10 lines..
20 minute deadline..
No d/r,crew,hate,herb votes..
I'll go first.

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PenPalz

..Punch&Personalize this battle..Make u 'none' like my crew..
I cud've decided to do 15 lines..
.........But forwardin' ur verse is the best way to clown you..
Herbs squirmin' in frontlines no other place on RB they're admitted..
Voted on himself with an alias..
..........................Then replied & claimed he was a hard critic....
^That last line..involved you an ur alias..you now see the clue?.
..Ur verse made the deadline..but.... then when's ur skill due..?
.......Almost as expierenced as me in life..see his date of birth..
..........Also see his losses?.. you're currently reading his third..

..Bleh..thats all..

*Straight* Ace, might as well be *curved*, getting curbed,
scared to battle elites, so he goes for the herbs,
but thats ok, the style is conserved,
This bitch says he's straight, but he is gay, like he swerved,
I got so many ways to diss you that im playful wit you,
you couldnt win, if elvis wrote it, it still wouldnt fit you,
so stop crying dawg, i gave you a tissue,
This poker game is over, you got no more continues,
So *Straight Ace*, you got played like a royal flush,
I just merked you, with a stroke of the keys at a touch.

Curbed = Making someone lay down on the curb, with there mouth over the angle. And stomping on the back of their head, usually breaking the jaw and severely injuring them.

Peace out...

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PenPalz

OMG Straight Ace you just dogged , you might has well just quit while your ahead RT definitely had your ass on this one ..

damn u boht cmae wak
strate had a bit more personals
an wordplay
all rhymetime did is rhymelol
kids a herb an sukc


V-Ace

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105697

Hit it up honestly cuz rhyme time luves dik

Lmao.... Rhyme said straight only goes after herbs...Lmao
No comp.... Ace beat Rhyme with his opener and closer alone
Better personals... his last line cracked me up...
...Rhyme.. don't explain your verse.. ecspecially something that simple

so

v/Ace

Ace

..Punch&Personalize this battle..Make u 'none' like my crew..
I cud've decided to do 15 lines..
.........But forwardin' ur verse is the best way to clown you..
Lol...funny...i liked it, good opening
Herbs squirmin' in frontlines no other place on RB they're admitted..
Voted on himself with an alias..
..........................Then replied & claimed he was a hard critic....
So-So
^That last line..involved you an ur alias..you now see the clue?.
..Ur verse made the deadline..but.... then when's ur skill due..?
I liked it
.......Almost as expierenced as me in life..see his date of birth..
..........Also see his losses?.. you're currently reading his third..
Good personal....nice closer


Tyme

*Straight* Ace, might as well be *curved*, getting curbed,
scared to battle elites, so he goes for the herbs,
ha...u just called ya self a herb...lol
but thats ok, the style is conserved,
This bitch says he's straight, but he is gay, like he swerved,
Blah personal..coulda been re-worded and made better
I got so many ways to diss you that im playful wit you,
you couldnt win, if elvis wrote it, it still wouldnt fit you,
Elvis dont rap...dont get it
so stop crying dawg, i gave you a tissue,
This poker game is over, you got no more continues,
Blah..no punch..filler lines
So *Straight Ace*, you got played like a royal flush,
I just merked you, with a stroke of the keys at a touch.
Meh closer


Overall - Ace by a long shot

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This battle was mad onesided....Rhyme tyme came with some elementary ish..............Straight came with some aight disses and shit but nothin too eye poppin..........

Vote Straight Ace......Yo we can battle now I highly doubt that we're leavin.....

yea... one sided battle. but ima break it down:

punches - ace: rhymes hit like pillows

multis - none: none were seen

flow - ace: rhymes was aight, but not as good

structure - ace: easier to read... word (lol)

opener / closer - ace: ur closer killed him...

overall - ace: rhyme's were ok, but not as good...

be sure to return da favor in my sig...

vote - ace

... p'z