for "Raw Proof"


I'm too good for you, but training is never useless
you force your rhymes, I do just lyrical abusing
you sound like 50 Cent, calling everyone a retarded
here's what I think of you.... oops I just farted
"yo this Ax dogg is not good at all, he raps like a whore "
I tryin to stay on your level, one level lower..... floor
I'm not a foul-mouthed, but fuck, you fuckin suck niiiiiigggaaaahhhhh
someone Carmelo's age can rap better than ur bitch ass
.... U missed an E on "Befor", that's how you want to go to war?
.... Take a look right on your score, you need deliverance for sure

(nah, that wasn't my best)

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Bizzacckkk

for caramelle

U the rap jorden? wat the fuck?... u need friends...
you played out like a honda civic parked next to a benz....
homie...u stressed...I can tell by your lines....
your scared people wont like your curious george rymes....
u trying too hard...ur lines are tired....
a lil uninspired...like camp-outs wit out the fire...
so slowwww dowwwnnn....b'for I speed up and rip out your face...
ur hi-pitch ass aint nothing but loud music with out the bass...
so calm down homie...you aint making any sense dawgy...
oh shit...let me hurry up and send this...Im still waiting for your girlfriend to call me...

fuck wrong wit you "ass dawg"? u need to chill out....
your sig got sticky finguerz but you probably look like mill house...
these nerds come like herds to get served easily....
I like rap as much as you like breathing....so I guess you could die peacfully....
cuz if it was up to me...ud be underground...like Eazy-E....
but Im cool as long as your girl still believes in me....

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Haaaaa

Lets get serious...

you thought what the hell, 3rd time lucky and dropped again...
The pad dont like you, so when asked to ''dish it out''..
......................................you went and dropped your pen.
I'm in the top 10...Sick-flow, I'll make this dick know..I'm No Vagina'..
Its like you went for the 'asshole'...and ended up a messy-rhymer...
Nope I aint the best of all time...so dont assume I said-it...
be honest now, when you drop a rhyme..
...................................Name one person who read-it?
Nobody ever gave you credit, flow doesnt merit any Feedback..
I'ma have you ''short on arrival'' like you wear shoes on your kneecaps

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This kid think he hard, like he from the gutter, but he soft like melted butter
Seen ya shit and yo rhymes is like porkey pig, new alias should be MC Stutter
Look at this nigga, he wanna talk shit yet he rhymed ass with ass
Even if this nigga were to step in one he'll never have no rhymin class
You just an instigator, raps is shit and all you do is bash
Kids outta call you the 'Garbage Man' cus all you puttin out is trash
You like a fuckin baby, all you do is whine, when there's trouble you run
Think of me as cholesterol, cus you gonna get shook and dropped like big pun

Explain of last two lines:He's like a baby, he whines, until someone sets him straight, then he runs away.Big Pun died of a heart attack, and when niggas usually die like that or get hit with one they start knockin things over and fall, and cholesterol is like a Natural Killa.



yo dawg you cant be diisen you aint even listen
il come flyin and hit you wit my fist straight on come
on you can do better then that or can you il ban
you just like your rhymen its bad it makes me sad too
see these words not bein used right ok listen i no that
wen you read this your gonn get mad but you aint a gansta
ur flingin out these word like you dont care there bear
i care watch wat your sayin im payin your layin
on your back wen im finished wit you il listen to you first
but then il have to burst my spiritual rhymes on your virtual minds
its a disrace look at your face wel thats it for now you really dunno how take it easy dont be sleasy yo you were easy peasy

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This kid think he hard, like he from the gutter, but he soft like melted butter
Seen ya shit and yo rhymes is like porkey pig, new alias should be MC Stutter
Look at this nigga, he wanna talk shit yet he rhymed ass with ass
Even if this nigga were to step in one he'll never have no rhymin class
You just an instigator, raps is shit and all you do is bash
Kids outta call you the 'Garbage Man' cus all you puttin out is trash
You like a fuckin baby, all you do is whine, when there's trouble you run
Think of me as cholesterol, cus you gonna get shook and dropped like big pun

Explain of last two lines:He's like a baby, he whines, until someone sets him straight, then he runs away.Big Pun died of a heart attack, and when niggas usually die like that or get hit with one they start knockin things over and fall, and cholesterol is like a Natural Killa.



yo dawg you cant be diisen you aint even listen
il come flyin and hit you wit my fist straight on come
on you can do better then that or can you il ban
you just like your rhymen its bad it makes me sad too
see these words not bein used right ok listen i no that
wen you read this your gonn get mad but you aint a gansta
ur flingin out these word like you dont care there bear
i care watch wat your sayin im payin your layin
on your back wen im finished wit you il listen to you first
but then il have to burst my spiritual rhymes on your virtual minds
its a disrace look at your face wel thats it for now you really dunno how take it easy dont be sleasy yo you were easy peasy

Its hard to tell who your dissin...clean up ya act...
verse is like Murderin mobsters, ya straight whacked!..
lets make a ''pact''..you hang up the mic and I'll Go Easy
I'm like a pimp to a prostitue..
......................................The way ya hoe ''needs-me''
I just assume you got a bitch, cos you are a bitch...
and we all know lesbians will just ''fall for any tit''
Puns? yup..so many hit..in slow motion like a rocky-fight
I wish you could back up your words..
.....................................but your just cocky, right?...
I got it on lock 'n sight..so when I cock this Nine...
Your hit & with arms spread like its 'Quarter past Nine'*
I thought of one line...that beats your Twenty at me...
Dont worry if your minds tired..
.......I got rhymes that'll give you PLENTY OF SLEEP (Your dead )


*= quarter past nine lol...the hands on a clock would be facin left and right like arms spread out, namean?..

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It’s a fact Battling me is just 2 risky
I’ll even Jack Daniels for his Tennessee whiskey
Hitting you with punches til you’re head-hurts
You aren’t gangster, the only hood you ever seen was on the back of a sweat-shirt
You couldn’t spit sharp punches if you were a knife eater
Plus you show off nothing impressive, like skinny kids rocking wife beaters
You’re right; the flow is troublesome who taught you how 2 write?
It looks like you typed your shit in the dark without the help of lights
I take battling serious, for me this is no competition
But I’m forced 2 listen 2 you prattling on about your mundane compositions
With all do respect I think you fucking suck!
Pardon my ingenious remark
I’m just ingenuous when I talk

You can spit till you dry up, carmel still aint shit to me/
I'll stop wrecking rv when he stop searching for newbies/
your rapstyle is all twisted, keep spell check witcha'/
ur shits all stuck together like magazines with dirty pictures/
and just like big daddy kane...I dont see u around nigga/
cuz u so sick ...Shiiet...I might as well put you in the ground nigga/

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..

^^^^

The style that your fuckin’ with I bet ain’t even yours
The original sucked 2 begin with, but you made it worse
Basically facin’ me, kid you’re a fuckin’ idoit
You call those punchlines, not a single one hit me yet
You need 2 put forth a better effort, or are you tring 2 fail?
Did you know they don’t make white-out in 5 gallon pails?

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call me ice cause im so cold kid
but im heat when i spit son
ill diss u for no motive
im the only sick one mcs i just rip um
im just a slick dun, hot is how my shit comes
mill u whacker than the nigga u bit that shit from
u the only idiot your rap skillz i pity it
when i spit i do a fly job wit the dialog this fool wants to try the god
this niggaz punches couldnt swing if the where ty cobbs

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Your Defense Is Offensive the Opposite of Impeccable
I Show Imperialism, You Lack Great Strength in Battle
You have nothing, na-da, zip you are dismissed
have a seat take a sit… You’re the constipation I’m the shit
With a Camouflage jacket on you’re not easily seen
Remaining inconspicuous, do to battle fatigue
Lockness is the type to keep a promise, but doesn't follow through with threats
They say shit disses are a subliminal forms of respect

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ill be dismissin u
shits so clever u wont know i was dissen u
shit i got plenty what u in-ten-did i make in twenty
nigga u aint a mill u is a fucken penny
dont even temp me dont make me start spitting on u
go wild and flipping on u, you a toilet and im shitting on u...............................bitch

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My Punch Lines Are Sharp as Tack
The Best Punch Line You Ever Wrote Ended Up Being Your Last
You'll never catch Recognition, cos you’re a fuckin’ nobody
Your style is bullshit dog, do to the lack of ORIGINALITY
Your whole style is laughable
When you get on the Mic retarded kids point fingers and laugh-at-you
This kid is a carbon copy a wanna be Can-i-bus
You call those punch lines? When are you going 2 land a fist?

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