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11-26-04, 02:49 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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Armageddon-Ft. I.Mind, Fi-Del, Lady Fiya, InDeph, Abstrakt
IP: 5043 32F4
The earth in peace for years, barely had any deadly disruption's... But now im livin through the consumption of my homes destruction... Sorrounded by volcanic eruption's, Population at a great reduction.. As if the world was drowning in a ocean of fire, slowly at suction.... Earth's covered of black cloud's, blocking the earth of its sunlight... Pitchblack! No existance of day, won't live no matter how somefight.. Night after night, horrible screams of lost children to bloodshed... From car alarm's to smashing window's, and even love ones dead.. -I.Mind Loved ones dieing in there families hearts, cause of wars Weaponry Going to hospitals hurting in there recovery bed, jeering Surgery Getting the call by the countries sergeant, you tremble in wars Fear Trying not to cry and drop a few tears is hard, when your Near Before going to the wars training camp, you need time for Preparation Its time, you should be in ready formation, perfect Combination Guns in front of your eyes, Its like you cant do nothing, your Defective Assigned to a few objectives, seeing shit in a different Perspective Running from the unknown, were you pointed in the wrong-Direction? All of a son you see 3 enemy soldiers, you must be in the wrong-Section You beat down all 3 enemy soldiers and George Bush, gives ya Nothing Gives you no metal medallion, did you spas and give him a Warning -2x4 Ducking for cover,with luck he will studder,holding back his attack God's seen the worst of this life,so now he must end it at that Future is no longer a vision that is thought. God's not to blame,it's our decision that brought You know the saying give hate and recive it back double We should a learnt to love all and show respect. This is our punishment for time's we showed neglect The smell of death rise's thru the air A shell of breath despise's,but you dont care We gotta do this like soldier's to make it out alive. We once seen vision's of saftey but it's now deprived Looking toward's the sky,a cloud has now arrived But it's not rain,it's dust from the previous explosion Mountain's and hill's are the bearer of corosion Mental and physical state is now down-grading Damn,so this is what it's like,to witness a town fadeing -Fi Del Our bodies have witnessed a whole society shift like silhouettes Wandering souls left to remember what we were forced to forget Now the truth’s upsettin’, you could die in life or just live to die.. U stay idle until ya pride force ya wrongs exclaiming it’s right.! If there’s an Almighty, then will He shield the evil with a truce?! Or return us to ashes, our roots, while He terminates the dispute Yet confused we view a dent but this world’s revolving a bruise! so-called Mother Nature abandoned her garden by plantin’ the tools.. Laws are broken rules, judging fallen beliefs-dispiriting individuals But it’s quite typical for wits of the misunderstood to be ridiculed!!! Religious battles are pitiful cuz only 1 should survive, others vanish y preach idioms? We should all be askin’, what’ll help lift the caskets?! Can we purge the last, the first evil’s casted out in rough stages to pass Among us all with laughs it’s sad-I strongly sense the end like sulfuric gas -Lady Fiya ..The Fumes hover my eyes and mouth.. I cough and Cry..this counts for a coffen sight? lives are lost..in ever direction..I aint waklin right.. staggering..I tripped over a rock..are you talking christ.. Using your thunderclouds..sorry if its a sin..but damn I'd rather be a sinner then underground..Big sound heard..the bass breaks my earloves..caused by a aimed grenade from indoors..mind over mind Had to think and then force..all my troopers are gone who's left to depend on..CB radio..won't function I just saw a severe deep wound but I won't touch it.. I'm one person..over the cover..theres one hundred.. right now its not if I stay..but with how much pain.. So I said Fuck it..We gotta go someway.. (jumps) -InDeph See Out My Corner, Body Down The Gorge Tourn... For Sure, He's More Honestly Closer To More Scorn... I'd Thought About Dien Off At My Hands Guiled Thin Trauth... But Sins Mouth Sits Open In Line For Suicides Quick Cough... Turn Away And Work My Way Ahead, Onward I Sway... Unsure The Purpose That Works Us, Bread To Die This Way... Look At My Feet Crash At The Debree Benieth My Grief... Eyes Back Up, Lines Reached As I Was Shook By Scenes... Must Of Been Thoulsands Alound In Discust Of The Enemy... Thats Me, In My Croud Of 3 Guns Up To Rebutt Our Fee's... Knew It Was Hopeless With So Few Dudes To Help Shit... But For Every Few Stripped Was Revenged Crews Felt Hit... Glance At My Aponent, Opened His Eyes As I Reach n Choke At Him... Bullits Low So My Knive Seeks To Breach His Whole Abdomen... This Feeling Success, Let My Guard A Split Second To Rest... Hear A Breath, Wip My Arm Left To Guard As He Connected To Chest... -Abstrakt Last edited by Two By Four : 11-26-04 at 04:11 PM. |
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11-26-04, 02:54 PM
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IP: 3240 794D
dopeness..
shit read it all before you crit..please.. -Indeph
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11-26-04, 02:55 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 5043 32F4
yeah weerd to what indeph said everyone came hot on this drop...
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11-26-04, 02:58 PM
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IP: 28AD 5545
Daaaaym, Shit Was Pretty Dope...
I Kept Picturing This As A Wu-Tang Music Video... Like In The Middle Of A War With The Camera And Perspective Switching... This Came Out Nicer Then I Thought It Would... Big Ups To 2x4 For Putting This Together... .One. |
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11-26-04, 03:02 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 5043 32F4
thanks...yea i dont mind doing this...but peopel gotta read it all...the only way you learn off these dope topical cats...and ya man i pictured it the same way ahha
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11-26-04, 04:05 PM
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Whys That?
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IP: 5285 DC82
*edit*
upping Last edited by "fi-del" : 11-26-04 at 04:15 PM. |
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11-26-04, 04:17 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 5043 32F4
weerdizzle...coem on you hoes that dont leave feed we havent got 1 feed yet..
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11-26-04, 04:24 PM
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IP: 2CF0 0E03
nice drop man felt the flow rhyme scheme and topic sick overall im new to this shyt hit me up and let me know whats good http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=162167
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11-26-04, 06:47 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 5043 32F4
weerdizzle.........
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11-27-04, 02:29 AM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 5043 32F4
weerdizzle.........
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11-27-04, 04:30 AM
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~Break Bred or Play Dead~
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IP: DF7A EE2B
*Hands claps all around room*
Hot ....Hot...Hot ...Nuff Said...
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11-27-04, 09:25 AM
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IP: B417 DEF0
this was fire mang...
this is the order i thought it went from best to worse... -Abstrakt -InDeph lad fiya -I.Mind -Fi Del exsclusive * no hate but u had the weakest verse dawg's 4-real it was at the point where i aint even wanna read the whole thing but did just so i wouldnt be a hater.....* 8.0 outta 10....... |
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11-27-04, 09:40 AM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 5043 32F4
^you make me laugh....stop picking on me....who cares if i had the worst atleast i can do better then you...weerdizzle
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11-27-04, 09:43 AM
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mess with me get cooked
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IP: 9ACA 368A
2by4....................................like I Said In The Chat Room...............i Told U So
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11-27-04, 01:46 PM
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IP: 0825 899A
i should start doing topicals.....................................
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