www.soundclick.com/bands/8/rapidfiremusic.htm

should be the 2nd song...there's only 3.....hook, and first 2 verses is me...3rd verse is xtreme...

replied to..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109224

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109292

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flow was nice.....delivery good....2nd verse was a tad shaky....ok beat....catchy hook.....best verse...ME!!!...lol....rare to see an audio involved with me on RB...

peace

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Its straight
it reminds me of some ICP shit
Your vocals need to go up a little
Your style reminds me of my boys

any check this shit out

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109405

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ArtistiCat

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So if your a lame ass underground cat dont reply to my topics(you know who you are)

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Acidplanet

Soundclick

*listeing*

intro is tight...beat comes in ehh..mehh the extra sounds make it kinda blah...flow is not bad kinda off at points...lyrics are straight...multies are nice...some lines were straight garbage though...xtreme isnt as good as rapid on this...but he is straight none the less...

things to work on: quality and vocal effects

^agree with quality...lol..and yeah....Rapid has more exp. than me with audio...but its all coo....im trying to figure how to get cooledit and shit and im having mad problems getting it....esp. since i cant get the trial version anymore and just hook it up with a registration key...appreciate the critique...and to the ICP comment....ehhh...lol...nothing like that...i thought the beat was good though....and my voice did have bad quality at the beginning voice droans and shit...but thats how it is...

peace

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beat=weak

vocals=far too low...and quality is terrible

the singin/spittin kinda got annoying...but it at the same time made the track bearable

not my cup of tea...

keep spittin