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Old 02-12-04, 03:58 PM   #1
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We The ILLest

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"We The ILLest"_Feat._A-Ron
This Is Originally a Solo Track ... But He Loved The Beat So I Let Him Hop On It For a Little Remix Type Of Deal ....

1st - Hook - 3rd Verse = Me ...
2nd Verse = A-Ron

Feedback Is Appreciated ...

EDIT ...
I Replied To Blunt MC's "No Love" .. And .. KJ-52's "47 PopStars" ...

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Old 02-12-04, 04:05 PM   #2
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lmao.......YA SUCK ya r weak wanna be rappers.....N.A.D. iz way betta the niggaz we battle r left the way we r named the DieNasty....we 5 niggaz.....Me+Pretty Thug,J.P.,J.Q.,Freddy G., J3ST3R......Lyrically Killin Niggaz....I Got proof we nasty instant message me on aim or aol my sn is PRKillaLipz
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Old 02-12-04, 04:15 PM   #3
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WTF! U Talkin' Bout Ya Crew For ... Quit Freepostin' Bout Ya Whack Ass Crew U Homo .... DieNasty? Wow How Originial ... Takin' Da Roc's Name .. Smh @ That ... Go Suck Off Ya Fag Crew From N.A.D ....
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Old 02-12-04, 05:34 PM   #4
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lmao... yo, this bitch an' his wannabe yonkers hillbilly ass fuckin' crew ain't shit to diverse entertainment... shit... like who the fick is they... no one heard-a them bitches b4.. fuck it.. ky-ill nice track bro.. 1
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Old 02-12-04, 07:36 PM   #5
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Your flow is dope men.....but you could of put some more emotions men
lyrics are also dope and your chorus is okay
Nice shit men
but the second guy is really struggleling men
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Old 02-13-04, 10:29 PM   #6
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Uppin' For Feedback ... No Bullshit Feedback Either.. Quit Freepostin'...
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Old 02-13-04, 11:28 PM   #7
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*Deletes some of that kids idiotic freeposts*

I actually clicked your link and read "We the ILLest" and was like.. "these kids are getting more and more retarded by the minute." So I reluctantly played your song, and I actually liked it. Beat was decent. Hook was kinda catchy. Quality was above average. Nice track. Kinda shit I'd collab to.

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Old 02-14-04, 06:31 PM   #8
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This was pretty deecent.... I'm thinking the hook only worked cause of the delivery. You came pretty nice but you sound like so many other guys out there... you sound pretty good but not like whoa this stands out type thing.

I was feeling your first verse more than your second cause I think you switched up to a slower flow or something that didn't seem too natural. Still it was a nice drop!
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Old 02-15-04, 02:00 AM   #9
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dont worry about it ky..rap critics.fuck'em.do u.this was koo son.holla at me for watevah..



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Old 02-15-04, 02:36 PM   #10
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lol @ the dj clue like intro.. ok moving on..im not really feeling that hook homie..you ride the beat.. but in kinda weird way it threw me off at first.. but its a unique steez... yeah i felt the flow someimes and sometimes not as much.. i think maybe its just that it sounds better to me with this steez when your either flipping a multi laden rhyme scheme or spiutting faster.. because when you rapped slower with a simpler rhyme scheme at points.. it just didnt sound totally right to me.. it may just be adjusting to your style.. delivery was cool.. could be improved some but its solid.. real nice at certain parts in fact.. overall this was a solid drop homie.. keep it up

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Old 02-15-04, 04:38 PM   #11
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hook was tight... flow was tight.. n we should collab some time.. ur delivery was tight.. voice is good.. shits pretty ill.. feelin this..

if u wanna collab.. hit me up, on aim @ hotaznp1mp ...

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Old 02-15-04, 05:28 PM   #12
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Yaa, get some emotion behind the flow and add some structure and you should be fine.
Try some different subject matter in the future.
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Old 02-15-04, 08:16 PM   #13
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^ Aight Ya'll ... Thanx For The Feedback ... Ya I Need Some Emotion (Lol) .... I Appreciate It ... IF Ya'll Have Songs I'll Be Sure To Peep THem....
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Old 02-15-04, 08:50 PM   #14
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I aint gonna front songs aiight. but son u were dissin my voice, i think that was kinda hypocritical. lyrics sound aiight 2. y'all keep it up. hopefully i can hear sum more in da future.
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Old 02-16-04, 01:27 AM   #15
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listnin....aight, nice lyrix and flow playa
only thing lackin here iz emotion, but after a while you gonna get it and you'll be tight....overall i waz feelin thiz track playa.....keep it up
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