jea goodlooks niggaz datz 5-0

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Vote- Marv

Simply for the fact that King didn't really have any punches. It was all just flowing and rhyming but there was no real impact...that's obviously a no no in text battling.

Also, fix your structures guys. That shit comes off as really n00bish with all of the punctuation marks everywhere and // at the end and shit.

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tobacco pipe smoker
escobar, your life is over
justify the righteous nova
bullets flew out his right shoulder

its ova..................

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U NOT FUKKiN WiTH ME PLaiN N SiMP!...

Da "SiCKEST ON DiS SiTE" LiNE HaS BEEN USED aGaiNST ME 50 x'S...U DUDES aBUSED iT

breakdown for king solo:

flow:choppy almost everyline was kinda streched to fit the punch 5/10

volcab:alright kinda basic though 5/10

punches:most of the lines were kinda played or just plain weak you did have alot of them though my fav,"I’ll inject u wit an allergy have u looking fatter than Bizarre//" not too bad 6/10

overall:16/30

breakdown for marvolousj1009:

flow:alright alittle off in the lines through the middle of the verse but on more then king's 6/10

volcab:good use nothing amazing though 6/10

punches:best line,"u say im pussy? u "dont know who u fuckin with" like a "blind man havin sex"-" some of the lines were played but overall better then king's 7/10

overall:19/30

vote--marvolousj1009

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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's


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