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Old 05-18-06, 09:33 PM   #1
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i finaly got my mic back so i recorded this track today
and my interface so i recorded this all day
i dont have monitors so i have to mix wit headphones



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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=224087
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Old 05-18-06, 09:42 PM   #2
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Your flow is straight.....you gotta up it sounds like ur mumbling some of your words......your lyrics are good........the beat is too repetive for me......this is a meh song.....i was expecting too hear better from ya.....hook is annoying......

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Old 05-18-06, 09:45 PM   #3
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Your flow is straight.....you gotta up it sounds like ur mumbling some of your words......your lyrics are good........the beat is too repetive for me......this is a meh song.....i was expecting too hear better from ya.....hook is annoying......

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thanks but i need to get some monitors so i can mix better thanks for the feedback
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Old 05-18-06, 09:45 PM   #4
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you DEFF need to get more comfortable on the mic and memorize your shit better before you spit....your vocals are to low also...need more presence and delevery as well....
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Old 05-18-06, 09:48 PM   #5
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you DEFF need to get more comfortable on the mic and memorize your shit better before you spit....your vocals are to low also...need more presence and delevery as well....

thanks for the feedback but when i was mixing this shit it sounded fucking loud well to each is own ill comeback 10 times better next time thanks for the feed back
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yeah...depending on your speakers cool edit and SC and windows media ALL change your lvls a bit...after a while you'll learn a decent middle.
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