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Old 04-05-04, 09:48 AM   #1
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restricted vs. lryical mc(forced word match)

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deadlines:
battles go up monday
check in by wedsday
verses due by thrusday
votes due by sunday
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
forced words must be bolded or something so people can
see them
bar limits:
16 bar min.
32 bar max.

forced words you must use these in your battle verse or
be d'q: immortal,surround,centeralize,harmony
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Old 04-05-04, 09:28 PM   #2
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Aight....Looking To Be A Hot Battle..

.::Checkity Check Bitches::.

Good Luck Lyrical

~R~
 
Old 04-06-04, 06:53 AM   #3
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~aiight..checkin' dis is guna be off da hook......good luck Restricted.....~

Dis Is Were Dis League Starts Gettin' Seroius

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Old 04-08-04, 06:08 AM   #4
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Restricted Immortal To Dope He Is Immune,
His Inflicked Rhyme Cetralized Around Out Of Tune,
The ~R~ At The Rear Of Each Post Has 1 Meaning,
~R~ Equals Restricted To Wack A peach Its Seeming,
He Suround By Bitin' He Has Produced,
Found Out By Profound Biting Re-used,
Couldn't Sucker Punch Hosting A Plunger,
The Lyrics Hes Contesting froze As They Cunger,
Your Geens Damaged Kid Dats every Clear,
The Last time you kicked dope no-one was ere,
The way you bring harmony to the stage in rampage,
The crowed go statick raisn' the fact callin' you "sadge",
Restriced Commited to herble verb produce,
The way he spits dumbfuck shows his cell reduce,
13-0 13 is unlucky number to be battlin' riskey,
Verb lumber as his wackness is more powerful than wiskey,
"back of bitch before restricted get his dick out,
Hes Perscripted you like his D/R votes bumbs mcs till cum spout,
Personaly dis-armbin' him self with herb,
Restricted calmin his nevers on his wackest verbs,


Yo Explanation..."sadge" = is a type of herb used for cookin'....
"Back Off bitch" its under his name on this profile...
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Old 04-08-04, 01:09 PM   #5
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Aight Check Dis..

IP: E3D5 FE0F

Aiyo..Aiyo...

Round 3....Yea!

Check Da Mic....3....2...1...

We Can Play Simon Says and We Can Call This Oppisite Day,You Can Command A Win, But Re$tricted Will Just Take It Away/
Verbally Slay This Cat, Cause All You Spit Is Hot-Air,
Your Ego Is Inflated, On My Level, Bitch Realize, Your Not There!/
Performing Lyrical Magic, Just Call Me The Houdini Of This Game, Making This Cat Disappear, No Matter, No One Even Knows Your Name/
Might As Well Call Me LiL-Flip, The Way I'm Revising Ya Verse, This Game's Over, I Can See Them Now, Already Carrying In Ya Hearse/
My Verbal Anticts, Putting Lyrical Stress On Ya Heart, Verbal Attack, Cerebal Extract, Lyrical MC Sucks Dick, Now Put A Sticky Thread On Dat/
This Kid Has Repitition, Cause He Spits The Same Shit In Each Verse, Also Has Down-Syndrome, That's Why He Don't Do Audio, Much Slurs To Be Dispersed/
Like Black Nazi's, This Kid Is Getting Denied Acceptance,
Getting Laughed At, Everytime He Try's and Ryhme A Sentence/
Go Back, Relapse, Cause Contesting My Skill Will Led To Death, Need A Rest, My Punches To Your Stomach, Got You Lacking Da Breath/
Can't Fuck With The Best, I'm Immortal, You've Stumbled Upon Greatness, Like Elly'N Nes, I'm An Undestructable Emcee, You Just Can't Faze This/
Listen To The Harmony, This Kid Can Crack Up Sum Funny Ass Lines, But Couldn't Centralize A Ryhme, With The Power Off Dope, Surround'N Ya Mind/

Aight....Just Sumthing Small...

~R~

NiCe DroP LyRicaL!
 
Old 04-08-04, 03:00 PM   #6
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This was a pretty good battle........

Lyrical MC: Pretty good. You hit some pretty good personals and flow was on point. I was anticipatin something a little bit better though........

Restricted: Same goes for you. Good personals and I liked the flow..........But I was also lookin for somethin a little better from you. It looks like neither of you guys tried that hard.

Anyway, Someone has gotta win so I chose Restricted for........

Verbally Slay This Cat, Cause All You Spit Is Hot-Air,
Your Ego Is Inflated, On My Level, Bitch Realize, Your Not There!/


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Old 04-08-04, 04:00 PM   #7
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yo cant just do i coin toss to see who wins dawg^^^^^
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Old 04-08-04, 04:02 PM   #8
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yo cant just do i coin toss to see who wins dawg^^^^^
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Old 04-08-04, 04:27 PM   #9
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I just thought that he had the best line in the battle. Since the battle was so close I went by the best line......... Therefore, I gave the win to R
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Old 04-08-04, 05:23 PM   #10
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Aight...

Respect All Votes..

R-1 L-0

Uppin..
 
Old 04-08-04, 05:28 PM   #11
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restricted won no doubt
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Old 04-08-04, 05:32 PM   #12
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it was a good battle both of yall really came strong and di ya thing ya ming

lyrical MC-
punches-9/10
flow-9/10
structue-9/10
vocab-9/10
overall-8/10

re$tricted
punches-10/10
flow-9/10
vocab-9/10
structure-9/10
overall-9/10
vote ^^

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Old 04-09-04, 08:25 AM   #13
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breakdown for lyrical mc:

flow:flow was striaght forward you didn't pull anything out that was amazing but good job still 7/10

volcab:good use here 7/10

punches:some good attacks mainly played ideas but they worked my fav,"Couldn't Sucker Punch Hosting A Plunger," 7/10

overall:really solid verse 21/30

breakdown for restricted:

flow:good job not as solid as in the first couple of weeks in this league but still good 7/10

volcab:amazing throughout the entire verse you dropped a good use of words here best part of the verse 10/10

punches:alittle low this week on anything that really stuck i think best line,"Like Black Nazi's, This Kid Is Getting Denied Acceptance" but aside from that it was pretty open no personals really 6/10

overall:23/30 good verse with a solid flow and amazing use of volcab

vote--restricted better volcab and shit the punches were weak but
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Old 04-09-04, 08:34 AM   #14
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How Did My Verse End Up 23/30......and His 21/30..

And Him Still Get Ya Vote?

LoL...

~R~
 
Old 04-09-04, 08:42 AM   #15
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shit i did it again i don't know i look at the thread name and if i liked the verse i read second i put that name i mixed it up did it last week too i'm changing it don't worry
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