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View Poll Results: RATE THIS COLAB 1-10
1 1 5.26%
2 0 0%
3 0 0%
4 0 0%
5 0 0%
6 3 15.79%
7 6 31.58%
8 4 21.05%
9 3 15.79%
10 2 10.53%
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Old 07-04-04, 08:56 PM   #1
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Post Mjust23 And Str8 Hood West Coast Colab

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Mjust23 And Str8 Hood Present

"cali Reppin"

Verse 1(mjust23)
Yo,this Cali, The Spot Were I Reside//
Matter Whos Rappin We All Got Flow,thats Sometin U Cant Hide//
Im The Lebron Of Rap, Oakland Throwback Fitted Black Hat//
Bundled 3 Carts Of D-money In Ma Lap//
Cali's Flow Is Hot From The Wood To The Bay//
Me And Str8 Hood Got "cali Love" As The New Pac And Dre//
This Song Is Deticated To Ma Cali Niggas//
Us Rollin Up On 24's Countin 6 Figures//
We Got The East,south And Midwest In A Pic Frame//
Our Flow Is More Fitted Than Spike Lee At A Knick Game//
The Punches Are Hot, More Heated Than Wen We Pop//
Got More Rocks Than 50 Got Shot//
Cali's Hot, Call Us Microwave Town//
Appointed King Of Da Wood, Mack Pass Me The Crown//
Flows Like Im Pitchen 5 And 0 At The Mound.

Hook(2x)
Wen Pop Rivals................u Cali Reppin
Wen U C-walk Fo'life........u Cali Reppin
Wen U Fuck A Bitch Everyday.........u Cali Reppin
Wen U Got The West On Lock...........u Just Str8 And M

Verse 2(str8 Hood)
Wat State U From? Kid I Stay On The Best Side//
Strapped Wit The Tek I Keep It Fresh On The West Side//
Bay Area Vallejo To The Wood//
I Used To Roll Wit E-40 And Them Clowns In The Hood//
Mjust21 Picked Me Up To Do Some Work On This Collab Shyt//
He Knew This Kid Could Flow Like Them Wrinkles On A Fat Chick//
Im A Pimp I Leave Them Trix For The Kids//
Got A Grip On That Dough I Gots To Rolls When I Dip//
California Cats Got That Flow It Aint No Joke Its For Real//
This Kid Is Spittin Lyrics So Sick Im Gettin Everybody Ill//
Im Attacking The Other Sides Of The Globe Like An Assasian//
Ready To Take U Out Like Jfk If U Actin//
Up To Me Bow Down To The Kings//
Cube And E Did It Before But We Back On The Scene.

Hook(2x)

Verse 3(mjust23)
In Case U Didnt No, We Run This Game//
Wen The West Spits, It Tends To Inflict Pain//
East Coast Claims Gold But I Cant Even Remember Half They Names//
Midwest Wit No Fire,all Flows Is Lame//
South Is Still Fuckin Tryin To Garner Fame//
I Dont Care If U Dont Like Us Cause We Still Gonna Rep That Name//
Thats W-e-s-t In Ya Grill//
We Consalt Fake Rappers Like Oprah Consalts Dr.phil//
(str8 Hood)
When U Feel The Flow Get Ya,u Know That The West Hit Ya//
Wicked Shit Spittin Scriptures Like Jesus Be Down Wit Ya//
All These East Coast Cats In Love Singin They Songs//
Wen We Rappin This Game Aint Were These Fakers Belong//
The South Doing Ok But They Style Smells Like My Buttcrack//
Well Im Packin 9's These Fags Stay Getting They Fudge Packed//
And U Know That We Both Sick Kinda Like Gray Rancid Fish//
And The Way I Hold The Blade Will Have U Break Dancin Bitch
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Old 07-04-04, 09:09 PM   #2
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mmmmmm....never gave feedback on an collab before...

Aight i thought it was nice....had a good flow to it...but i wasnt really likein tha hook...but overall it was decent...god work...i'd give it a 6/10
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Old 07-04-04, 09:15 PM   #3
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nice spit..i wasnt feelin da hook but overall u had a good flow and nice rhyme scheme,

We Got The East,south And Midwest In A Pic Frame//
Our Flow Is More Fitted Than Spike Lee At A Knick Game//
^nice bar..liked da flow.. i give u a 7/10 on dat verse

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Old 07-04-04, 10:23 PM   #4
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nice spit... i was feelin it pretty good.... not bad verse, this was your best line:

Bay Area Vallejo To The Wood//
I Used To Roll Wit E-40 And Them Clowns In The Hood//
Mjust21 Picked Me Up To Do Some Work On This Collab Shyt//
He Knew This Kid Could Flow Like Them Wrinkles On A Fat Chick//

nice... i give ya a 8 outta 10... not bad hommie
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Old 07-04-04, 10:26 PM   #5
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This Was Nice Both Had Good flows Juss elan how 2 even yo linez out..Kinda fucked up yo verse but 8/10 Pretty niCe...
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Old 07-04-04, 11:14 PM   #6
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Old 07-05-04, 02:11 AM   #7
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come on yo. hit us wit more feedback
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Old 07-05-04, 03:59 AM   #8
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It was ah'ight, rhymes was kinda basic, ya flow was on point tho an structure was tight but I did not like chorus at all, but it was a good concept jus could have been better lyrically.
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Old 07-05-04, 04:10 PM   #9
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Old 07-05-04, 04:16 PM   #10
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ok rhymes the flow was tight chorus was ok i give it a 7
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Old 07-05-04, 04:38 PM   #11
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i'm feelin tha colab, da Wood and da Bay! i'm feelin tha chorus, nice hook and tha flows had a good structure to it.
i give it a sev-7
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Old 07-05-04, 07:18 PM   #12
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it was pretty nice, i was feeln it, you both did a good job on that shyt, keep it up, Peace.

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Old 07-05-04, 07:42 PM   #13
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hmm....it was a pretty good collaboration to me but...........................
most of your lines weren't evened & not good syllable count

7/10.
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Old 07-05-04, 11:35 PM   #15
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