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Old 11-26-09, 11:49 PM   #1
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New Track Who I Be &Love letter

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this song is called love letter..i plan on making a music video for this..so tell me what u think
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Old 12-04-09, 04:04 PM   #2
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like that u got a girl to sing on the hook, aint heard any under ground girl rappers, surprising, i liked it alright, ya quality is ruff though fo sure, the adlibs on the hook wit the effect doesn't sound good at all though
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Old 12-09-09, 09:11 PM   #3
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i feel u ..i gotta change that ..your not the first to say that
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Old 12-10-09, 01:11 AM   #4
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listening,hook has really bad quality,lyrics are sick actually the best ive heard from u,def improved,2nd hook sounds pretty sick,qualitys better then the first, girls lyrics are cool dubs are off a little,cool hook though... overall youve got some sick lyrics in the first verse and the quality sounds better then other tracks ive heard from u but youve def improved...cool track......
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Old 12-10-09, 03:55 PM   #5
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i feel u ..everything u say isnt nothing i havent heard..i guess i have more motivation now..but thanx i appreciate the pros and cons..
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Old 12-15-09, 04:29 PM   #6
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can i get more support
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if u leave feedback on other peoples songs youll get more feedback
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