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Old 03-23-09, 08:03 PM   #1
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Old 03-23-09, 09:17 PM   #2
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i'm down to go 20.
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Old 03-24-09, 10:44 AM   #3
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20 is a lot for how lazy I am with this shit, but I'll see what I can do.......homo
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Old 03-26-09, 07:43 PM   #4
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u get pittied and junk. this fucking idiot sucks.
I'll have ur mom in my bedroom saying OW.. is shitty as fuck
that was a set up. so u might as well save it dude
i had to drop an OW/Mom line to be considered as played as u
aha,
smokin dro cus ur fuckin fat, nobody'll stay with this troubled cat
i usually pick up an O for 200. this one weighs about double that
talkin like u'll bust your guns. i'll whip ur ass greatly, prick
My fists'll make u face Plant. resembling where u'll work til ur 86
thinkin ur tough. homie, i'll take the drama to ur place
ur not safe at home. i'll slide through and put my gun to ur face

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Old 03-26-09, 08:12 PM   #5
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thats it?


He may be a straight retard but I’m not about to start calling him gay
Final rolls with girls……they're just at a Jonas Brothers concert today
I hope the final solution is not designed to save hip hop’s dope fam
Cause most of us would rather quit and become a fan of Adams folk band
A lot of us here have said your wack but you still insist to doubt some
But your concept are ‘so beat’… they’re starting to predict your outcome
This guy annoys me as a person, I find him a barley amusing squirt
He acts like such a little girl, Dakota Fanning has been loosing work
He spasses like a child and as far as his skill goes, no one loves it
So it’s hard to leave you with a final though, when he rarely does it
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Old 03-27-09, 06:47 PM   #6
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okay .
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Old 03-27-09, 06:54 PM   #7
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u get pittied and junk. this fucking idiot sucks.
I'll have ur mom in my bedroom saying OW.. is shitty as fuck
I threw a OW line like two weeks ago, so this was weak n played
that was a set up. so u might as well save it dude
i had to drop an OW/Mom line to be considered as played as u
well, its true, you are played, and dissing yourself is bad dude
aha,
smokin dro cus ur fuckin fat, nobody'll stay with this troubled cat
i usually pick up an O for 200. this one weighs about double that
lol, this was a good one
talkin like u'll bust your guns. i'll whip ur ass greatly, prick
My fists'll make u face Plant. resembling where u'll work til ur 86
this had a good set up, but the punch really lacked in harshness man
thinkin ur tough. homie, i'll take the drama to ur place
ur not safe at home. i'll slide through and put my gun to ur face
meh, not really that great man

overal, nothing really great man.




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He may be a straight retard but I’m not about to start calling him gay
Final rolls with girls……they're just at a Jonas Brothers concert today
lol, wording kidna of sucks, but it was ok i guess
I hope the final solution is not designed to save hip hop’s dope fam
Cause most of us would rather quit and become a fan of Adams folk band
lol, again, meh...it was ok
A lot of us here have said your wack but you still insist to doubt some
But your concept are ‘so beat’… they’re starting to predict your outcome
a played concept, but worded nicely man, so far the best far of the verus
This guy annoys me as a person, I find him a barley amusing squirt
He acts like such a little girl, Dakota Fanning has been loosing work
lol, best bar of the entire battle, rofl
He spasses like a child and as far as his skill goes, no one loves it
So it’s hard to leave you with a final though, when he rarely does it
this coulda have been done alot better

not a great verus, def. seen better.



overal i'd say One Way took this, not by alot, but he had a couple of less played punches. and had the best bar in the battle with that Dakota Fanning line
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Old 03-27-09, 08:29 PM   #8
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smokin dro cus ur fuckin fat, nobody'll stay with this troubled cat
i usually pick up an O for 200. this one weighs about double that


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A lot of us here have said your wack but you still insist to doubt some
But your concept are ‘so beat’… they’re starting to predict your outcome
This guy annoys me as a person, I find him a barley amusing squirt
He acts like such a little girl, Dakota Fanning has been loosing work

v/one way
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Old 03-28-09, 03:16 AM   #9
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u get pittied and junk. this fucking idiot sucks.
I'll have ur mom in my bedroom saying OW.. is shitty as fuck

(played concept, decent flip/nameplay)

smokin dro cus ur fuckin fat, nobody'll stay with this troubled cat
i usually pick up an O for 200. this one weighs about double that

(This was pretty cool.)

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A lot of us here have said your wack but you still insist to doubt some
But your concept are ‘so beat’… they’re starting to predict your outcome
(Decent.)


Weak battle, both of you are better than that.


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Old 03-28-09, 11:44 AM   #10
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u get pittied and junk. this fucking idiot sucks.
I'll have ur mom in my bedroom saying OW.. is shitty as fuck
lol nahh^^
that was a set up. so u might as well save it dude
i had to drop an OW/Mom line to be considered as played as u
pretty decent^^
aha,
smokin dro cus ur fuckin fat, nobody'll stay with this troubled cat
i usually pick up an O for 200. this one weighs about double that
cool concept i liked it^^
talkin like u'll bust your guns. i'll whip ur ass greatly, prick
My fists'll make u face Plant. resembling where u'll work til ur 86
decent, the wording man^^
thinkin ur tough. homie, i'll take the drama to ur place
ur not safe at home. i'll slide through and put my gun to ur face
nope^^

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He may be a straight retard but I’m not about to start calling him gay
Final rolls with girls……they're just at a Jonas Brothers concert today
ehh decent^^
I hope the final solution is not designed to save hip hop’s dope fam
Cause most of us would rather quit and become a fan of Adams folk band
wasn't feeling^^
A lot of us here have said your wack but you still insist to doubt some
But your concept are ‘so beat’… they’re starting to predict your outcome
decent^^
This guy annoys me as a person, I find him a barley amusing squirt
He acts like such a little girl, Dakota Fanning has been loosing work
funny concept, wording^^
He spasses like a child and as far as his skill goes, no one loves it
So it’s hard to leave you with a final though, when he rarely does it
wasn't feeling the setup^^

seemed like one was using better setups, final had the best bar. but both had less than passable verses. I hope yall pick it up in the next few weeks. both we're pretty equal in consistency. ima give it to final.
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Old 03-28-09, 12:07 PM   #11
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Tied in here too.....lol
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Old 03-30-09, 04:16 AM   #12
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u get pittied and junk. this fucking idiot sucks.
I'll have ur mom in my bedroom saying OW.. is shitty as fuck
lol funny but played
that was a set up. so u might as well save it dude
i had to drop an OW/Mom line to be considered as played as u
lol nahh cuz you called it on yourself
smokin dro cus ur fuckin fat, nobody'll stay with this troubled cat
i usually pick up an O for 200. this one weighs about double that
lol dope, +1
talkin like u'll bust your guns. i'll whip ur ass greatly, prick
My fists'll make u face Plant. resembling where u'll work til ur 86
this was ok but I can't quote it, not hard enough
thinkin ur tough. homie, i'll take the drama to ur place
ur not safe at home. i'll slide through and put my gun to ur face
lol i get, but it's not that great

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He may be a straight retard but I’m not about to start calling him gay
Final rolls with girls……they're just at a Jonas Brothers concert today
lol no way
I hope the final solution is not designed to save hip hop’s dope fam
Cause most of us would rather quit and become a fan of Adams folk band
this was funny but not hard dude
A lot of us here have said your wack but you still insist to doubt some
But your concept are ‘so beat’… they’re starting to predict your outcome
I liked this yo +1
This guy annoys me as a person, I find him a barley amusing squirt
He acts like such a little girl, Dakota Fanning has been loosing work
lol this was funny +2
He spasses like a child and as far as his skill goes, no one loves it
So it’s hard to leave you with a final though, when he rarely does it
nah man

v/oneway

not a strong battle here, actually pretty close but I got oneway taking this with one more quotable
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Old 03-30-09, 05:53 PM   #13
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u get pittied and junk. this fucking idiot sucks.
I'll have ur mom in my bedroom saying OW.. is shitty as fuck
lol
that was a set up. so u might as well save it dude
i had to drop an OW/Mom line to be considered as played as u
no
aha,
smokin dro cus ur fuckin fat, nobody'll stay with this troubled cat
i usually pick up an O for 200. this one weighs about double that
not a hard hitter but kinda funny
talkin like u'll bust your guns. i'll whip ur ass greatly, prick
My fists'll make u face Plant. resembling where u'll work til ur 86
meh
thinkin ur tough. homie, i'll take the drama to ur place
ur not safe at home. i'll slide through and put my gun to ur face
no

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He may be a straight retard but I’m not about to start calling him gay
Final rolls with girls……they're just at a Jonas Brothers concert today
not hard hitting but i understood it
I hope the final solution is not designed to save hip hop’s dope fam
Cause most of us would rather quit and become a fan of Adams folk band
...? no
A lot of us here have said your wack but you still insist to doubt some
But your concept are ‘so beat’… they’re starting to predict your outcome
decent
This guy annoys me as a person, I find him a barley amusing squirt
He acts like such a little girl, Dakota Fanning has been loosing work
lol nice
He spasses like a child and as far as his skill goes, no one loves it
So it’s hard to leave you with a final though, when he rarely does it
okish..

well... it was pretty even. i didnt even look to see what the score is because i could careless who voted for who in this so if i'm the dick of this situation dont hate me, im just voting on what i liked... sorry to whoever im sposed to be sorry for.

v/final, just more enjoyable to me.
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Old 03-30-09, 06:10 PM   #14
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lol, that didn't help any. 3-3
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Old 03-30-09, 09:55 PM   #15
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lmao @ this....
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