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Old 07-03-04, 02:06 PM   #1
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anutha freestyle----peep this!

IP: E63C BFED

i dedicate this flow, 2 a hoe thats called 'allysa'
bitch died about a month ago, n i really dont miss ha
only reason im ritin this, is cuz i got riters block
so im here 2 rite a flow about a near death plot
whats there, her figure lookin tight, wit a nice smile
but theres a monsta in tha girls head that needs to git let out
she used 2 say she love me, but i don love them hoes
i fucked her once or twice, n she styled my corn rows
that dont mean we partnas right? dont gotta be exclusive
but tha bitch had otha plans, sick of me bein so elusive
she thought that we could make it work n build us a happy home
but im a hustla, i only love sex, money n chrome
sure id settle down if i found tha right one
but allysa couldnt be right, shed answer 0 on 1+1
it wasnt fun, sometimes it was damn annoyin
bitch on my fone every hour, even 4 in tha mornin
i was yawnin, just hung up on another call
then i got tha strangest message on my mobile fone yall
"WAS SUP, THIS ALLY, MY BIG BRUTHA IS GON KILL YOU,
YOU BEEN AVIODIN ME FO TOO LONG, YOU FUKED UP BOO"
that message was whak straight up, but i was high as shit
i called my boys at tha crib, "GET THA FUCK ROUND HERE NIG!"
but before i could say another word i heard a knock on tha door
so i grabbed a tech nine n lent against tha brick wall
"was sup, who is it?" i aksed in a angry tone
i coulda bin more polite bud it was like 4 in tha mone
"yo nigga its ya daddy, now open tha fuken door"
shit that voice is deep, that nigga sounds 8 foot tall
i think i need a bigger gun "!ayo gimme a minute!"
unwraped my bed sheets, there was a mossberg up in it
came bak to tha door opened it slow wit tha chain
phew its all good, its just my nigga jamain.....

later on that day at tha gamblin spot sum niggas rushed me
but they had 5 in a car, n we was standin there wit 20
long story short, them niggas hard bitched it out
we put bullet holes in they car just so they no what we about
it wus funny as shit, tha hot topic of tha week
neva heard them faggets again, not even a fuken peep
as fo tha ho allysa, i think the bitch found a new nigga
word is she bugged him so hard he pulled tha fuken trigga
killed her ass n got locked up, now hes doin life
im laughin at this sucka, thinkin that hoe could be his wife
loosin alyssa wasnt a big thang, a story 2 put in flows
only prob was i had 2 find a new bitch that did corn rows


aiight post sum feedback^^
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Old 07-04-04, 04:11 AM   #2
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any1 like it? not like it?

do i need 2 elevate a bit?

any feedback, positive or .....un-positive?
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Old 07-04-04, 02:10 PM   #3
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yo, uppin fo feedback...
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Old 07-05-04, 07:06 AM   #4
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shit, wus it really that bad?
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