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03-09-07, 07:42 PM | #1 | ||||
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Fuck Yo Team
IP: F450 0482
...sniff sniff see imma fuckin ill nigga from tha city of black feel coke pills like books in bag bitch get wit that and if not then fuck yo punk ass shit i'll kill you then i'll blow ya crib up like a scene from bad boys two skills who? shit aint no skills round this town holmes and if you thought it was then you fucked up in tha dome and speakin of fuck bitch fuck you and yo pimpin fuck everyone you know who died and fuck who livin fuck yo city and fuck yo bitch shit im tha fuckin shit fuck yo block and fuck whoever you run wit fuck a response and fuck this site, good fuckin night or fuckin good day for all you otha time zone dykes fuck battlin but if i get dissed imma be fuckin pissed i'll call you out take ya name and take a fuckin shit all over ya reputation nigga my flow is mean i put my mid finger up to competition and scream FUCK YO TEAM
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"Fuck Yo Team" OM
fuckka B-I-G and L yall burn in hell its all bout wayne and jeezy thought yall could tell fuck who you think is tha best shit i know im right so to ya cock suckin hoes, goodnight muthafucka |
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03-09-07, 07:43 PM | #2 | ||||
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IP: F450 0482
http://community.rapverse.com/showp...671&postcount=7
http://community.rapverse.com/showp...670&postcount=6
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"Fuck Yo Team" OM
fuckka B-I-G and L yall burn in hell its all bout wayne and jeezy thought yall could tell fuck who you think is tha best shit i know im right so to ya cock suckin hoes, goodnight muthafucka |
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03-11-07, 12:05 AM | #3 | ||||
What' it do?
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IP: 2303 05E1
some of your lines didn't rhyme.
Your overall rhyme scheme was off, and i wasn't all that impressed wit ya verse. it was aigght son. but def. need to ellevate.
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03-11-07, 10:52 PM | #4 | ||||
New to RV
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IP: F450 0482
man all my lines did rhyme...u must cant read or sumthin. but thanks for readin (or skimmin) it anyway mayne. yeah
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"Fuck Yo Team" OM
fuckka B-I-G and L yall burn in hell its all bout wayne and jeezy thought yall could tell fuck who you think is tha best shit i know im right so to ya cock suckin hoes, goodnight muthafucka |
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03-12-07, 12:33 AM | #5 | |||||
don't try.
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
ahh this was alrite.. ya jus need to elevate dude, throw some multi's in and don' tjus rhyme with one word at the end of every sentence.. haha the 20 fuck this fuck that's made me laugh though
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03-12-07, 07:23 PM | #6 | ||||
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IP: F450 0482
haha, yeah i feel everythang ya tellin me tho 4real. its nuthin serious in this, i was jus bullshittin around.
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"Fuck Yo Team" OM
fuckka B-I-G and L yall burn in hell its all bout wayne and jeezy thought yall could tell fuck who you think is tha best shit i know im right so to ya cock suckin hoes, goodnight muthafucka |
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03-14-07, 08:48 AM | #7 | |||||
Black Poet
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IP: 860D ECBB
That was so bad my eye's hurt !!! you didn't have anything that showed a little bit of potential...
Your rhyming is weak, lines are weak and played,.. it was just boring I see why you call yourself NoSkills. Need to elevate badly, sorry no hate but you wont learn from lies. |
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03-15-07, 04:40 PM | #8 | ||||||
New to RV
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IP: 3E9E 35FE
Lookz Like U Frontin To Me........ As If U Got Something To Prove....... You Need To Get In Character And Put That Real Shit Out There...... This Shit Is Better On Audio Than Text......... Keep Spittin And You'll Get There
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