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06-11-07, 09:40 AM
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pain is weakness leaving the body
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romance and politics
IP: 5EA5 6727
Lady Liberty got fucked by Guantanamo Bay
actually it was a 3-way with Bush and Bush's other hoe Katrina came thru, it took three days for him to holla and only then with a push finally, this guy grinds the bullet in his mouth til it's part of his tooth and spits game as hard as he can and like a real pimp he spits every single line but the truth offering words but won't give a hand because he don't give a damn... Link 1 Link 2
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 "I don't want to be deep... I want to feel deep and use that feeling to express depth itself..." -Konchance my poetry: untitled Last edited by chip : 06-11-07 at 11:46 PM. |
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06-11-07, 03:51 PM
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IP: 8719 57C1
nah dude this just aint good.....im not sure if you were serious or not but whatever its cool.
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06-11-07, 11:47 PM
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pain is weakness leaving the body
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IP: 5EA5 6727
constructive criticism playa, i left you some, you could at least elaborate
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06-14-07, 03:54 PM
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IP: 26FC 8E94
i think if u made it longer and thought more on what u were writing it would have been better...it seems u rushed this post....cause its very short and its off...i know u can do better than this...ive read some of your post in the cypher section and its way better than what u wrote here....~1~
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