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Old 07-31-05, 11:13 PM   #1
Payn
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Lyrical Nightmare

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...here's anotha piece 4 y'all 2 kick back & observe a demonic thinkin' type nigga...

[verse 1]

Itz the lyrical nightmare you wont be sleepin~for~weeks//
Cuz if u do ull see me creep~in~your~sleep teachin~ya~whore~things//
That shes neva seen before,and ud have to sit there and watch~it//
Take pics leave em in yo pocket aint no fuckin way that u can stop~it//
Yo rhymes a whole bunch of jus noises jus like when the chimes~shook//
And u culdnt rip lyrics if u were trynna tear up my rhyme~book//
Have you sayin "im~shook" cuz u scared cuz im hauntin~ya~dreams//
You culdnt even get this scared if yo ass was watchin~the~ring//
You worthless my ninjah, das why imma kill ya while you asleep//
Jus like crougar did to jason cut ya head off wont hear a~peep//
Cuz i creep yahhhh like TLC all thru ya nightmares//
Have you crazy screamin fo yo moms when shes right~there//
I know imma scary ninjah cuz in battle ime wut like 47 and~three//
Scarin ya auntie have ya runnin thru the woods like you camping//
But u not my ninjah, cuz you jus asleep and deli will haunt ya dreamz//
And ill be Leavin yo jaw open wida den da killa from scream!

[hook]

Itz a nightmare some shit u cant wake up~from//
Itz a nightmare if u survive then then u jus got luck~some//
People dont belive the nightmare well i dare you to go to bed//
You wont wake up the next day family find ya witout ya head!

[Verse 2]

Im stuck in ya head mannnn like some shit that you cant forget//
Leavin you crazy insane mental until suicide youll commit//
Doctors ponder ya death,they find nuttin in ya head or no~blood//
No blood clots or heart attacks stab wounds or bullets from cold~guns//
Cuz no i dont hold~gunz i hold mics a the end theres a sharp~edge//
Stabin ya mic til itz jus a million peaces layin on the carpet//
You shuld jus kill yaself cuz imma foreva torture~you//
I do more then the court~can~do me i got bars about four~for~you//
Have ya bright pale~and~white like old mail~at~night//
You wanna be in jail~das~right but you escapin me failed~all~times//
Dont try to leave me ill find ya cuz ill hear erything you~say//
Go ahead bring a gun i aint scared kill yo ass to day//
Ahem! gotta clear yo throat cuz yu gonna be screamin//
As my lyrics slit ya throat HA you thot u was jus dreamin//
Itz reality kid, no ya dead and layed in the grave//
Rest in Peace you fuckin faggot ya family glad u been slayed!

[hook]

Itz a nightmare some shit u cant wake up~from//
Itz a nightmare if u survive then then u jus got luck~some//
People dont belive the nightmare well i dare you to go to bed//
You wont wake up the next day family find ya witout ya head!
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Old 08-01-05, 12:33 PM   #2
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yo shit was hot man i like da way u flow and shit
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Old 08-01-05, 09:27 PM   #3
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Hot shit bro...

Hook needs work...

Feeling the second verse over the first one, but both were hot
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Old 08-01-05, 11:24 PM   #4
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thanx alot 4 tha feed fellaz 4 real good lookin' & hope i eventually get more on my otha pieces yes
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Old 08-03-05, 08:40 PM   #5
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RTF on my OM freestyle

Its called "Whatever"
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