iight 10 lines

you know the rules if not read'em!!

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hit this up guys plz.. http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118165 only need 2 votes.. I will hit this up for sure when it done!

check in you have to post first and check in before you post

Uppin For These guys to Spit This should be a blockbuster!!

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i would but this pussy decided it would be best if he didnt add another loss to his record

^^Ha ha ha...ok check it

THIS FAGGOT PUSSY NIGGA GETTIN RAPED IN FUCK CULTS/
CUZ DUTCH SCHULTZ, JUST CLUTCH HIS BUTT & SUCKS FOLKS/
SHIT HE SUCKS PULPS, & I AINT TALKIN BOUT "O.J.”/(ORANGE JUICE)
ILL MURDER YOU AND YA WIFE & I AINT TALKIN BOUT O.J./(SIMPSON)
BANG AT YA CRIB TILL YA CORPSE~ IS~GONE/
AKADEMEKZ KEEPS "KIDS IN HIS MOUTH" LIKE AN ORPHAN~HOME/
OF COURSE~MY~THRONE IS THE TYPE TO TORCH~YA~BONES/
LEAVE YOU WIT NO SENSE OF LIVING LIKE A TORTURED~CLONE/
YOU ALL ON YA VOTERS DICKS...WELL IM BURNIN~YA~BITCH/
YOU CANT "RIDE BY YA SELF" LIKE A LEARNERS~PERMIT/

10 lines..you?

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Uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!

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Imma take this "peter pan" put him between a 2 breads and eat this man for lunch
battling me? you must be high in the clouds again cause you could "neverland" a punch/you speak that weak shit and then you try to diss me/how can i take you seriously when your a character from disney/im freeing on the keys and somehow im still sick/ i give you a whole day to pre-write and you post that bullshit/despite anything i read on your profile/its only after you tell em your name that girls smile/
look kid you shook cuz i got this took/this guy couldnt beat me if i was "captain hook"

next time dont take a whole day

next time dont take a whole day[/QUOTE]

Stop Swaying^

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dont forget to vote and drop a link so i can return the favor otherwise i wont look for your battle so remember to drop a link after voting

AKADEMEKZ - was pretty good flowed alright and had a couple good punches.

Best Line: Imma take this "peter pan" put him between a 2 breads and eat this man for lunch
battling me? you must be high in the clouds again cause you could "neverland" a punch

Worst Line: despite anything i read on your profile/its only after you tell em your name that girls smile/

Peter PAN- wasnt feelin it to much need to step up a lil more and work on the flow and punches.

Best Line: None

Worst Line: THIS FAGGOT PUSSY NIGGA GETTIN RAPED IN FUCK CULTS/
CUZ DUTCH SCHULTZ, JUST CLUTCH HIS BUTT & SUCKS FOLKS

OVERALL - was an alrifht battle but I got to give it to Akad for bettr flow and punches, work on in tho Peter you will get better, just need to add a few more punches and make it flow better.

Vote - Akad

hit this up plz I alrdy won once and one vote didnt count so explain yourself good then vote AND get it closed.. http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118203

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TAKE MY ADVICE FROM PEOPLE FROM CANADA nd FUCK YA LYFE

akademiks got this even though his structure is off bad he had nice punchs and didnt used played out recyled lines but you need to work on your structure badly and peter pan waht a name you need to get creative and use better wordplay if you want your punchs to coem out better

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Flow:ake
punches:ake
structureeter
multis:ake

Vote=ake

akedemics had this battle won thanx to the flow along with the nice punches... nuff said

wtf Peter that was wack but still Aked won with his Overall Flow of the Battle.

Aked=6/10
Peter=2/10

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structure peter
multis:ake

Vote=ake he came with harder punches good comebacks and nice personals u coulfd work on ur vocab and personals peter ur punches didnt hit as hard work on personals vocab multis ok verse from both

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