This song is funny as fuck to me.. mad diiirty lyrics..

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/9/bluntsmokinmusic.htm
^"I KiLL a Man.."-- (and do it again..)

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lol..

nigga trippin in the start of shit..

1 thing i dont like about ya voice is that half-whiney voice inflection u do in ya rhymes..
that Insane Clown Posse typa voice shit that I hate...

other than that..

ya quality is always solid...
lyrics are always nice..

ya delivery and shit just doesn't convey the same thing...

its the kinda thing u can only get better with practice...

-gets mad annoyed @ the laughin...

i wanted to stab ya ass in the throat...

regardless..

keep building...

lol... that was the whole point of the laughing... and the voice thing is jus' my voice, i ain't one of those wanna be black white kids, i know i'm white and i don't give a fuck what people think.. i don't understand what y'all say'n bout my delivery, that's my type of emotion, i meant i'm bein' real with it, say what i think, and say it how i feel it.. what more ya want from me... lol

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lol...

u str8..

and u keep it real..

cant h8 on ya for that son...

keep doin ya thing..

hey playa, in my opinion, that was some wacked ass hit you got there, i just thought it fuckin sucked... But hey, thats me not you

what's wit all these new little fuckin' text bitches.. comin' up an' hatin' on talent... until i hear u rap u got no opinion

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the way i see it..the track, pretty dope..
at first when i was listening i was like..
blunt ass crazy, lyrics was pretty tight..
the beat was pretty dope.. flow was on
point..but damn.....that laughing at the
end got on my nerves ...other than
that it was a good drop.. a lil scary lol
but a good drop..overall.. bout 8.7/10

good job though

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Hook Is Simple ... But Hot ... I'm Feelin' It ... Lyrics Were All Sadistic And Shit ... Flow Was Good .... Beat Was Tight .... Simple But Still Nice....

Overall Nice Track Blunt ...

Homo Laughing = Bad.


Your Flow Overall Sound = Good.


Just stay away from that laugher.. lol Nice track, but I didn't really care for the hook. Oh, and I thought you'd have a deeper voice. Those WERE you in those pics of you right? Fake ass Mike Tyson.

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lmao.. fake ass mike,,, wtf?... ya that was me in the pics smokin' on the kronik... good looks i'll peep ya tracks tomorrow when i wake up

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ha..you were on some necro type shit here....the laughing although a little annoying accually helped with what you were about to spit, so it worked in my opinion, you spit some crazy lines in there you sick fuck..lol...the hook could use a little work...the delivery was real original..don't listen to anybody, keep it how you like it...and keep recording'......
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heres one quick audio I freestyled for a battle a while back..you can peep and give me feedback if you want ev..
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/s...groundmusic.htm

yo the sogg was ill overall, but the laughter sounded gay man, take thta out but overall pretty good

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ready to smack up all those nigga's that running there lip"

*listening*


the laughing is gay..seriously...the beat is decent...hook is aiight..it does
sound like ICP...again wit the laughing...good flow...u kinda flow like E-40
a little bit...

the hook is strait like i said..but not really cathcy u know...ur lyrics is
pretty good...

oh shit...that laughing..i think thats gonna be in my nightmares...jesus
christ...

not bad...keep up the good work

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lol... yo respex... i'm peepin' your shit now...

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