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Old 02-18-05, 10:39 PM   #1
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LAW & ORDER feat Suspense & Whuzi {{{HBC}}}

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This is me n Whuzi from HBC get used to the name fellas
im first then whuzi on hook , second verse and outro

THIS IS WHUZI'S SOUNDCLICK ITS THE 3RD TRACK called LAW & ORDER


http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...ID=2053323&q=Lo

http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...ID=2053323&q=Hi

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/a...esmokemusic.htm

GET USED TO IT
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Old 02-18-05, 10:43 PM   #2
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heard this a dozen times fam...fucks with the intro...beat is hot

sus- flow is on point...multis are nice...lyrics were good...delivery was good too...great shit

whuzi- haha flow is also on point...delivery was good...lyrics are felt...good verse too

overall this was a pretty dope track
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Old 02-18-05, 11:44 PM   #3
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aight

first dude....ya quality is good...flow is good...lyrics is straight..emotion is straight and it fit the beat

chorus is to loud....

second dude...ya quality is good as well...flow is good as first dude...lyrics is good as well as first dudes...emotion fits the beat as well...
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Old 02-18-05, 11:56 PM   #4
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yea sus your scheme is crazy content is felt multis felt flow was aight nahmean...hook is pretty proper whuzi doin it up

emotion is good nahmean fow is onpoint feelin thw swagger content intat...solid piece fellas both of u brought heat 2 the table good shit
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Old 02-19-05, 01:39 AM   #5
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we know ........lol j/k good looks
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Old 02-19-05, 08:19 PM   #6
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wtf anyone got a pillow?
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Old 02-19-05, 11:27 PM   #7
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Beat/Production:
Beats pretty hot, nice bass line. Definitly feeling the beat.

Lyrics:
The lyrics are basic, nothing too impressive but thats not always a bad thing. Fits the whole settings and concept your put through here.

Flow:
The flow on this track was sick straight up. I was definitly feeling these flows. Fucking hot.

Delivery:
Delievery was on-point for both verses. First person sounded like Cam'Ron and the second sounded like LiL'Waynes style a little bit.

Quality:
Quality throughout whole track was solid and sounded good. Decent quality.

Overall:
Overall this track was sick, and I was definitly feeling this track. Hot shit, stay up fasho. Skilled emcees right here. 9/10

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