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Old 06-04-05, 07:25 PM   #1
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Strange night(daubs diss)

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It appeared to be just one of em usual days/
I was one my way home,right after gettin laid/
But then some white fat chick with buck teeth/
Ran her flabby ass straight in tha middle of the street/
I purposely hit the gear,sumtin that ugly didn't deserve to live/
But she was so big,that when I hit her,my car began to skid/
I stepped out tha car and saw that the bitch had a necklace/
And it said Lauren on it,so I took it to pawn it at that place/
I search her pockets,found 10 bucks and a envolope/
Written on it was "Fuck U daubs,there's no hope/
Inside the envelope,was a letter and a picture of a white boy/
The boy was daubs,and he was holding with barbie doll/
He was even uglier than the bitch that I just killed/
To see a boy with that much acne,left me standing still/
I ripped the picture up and began reading the letter/
The start of the letter said "To daubs,it's for the better/

"Listen daubs...I hate to be like this but I gotta be direct/
Shelly told me she tried to give ya head,but ya couldn't erect/
And you need to know that ur white,so stop tryna be black/
And just give up rapping as a whole,cause your whack/
I really feel thaT ur acne is hideous and needs to be treated/
I know you might be cryin like a bitch by now,but keep reading it/
See I want a real man.not no sensitive white acne crazy nerd like you/
So I'm saying this shit really clear to you daubs...Fuck U/"

Afterward I ripped the letter up and went straight to mi casa/
Put on porn while listening to a CD while it plays trinidad tasa/~1~
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Old 06-04-05, 07:32 PM   #2
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you are wack...
why go on about someone dead you prick...
expect a diss.
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Old 06-04-05, 07:36 PM   #3
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Cause that someone dead was someone you cried about on the net.Go head....make one bout me....I'll just keeping coming back.
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Old 06-04-05, 07:39 PM   #4
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but your shit...you battled me, and i absolutely whored you...

so get off my dick

and i didnt cry on the net, i cryed in real life, just think if it were your mother, or wen you older your daughter (if you ever mature). cause it could well be...and i hope it is!
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Old 06-04-05, 07:49 PM   #5
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This isn't right, for real. I mean, I know it's the net and all, but you have to have some morals. And dissing someone who died, is just wrong. Oh, and the OM was bad. Some parts didn't rhyme, flow was choppy, etc...
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Old 06-04-05, 08:04 PM   #6
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That shit was tasteless.from the content alone, i don't think you even deserve feedback.
Not necessarily because you're wack, cos everyone grows as a lyricist as time passes, but because you took the cheapest shot imaginable.
You should be feelin real bad about yourself right about now..........................
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Old 06-04-05, 08:51 PM   #7
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rofl wat da fuck wrong wit you dude you on some real ill shit writin about sum shit like dis its very disrespectful
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Old 06-04-05, 09:00 PM   #8
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yo nigga u got some fuckin nerve sayin that shit.. ur the dumest mutha fucka i eva seen.. u dissin someone who dead, u saw how much he cared bout her.. u gunna get a dis from me too bitch...
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Old 06-04-05, 09:02 PM   #9
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this was kinda foul but then again, all's fair in love and war. i ain't a big fan of daubs eitha but i wouldn't have even gone this low..all i gotta say tho in tha words of madea" u goin to hellll!!!!!"........wow mayne, just........wow
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Old 06-04-05, 09:03 PM   #10
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yeh, i appreaciate...some beef is temp but i have respect for you now^

but fuck him, its ova nothin too called me out and i murked him.
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Old 06-04-05, 09:08 PM   #11
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dis shit was whack...i thought i had shit to learn damn..how u gonna talk about a dead girl and u wanna diss someone cuz they are white im a white female and ill murder your punk ass
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Old 06-04-05, 09:10 PM   #12
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your new, so you know what he hatin on:

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=189893
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Old 06-04-05, 09:18 PM   #13
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but your shit...you battled me, and i absolutely whored you...

so get off my dick

and i didnt cry on the net, i cryed in real life, just think if it were your mother, or wen you older your daughter (if you ever mature). cause it could well be...and i hope it is!



First off,fuck my mother and if I ever have children ....then fuck em too.And second,This verse was a freestyle people.

And fo all you people who wanna judge me.Listen....people have taken advantage of me my whole life.I got no compassion anymore.I hate evereybody in this world.I've fell in love and had my heart broken so many times by insensitive girls.I been picked on and laughed at in elementary and junior high.It's those people who made me who I am.And fo the guy who said I'll go to hell......fuck you.....you don't fuckin know me u prick.If I do go to hell for this shit...I don't give a fuck.My life is already hell/~1~
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Old 06-04-05, 09:22 PM   #14
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daubs i can grasp most of da story from what da other cats wrote
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Old 06-04-05, 09:23 PM   #15
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First off,fuck my mother and if I ever have children ....then fuck em too.And second,This verse was a freestyle people.

And fo all you people who wanna judge me.Listen....people have taken advantage of me my whole life.I got no compassion anymore.I hate evereybody in this world.I've fell in love and had my heart broken so many times by insensitive girls.I been picked on and laughed at in elementary and junior high.It's those people who made me who I am.And fo the guy who said I'll go to hell......fuck you.....you don't fuckin know me u prick.If I do go to hell for this shit...I don't give a fuck.My life is already hell/~1~

soory dats not nebody problem dat ppl took advantage of yo life blah blah blah at dis whining shit so stop bitchin n make ya like betta errybody got problems so wat makes yo problem so fuckin special dat u can dis sum1 cus sum1 special to dem died dats jus disrespectful and rude
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