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Old 12-25-03, 05:28 AM   #1
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beginning of armageddon

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suddenly
heavenly blazin beams raced
every eye on earth widened as their hearts quaked
be a man though my feet shake
angels with trumpets decend from the skies
individually placed
the angels soft touch shook the earth
wings stretched out for armaggeddon
strapped with a massive girth
then they spoke
grunt up your loins
search your heart if you are holy
even though god the almighty
created us in spiritual bodies
do not worship us because we are hardly worthy
I looked and witnessed the skies open up
clouds dispersed as though UFO's soaked them up
many pointed and started looking in amazement
eyes lost placement from brightness
of the celestial faces
as the righteous beamed up in the rays of light
leaving behind the evil 2 b forsaken 2 darkness
all I heard was screams
no time 2 shed tears
for my judgement is here
and my eternal torture is near
what awareness of death rose
though withered up
lesions of doom rised from the grave
jesus arrived blood and flames from his sword cyndered up
the angels emit indifference for the unwise
god then raptured the righteous
and judge the evil people leading sinful lives
I saw and remember in the bible if you despise god
he'll look in the book for our lives
if we fail twice
he'd never lie
seems like my times been shaved
never knew I was dealing with delicate religious situations
all I had to do repent and behave right
then I wouldn't have spiritually died
running around without a worry in sin
on this earth in our end of time
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Old 12-25-03, 05:35 AM   #2
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hope u like it
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nigga I'll fade u away like J's on the ballin court in a 'arcura' wit 'tinteds' -mindkontrol

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Old 12-25-03, 08:41 PM   #3
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Owww boy this was tight! I liked it or maybe it's just because I'm a Jesus freak! Anyway I liked the imagery and the mentions of the rapture. This is truely good work!


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Old 12-26-03, 12:30 AM   #4
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I'm glad u enjoyed it phantasia.
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Old 12-26-03, 02:03 PM   #5
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ish was nice...you on something different...i liked this...you nice with it...STAY UP
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