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Old 03-29-09, 04:06 AM   #1
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Old 03-29-09, 10:19 AM   #2
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I intro
II last week overview
III battle reviews
IV verse of the week
V anonymous thoughts
VI rankings
VII predictions
VIII upcoming week
IX outro



I....Intro
ok so this is the long awaited, most valuable mag by the champ, himself. probably the very best you've ever read this season and probably will. so you better fucking acknowledge and appreciate my efforts, or i will show up at your doorway angry, shit i might even cuss a few times to your mother, then come to your room and slap the spit out of your mouth while proceeding to toss your monitor out of your second floor window. cheers and enjoy.


II....last week overview
where do i start besides saying that after the one week suspension, people are still checking in and the leagues alive. thanks to mr. write taking initiative and setting new battles up we can get this shit back on track with the right skills and determination. i aint gunna turn this shit into a pep talk thats not what i fuckin do..
Ok so a few decent battles this week and a whole shitload of noshows from a bunch of faggots that talk a good game and dont show the proof. I hope you bitches either take your writing seriously and drop something worthy of our reads or jump off the nearest cliff while a rope is tied from your neck to a parked car 10-15 feet away. I hope if you choose the second option, that your fragile spine doesn't snap right away, and so that you can choke slowly as the rest of the league watches you fade to your final moments, and then cut the rope at the time right before your pulse stops and you lose consciousness just to do so... anyways, civil, nick, burden, monkey bars, mr. write and LL cool K all noshowed. the list is getting smaller thankfully. jon had the rules followed to the very word. the sign in thread is starting to look like a contract lol the sign out thread is looking like the unemployment line, JTR had a crazy party and still manages to drop a verse, the topics last week pretty much sucked.. THOUGHTS for Writing Away Your Thoughts seemed limited. nothing interesting being talked about in the chat, and finally im here screaming lets get more activity poppin people!...

III..... battle reviews

Jonathon (2-0) vs boberric_lyrics (2-0) (Champ Match)
(review by mr. write)

Nâ€-T (2-0) vs JTR (2-0) (Contender Match)
ntt dropped a straight perspective piece. the rhymescheme was kind of simple though. jtr dropped a pretty nice politically motivated piece, dont believe the shit on tv, its true, that it aint. the votes reeled in for jtr but because he dropped past the due date, he was disqualifed...

Civil. (1-1) vs Coke Dealer (1-1)
Civil signed out and coke got the noshow win.. boo

Implicit (0-0) vs MONKEY BARZ (0-2)
Monkey noshowed and Implicit didnt drop anything..

Johnny 6-feet (1-0) vs MurDaH187 (1-0) vs Burden (1-0)
burden was another fucking noshow, but at least this battle was semi-functional, murdah shows promising efforts, dropped a piece with decent imagery and better flow than usual, johnny dropped within his caliber and was a pretty good read.. was able to take the win.

Alphabetized (1-1) vs Fuck Yuu (0-1)
this was a decent matchup.. fuck yuu wrote on a topic nobody else chose to, about being institutionalized and came out ok, then alpha wrote a pretty crazy piece about a rerepeating killing spree. alpha showed a better side to him this week with the imagery in his storylines, taking the win.

Mr.Write (1-1) vs LL Cool K (1-1)
both noshowed.. step it up!

CARLA'S PIMP (0-1) vs one way (0-2)
one drops a pretty cool piece, definitely a couple nice bars in there. deserved a bit of feed before it was closed, but carla's pimp ended up being a fat fucking noshow.

IV... verse of the week
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Originally Posted by Alphabetized
Blood in the air





Absurd notions occur of deducting these words
As I lay objective reflecting amongst the worms
unable to squirm or even alleviate the burns
So I smile while I'm presented with this deviant turn
and as my vision blurs I'm not concerned...
because I still view my actions as fair,
because sometimes you need bloodshed to make people care


And heres how It happened...

I grew up in the hood, and always kept myself bright
despite domestic issues around, I studied at night
In hopes that the rights could overshadow the wrongs
I even attended church on sundays and sang all the songs
My faith was strong then, and what could I say
I had nothing to offer God, except for my praise
But it was just a phase, because when I told the ghost
He needed to help my dad.. he died of an overdose
while a week later I found a note my mom had wrote
It read "I love you son", as I found her hanged with a rope
and It's alarming how the mind can twist at the loss of hope
and thats when starving turned into the carving of throats

A usual day, be fluent today and keep shit under control
A fresh dissected chest, some big breasts? your on patrol
But you fiene for a chill, something real to spark andorphins
So the first person you thirst to see.. cuz u know ur gonna whore'em
The local preacher, a vocal teacher... you see faith in his eyes
So you know you'll get hard when you try to abruptly surprise
Gunshot? Nope, borin... Grab a shank ain't a prank in store man
So when he goes out you can go in.. to his chest for some organs


Bless me father for I have sinned, it has been 6 years since
my last confession and these are my sins:

I stabbed a preganant bitch in the tummy..
... but first I made her say she loved me
And i threw my middle finger up to the God above me

I strangled a boy in the alley...
... he was meetin up with Sally
so I chalked up 2 more to God with some tallys



At this point the priest stood erected
and then he interjected...

Looks like Satan's doing more with you than expected!!



He smiled, and from behind I'm grabbed fast
and the chloroform pad knocked me right to my ass



And I awoke...



Absurd notions occur of deducting these words
As I lay objective reflecting amongst the worms
unable to squirm or even alleviate the burns
So I smile while I'm presented with this deviant turn
and as my vision blurs I'm not concerned...
because I still view my actions as fair,
because sometimes you need bloodshed to make people care

good job alpha.

V...Anonymous thoughts
so heres a fresh suggestion i was thinking of that could help out the league and add flavor, make it a priority to drop 3 topics in your check in and instead of having a topic thread, you must use one of the topics from someone elses check in. and the person with the most verses from there check in gets an extra win. I just thought it was good idea for a better expansion in topic choices. and its kind of an interesting motivation to drop.


VI..rankings

1.Bobericc_Lyrics (3-0)
2.N+T (3-0)
3.Johnny 6-feet (2-0)
4.Alphabetized (2-1)
5.JTR (2-1)
6.Coke Dealer (2-1)
7.Jonathon (2-1)
8.One Way (1-2)
9.MurDah187 (1-1)
10.Fuck Yuu (0-2)
11.Implicit (1-0)
12.Mr.Write (1-2)
13.Civil. (1-2)
14.Burden. (1-1)
15.Nick Fletcher. (0-2)
16.CARLA’s PIMP (0-2)

VII predictions

Bobericc_Lyrics (3-0) Vs. N+T (3-0) [Champ Match]
(by mr. write)

Johnny 6-feet (2-0) Vs. Alphabetized (2-1) [Contender Match]
both have a fair chance of winning, alpha has been dropping oms and keeping it live with the topic drops but its only to be expected that johnny has kept his own and the prediction is that he is going to keep the rec untarnished.

Coke Dealer (2-1) Vs. JTR (2-1)
hopefully jtr shows without the possibility of a dq. i only seen coke drop week one and was a pretty nice one, lets see if they both can drop and get a dope battle going, as for the prediction, it could go either way but jtr has been dropping nice all season.

Civil. (1-2) Vs. Nick Fletcher (0-2)
I never seen a topical from nick, but if its as bad as his fresh text than i don't think he has a chance in hell. civil says he signed out, you should rethink it fam, have fun and drop something.

MurDah187 (1-1) Vs. One Way (1-2)
not doubting murdah, but one's been dropping pretty nice this season too. I don't see him losing this, but its not impossible that murdah can put the story skills to the test and take this one.

Burden. (1-1) Vs. Jonathon (2-1)
burden hasn't dropped a piece yet so i can't tell where his skills at at this point and time, anyways i see jonathon taking this battle with ease, unless burden takes the time to show up properly.

Implicit (1-0) Vs. Mr.Write (1-2)
haven't seen implicit drop yet, but knowing what write is known for dropping hes sure to bring a good read. I got him taking it.

Fuck Yuu (0-2) Vs. CARLA’s PIMP (0-2)
i'm almost sure carlas pimp is going to noshow, so even if fuck drops anything hes almost certain to take this..

VIII... upcoming week
we need to get more participation in this bitch, its a opportunity for a dope league and so we should all venture and find some dope heads to recruit. fuck raplivegameboard.com or whatever though, the're probably wack ass shit haha.. even one head helps, and if your reading this mag and arn't in the league dont sit by and let time fly by if writing thoughts is your thing get down fam.. and get active. Next week looks good if all these battles end up being voted on.

IX....outro
so this draws a conclusion to my mag, I know you wish you could be reading this all day long until your eyes close on the endless supply of information regarding some of the greatest topical writers of all time, but its about that time, where i say fuck your life, drop some fucking dope pieces and keep this this going....peace

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Old 03-29-09, 10:27 AM   #3
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oh, i realized because i followed the link in the rules...

you should let me do the topic this week..
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topics will be up soon
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Old 03-30-09, 07:13 PM   #5
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well i got a mag ready holla when you want it up..
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put it up, you gorilla fuck
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good thing are mods are active, huh!!
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well i can't wait forever i know people want to read this shit..... also you can repost it up if you want i'll edit it out of this post.

edit: moved up to the 1st post...

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damn cokes practically the only one who read that shit....
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no no, i just randomly put # sign and 6 togeather


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Great work with the mag man, i'll be happy to help out again next week if you need help with articules. I'd like to see the league keep going.
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rofl @ bob taking shots

still thinking you're on my level, eh. and rofl @ nick and LL Cool K no-showed.. you fucking retard.. NICK IS LL COOL K DUMBASS.
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