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Old 07-23-05, 10:18 PM   #1
knaledg1
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Lightbulb I run Rap verse (Ft. One Mic)

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Wha's it gonna be 'lil nigga... I run Rap Verse,
Even when I ain't around 'lil nigga... I run Rap Verse,
You can say wha'chu want 'lil nigga... I run Rap Verse,
And when I'm through 'lil nigga... I'll run Rap Verse.

(1st Verse) Knaledg1
I get up... stare at tha ceilin',
Grab my rhyme book and write how I be feelin',
'Til I think about you niggas than my mind start reelin',
Wheelin' different ideas to keep y'all bitches from stealin,
Newbies to vets... they all hatin' my style,
Except my crew and a few they embracin' me wild,
I can battle wit' tha best I don't need a vest,
But you might need a priest when I put you to rest,
More faster than tha Flash turnin' yer' bone to ash,
I'll outlast any cat once they under my grasp,
Cerebral assassin, ski mask and gloves,
I'll fuck yer' ass up and show you no love.

Wha's it gonna be 'lil nigga... I run Rap Verse,
Even when I ain't around 'lil nigga... I run Rap Verse,
You can say wha'chu want 'lil nigga... I run Rap verse,
And when I'm through 'lil nigga... I'll run Rap Verse.

(2nd Verse) One Mic
Yo man knaledg, you jus’ ripped the mic
Listen tight, fuck with us you get dissed or sniped
Both of us are always known to be keepin it raw
Im a harsh lyrical villain just as lethal as jaws
Ey yo, its one mic, go ahead and check my game
I spit wit extra flame, leave you depressed and vexed with pain
Yo im on top, I aint never messin around
Im layin it down, spittin whilst im sprayin my rounds
….Battle us you faced with the best
you’ll have major regrets, i cause serious harm like Jason x
listenin to us, you’ll never be faced wit boredom
cuz my initials are the same as the name of this forum
bustin quick, man we jus’ got tonz of this shit
the aim of this collab is to see rappers stumblin quick
im seein it through to the end of the song
this wack?? No the definition for this is "lyrical bomb".

Wha's it gonna be 'lil nigga... I run Rap Verse,
Even when I ain't around 'lil nigga... I run Rap Verse,
You can say wha'chu want 'lil nigga... run Rap verse,
And when I'm through 'lil nigga... I'll run Rap Verse.

(3rd Verse) Knaledg1
Like One Mic said this a "lyrical bomb",
We dictate des words like sons of saddam,
I don't care if you don't like us but we gettin' respect,
Or else you gettin checkmated in this game of chess,
I don't even need to waste time on you fuckas,
'Cause I'll send you down tha drain like Mario Brothas.

Ha ha!!! Yea!... One Mic!!!... Knaledg1!!!....
Doin' it fo' y'all niggas who luv us or hate us!!!....
I know... I know... That's a big claim!!!... Well Fuck it!!!....
M.M.M. reppin' in hea!!!.... Anger Management!!!... I don't know...
So I'm reppin' myself fo' tha time bein'... Yo, Pa Rappa!!!...
I didn't fo'get you nigga... I'm comin'!!!....

Wha's it gonna be 'lil nigga... I run Rap Verse,
Even when I ain't around 'lil nigga... I run Rap Verse,
You can say wha'chu want 'lil nigga... I run Rap Verse,
And when I'm through 'lil nigga... I'll run Rap Verse.



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Old 07-24-05, 12:09 AM   #2
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You definetly do not run rapverse...
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Old 07-24-05, 01:13 AM   #4
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You don't even know the codes, how can you run it?

You suck mister,
Sorry to burst your bubble like a blister

^^That is better then your whole verse. Work on your material fore you claim you run something or the best.
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Old 07-24-05, 01:14 AM   #5
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Old 07-24-05, 02:46 PM   #6
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Look I don't care wha' y'all say cuz you just mad at wha' I wrote. But if you cats would read my hook good enuff to comprehend (unless yous just plain retarded) at tha end it says "I'll" run Rap Verse, Which means I will run rap verse, not that I run it now... Stupid muthafuckas I swear and y'all calim to be lyricists? That's why my shit "tha Teacher" finst to be published in books all ova tha united states and y'all still just writin' on yer' computer screens hopin' to get somehwhere... but I ain't mad at'cha, you's got yer' opinions and I gots mine. Now all I wanted was fo' y'all to tell me wha y'all think bout tha lyrics and shit. Don't trip though y'all wants to doubt tha kid... tha kid strike back. Promise.
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Old 07-24-05, 05:34 PM   #7
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yo man i thought that woz pretty tite actually, cuz i always luk for a nice flow in OM's nd this had a decent flow to it. im feelin this definetely. 8/10
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Old 07-24-05, 05:39 PM   #8
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It was nice if you where spittin bout your last 24 hours...but as you are speakin on runnin rap verse...eh' With that verse"I dont think so,Its unlikely!"


Still I give you 6.5/10

cuz your structure was easy ta read,and you had sum multi's an your bold statement you made was-priceless.(really,Priceless=Broke.)

no hate just being a critic.
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Old 07-24-05, 05:58 PM   #9
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It's all good. That's wha' I look fo' niggas who keep it real. (My time has just begun). One
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Old 07-24-05, 06:00 PM   #10
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Lmao................
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