Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

3-0 ko
4-1 ko

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-02-05 at 12:08 AM

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Batman has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-28-05 12:18 AM.

yo u wanna battle me all i got to say is nigga please
you better get in line bitch cuz theres sum merkage fees
all kinds of people wanna battle me cuz they think i aint good
but they aint sayin that when i wreck they hood
this might be added to your record but its still another loss
man u aint got no salad for bitches to toss
i know it wasnt your idea for this battle but dont back out
ive seen ur battles and i knew i was gonna win without a damn doubt
please nigga u cant measure up to me son
i listend to larry the cable guy and i got-r-dun*

explanations:*larry the cable guy is comedian who always says git-r-dun

NiggaPlease has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-28-05 12:28 AM.

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A LIFE OF CHRYME

keep in mind that i do topicals...........uppin for votes

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A LIFE OF CHRYME

uppin 4 votes in herr bitches...holla back at shya boy...peace

Voted For: NiggaPlease

this has got to be one of the weakest battles i have ever seen

both had fucked up structures, weak assed punches, but niggaplease was betta

"In this thread he will be known for the l
This cat couldnt be hott if he were rappin in hell"

thats the line that saved your ass

this vote goes 2 niggaplease

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LoL............................................... ...

props ur getting better hit me up on aim...........

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Voted For: Batman

On this site hes a herb he calls him self bat man
But behind his computer screen hes really a fat man
wack
My lyrical flowz will bust ya head nuff said
This nigga couldnt winna battle even if he bit the frontlines thread
wtf
They talkin bout this cat sayin he whack well its true
Cuz even ciarra got bigga goodies than you
woteva bullshit
In this thread he will be known for the l
This cat couldnt be hott if he were rappin in hell
known for the l????
Its too late, past the time to elevate
He needa new name Time for his comp to regenerate
alright
All his power his skill is undefined
Whats up wit that name? what goes on in ur mind
fuckin shit


yo u wanna battle me all i got to say is nigga please
you better get in line bitch cuz theres sum merkage fees
aight
all kinds of people wanna battle me cuz they think i aint good
but they aint sayin that when i wreck they hood
nah
this might be added to your record but its still another loss
man u aint got no salad for bitches to toss
its aight
i know it wasnt your idea for this battle but dont back out
ive seen ur battles and i knew i was gonna win without a damn doubt
lol
please nigga u cant measure up to me son
i listend to larry the cable guy and i got-r-dun*
aight...you seemed to put more efort in
betta shit vote-batman

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OYD MAFIA

checkin wots up and down..........................

yo wtf happend to the votes dawg???...thats bullshit

Batman

yo u wanna battle me all i got to say is nigga please
you better get in line bitch cuz theres sum merkage fees
No
all kinds of people wanna battle me cuz they think i aint good
but they aint sayin that when i wreck they hood
No
this might be added to your record but its still another loss
man u aint got no salad for bitches to toss
Wack
i know it wasnt your idea for this battle but dont back out
ive seen ur battles and i knew i was gonna win without a damn doubt
No
please nigga u cant measure up to me son
i listend to larry the cable guy and i got-r-dun*
Wack!!

Elevate on punches persoanls wordplay an flow. Use multis an metaphors too. Your whole verse was self glory. Boring to read

NiggaPlease

On this site hes a herb he calls him self bat man
But behind his computer screen hes really a fat man
ok
My lyrical flowz will bust ya head nuff said
This nigga couldnt winna battle even if he bit the frontlines thread
okay
They talkin bout this cat sayin he whack well its true
Cuz even ciarra got bigga goodies than you
HAHAHa ok
In this thread he will be known for the l
This cat couldnt be hott if he were rappin in hell
played
Its too late, past the time to elevate
He needa new name Time for his comp to regenerate
Good
All his power his skill is undefined
Whats up wit that name? what goes on in ur mind
No

This was an okay verse. Ive seen better from you. Punches were okay. You had one that was played out but thats cool. You could use more multis. I liked the structure an flow.... Keep it up..

BreakDown
Punches- NiggaPlease
Personals- NiggaPlease
Flow-NiggaPlease
Strucutre- Tie
Complexity- Tie
Creativity- NiggaPlease

v/ NiggaPlease for the reasons above.

I am in his crew so this is only feedback...

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