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6 - Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-22-04 at 12:39 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

PoEtIc JuStIcE has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-22-04 12:10 PM.

bad_man has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-22-04 12:13 PM.

an hour to post?......wow u mus b kiddin.fuck that....
by the way u know u only put 6 lines?....
aiight 6 it is....


this guy peeps my record, thinks this gonna b an easy score
but dawg u couldnt "step" to me, if i was the "adjacent door"
like a jury, you say u a bad man...well im saying it isnt so
ya verse looks more "rushed"...than your fuckin "static flow"
takes him an hour for this newb to rv, to find a computer key
but this battle has been "over" since you posted on top of me

yo i bet u just some newb biter hu is a wack ass with his ryhmes im gonna rap him with my dope ryhmes he gnna have to fighta//
u muther fucker i bet u wanker u dad u need a face lift u cant rap u gotta cheat n bit i bet u gonna pm 4 votes u anit got no right//

ur faces looks wack i bet u never had a gal u anit got no style u anit no rapper u probley so despret 4 sex u gotta call da sex line//
my raps to good hittin u down break u nose haha u no u wanna frown u ryhmes wack my rhymes good id get the crown id get a fine//

y u here u cant rap 4 ur life my ryhmes r lyk slicin ur body with a knife so go take a hyk and get life//
u dick head u need a face lift get a life//
u define the word of wack coz its ya face ill kill u slit ur body until u die with a knife//

explan....

rushed/rushes/river/flow////// u dig?
step/door........yup
over...well thats easy surely

shit i went a bit wrong
last 2 lines

y u here u cant rap 4 ur life my ryhmes r like a rock ull never hit them ill slice ur body with a knife so go take a hyk and get a life//
u need a ace lift u define the word of wack coz its ya face ill slice u until u dead with my knife//

well u spat like 12 lines of bullshit.ive neva seen such a disgracefull verse..........lmfaolmgfao

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uppin

also 6 line rule????????????????????????????????????????????
ermmmmm

i got only 6 linez just i made my lines strect

Voted For: PoEtIc JuStIcE

Poetic Justice had dat 1...
better structure, though it was short but good
gave it 2 him hard...
nice punchlinez & everything...

try 2 return da favor PoEtIc...

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streeeeeeeeeeeeetched is the word lol.uppin.......

Voted For: PoEtIc JuStIcE

Lol Need I really explaine my vote?

Shit Bad man didn't have anything, flow was ok but the
lengh of his barz a way off key killed the flow. You didn't
have any punchs really. All round bad vesre keep working
on your shit stay up.

PJ Done what he had to do come nice, But I think you
should be battling people in your own league now... U
know what I'm saying the newbs are not ready yet...

Vote PJ in every department

1~

Voted For: PoEtIc JuStIcE

juice takes this for a decent verse......his structure was tight and i was feeling his flow big time...he had gd personals and word play..and his punches hit harder..bad man's verse was a too stretched and his verse didnt flow..make 'em of the same length..i didnt see a decent wordplay or punch...but with time ya will elevate just like do..

anyways,my vote gose to juice

holla at mines too

be honest thanx

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Voted For: PoEtIc JuStIcE

justice got this hands down

better structured rhyme scheme...
not the strongest punches n personals from either...
vocab wasnt good from either, but justices verse actually rhymes an i could read it so he gets my vote

return the fave in sig

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