Homie Can you believe.......These emcees peeved at me
Can you Define Sonning?....Is it One man taking in a seed
And To.... possibly breed, feed and tend to those needs
but .....you might father "creeps" if you raise with speed
Take heed croppution leads to greed there are cheaters
Black folks children of the "cottan"......but did we raise "wife beaters"?
No and our anger is like" heaters" we're concealed wit safty
but when provoked.....were revealed to kill....and take souls that ache me
Definie Sonning?.. Ta confidence geting "stung" like "May- Bees"(maybe)
After ya best drop...The very one u insulted you said u can't take me
Define Sonning? Got you feeling shitty like tissue in crappers
Sonning Me............ is "unheard" like "deaf trinidad rappers"
but......I've fathered so many.....so why Im I bothered with "Trini"
ILL sybliminal spit Turn men to mouse...I won't fuck wit "minie"
Define Sonning? This whole track... and If you kno it's directed
towards you....U mite as well suck it up be a man and respect it
Define Sonning?....Merkage leaving ya very own spits in ya throat
yeah hold it in......Like "Macreep" fan mail It's hard to end on a "good note"


This was kinda a sybliminal track...but meh....feed plz... gotta post my link...

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http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2337676

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word, not bad, punches were subtle, but there, also had a metaphorical outreach as well, didn't focus on just the diss, well done; you have a pretty good handle on structure, how to write, rhyming, flow was inconsistent in areas though, so i guess just work on that, word......keep up man

rtf on the meaning of music in my sig

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It was ight....nice flow in this.Content needs a little more iunteresting factors in it.Conceot for the song is a little ...blah.

yeah hey I DON'T GET CREDIT BITCHES ON THIS SITE WEAK AND SHOW NO ATTITUDE IN THEIR WRITINGS BUT ANYWAY DAMN MAN WHY DO YOU NEED ALL THEM FUCKING WHACK ASS DASHES FOR NOT ALL THAT GOOD I GUESS A RAPPER COULD USE BIT AND PARTS BUT NOT THAT GOOD

......thanx for the feed and MadRapper wtf did u say?...............

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yeah this was directed toward macreep............

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i SAID THIS SHIT RIGHT HERE IS NOT GOOD RAP IF IT WAS THESE WHACK ASS POETRY HEADS ON THIS SITE WOULDN'G GIVE YOU CREDIT

its was str8 man

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what u want beef wit me now man...u must be out yo rabbit ass mind.....don't fuck wit wit me man....

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anyone can spit random dribble that form somewhat of a rhyme scheme....

oh wait, you don't even do that.

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nuff said


MADRAPPER elevate be4 u get laughed off this site

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don't sleep............................

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don;t sleep..................

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