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Old 10-20-04, 12:44 AM   #1
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when we were lovers/ oreo ft. the lovely ~Miss Avy~

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the lovely ~Miss Avy~

So ya wanna know where I am? Well here's my answer
I'm sick of shit, I'm sick of you, just call it cancer
I too reminisce about the times we been through together
Even in the best weather, nothing can and will be forever
True, we been together sometime, but our spark can't be reflamed
Thinking everyday about us, but no knowledge from it gained
Cuz we are history, we're nothing but a chapter in eachother's life
My mind has bled from what's been said, and I'll never be your wife
What went wrong and what happened, we used to be close
I chose to leave you, I left crying or so you supposed
You got too understand, when I fall I fall, don't hold out your arms
I don't want too attack you, no use of any fire arms
Get out of my life, I never want too see you
The plans we drew, it's nothing boo, yes it's true.

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Please boo just leave me alone cuz we'r nothing to eachother
We used to be close like sister and brother instead we were lovers
Leave me alone boo and quit contacting me
Imma tell you how it is, we're not supposed too be

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our house aint a hime no more since you aint here/
rather be alone,and you made that loud and clear/
i sit back and reminise bout the times spent together/
whisperin in my ear hopin and wishin it'll last forever/
been together along time,caint we make it longer/
erything we been though 'pose to make us stronger/
when times got a lil hetic,im he one to have your bak/
our love is lost, i caint accept it, i goota have ya bak/
you use to love when id lay you down/
now you screaming for me and i caint hear a sound/
we were made for each otherbut i dont understand/
i wana catch you when you fall but i dont know were you stand/

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so where you at ma, plaese wont you let me know/
i gave away alot but you i just wont let ya go/
tell me wat it is ma, tell me how its 'pose to be/
your far away but it still feels like you close to me/

Please boo just leave me alone cuz we'r nothing to eachother
We used to be close like sister and brother instead we were lovers
Leave me alone boo and quit contacting me
Imma tell you how it is, we're not supposed too be

so where you at ma, plaese wont you let me know/
i gave away alot but you i just wont let ya go/
tell me wat it is ma, tell me how its 'pose to be/
your far away but it still feels like you close to me/
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Old 10-20-04, 12:46 AM   #2
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get at it yall.....
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Old 10-20-04, 12:58 AM   #3
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^yes please leave feedback!
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Old 10-20-04, 01:43 AM   #4
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Fucken eh that was pretty good Props str8 to you all a little soft for my taste but if that was LL cool J singin it Man that dude is cool. PEACE ***** stars!!!!!
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Old 10-20-04, 04:31 AM   #5
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i aint into all that bubble gum shit
but str8 drop
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Old 10-20-04, 02:37 PM   #6
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its good just enterin different territory yo
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Old 10-20-04, 11:24 PM   #7
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^werd.

Thanks for the feedbacks and uppin for some more

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Old 10-21-04, 09:11 AM   #8
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Old 10-22-04, 06:41 AM   #9
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diz wuz iight oreos verse wuz a lil ja rule like, kinda whack but miss avy made up for reos weakness wit a decent drop, it wuz str8, keep em comin
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Old 10-23-04, 12:58 AM   #10
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Gracias for the feedback.... still uppin
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Old 10-23-04, 04:34 AM   #11
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yo nice shit yall.. i dunno if it was Ja.. although he do be gettin soft... i think it was more of an Usher kinda style
hooks couldve been just a lil betta.. but they were good
verses were str8...
all together 8/10
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Old 10-24-04, 05:29 PM   #12
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^Thankss man for tha feedback.

Uppin for more.
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Old 10-24-04, 10:47 PM   #13
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man dont ever compare me with ja, but thanks for the feedback
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Old 10-26-04, 02:00 PM   #14
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Old 11-01-04, 03:55 PM   #15
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Good Shit Oreo And Miss Avy I Was Thinking ABout Doing SomeThing Like This With A Female Mc But Uh I Dont Think They Wanna Collab With Epical Word Up Good Shit Thought Miss Avy Had Some Good Lines Oreos Was Aiight Word Up Do Sound Like Some Ja-Rule Lines Good Open Mic7/10
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