for dogs...

Last edited by Jonathon : 03-10-09 at 09:53 PM.
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Old 03-14-09, 12:21 AM   #4
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Thats a fucking shame.

2 noshows?

damn write you disappoint me.

please give me some feed people...
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Old 03-14-09, 12:44 AM   #5
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up over closed.

feed may be used as a link
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Old 03-15-09, 12:48 AM   #6
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haha, very nice read.

I liked the ending, it was pretty funny.

Good storyline, good take on the topic.
Blame it on the alllcooholl.
If you had just smoked bud you would've been fine,
and could've told the wife what's up.

Good piece overall, would've been a good battle if he showed.

Favorite lines:

Slipped by the liquor store, spend a pretty penny on some
Patron with lime, a fifth of whiskey, a little henny & rum...
For some reason they wanted a hotel, so we got a suite
so I sit back, kick back my feet & treat myself to a drink
Two weeks later, my lips look like the toppings off a pizza
Found out she died later that night, the bitch's name was Lisa.
then we talked out, she cheated on me with some random guy
apparently I wasn't the only member of our family with a crazy night.
Then we hit the bed for one last time, there wasn't a chance
cuz I saw the same shit that's on my lip when I pulled down her pants...
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Old 03-16-09, 05:32 PM   #7
Jonathon
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I win, Write noshows.
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