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Old 03-09-07, 07:42 PM   #1
NoSkills
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Thumbs down Fuck Yo Team

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...sniff sniff

see imma fuckin ill nigga from tha city of black
feel coke pills like books in bag bitch get wit that
and if not then fuck yo punk ass shit i'll kill you
then i'll blow ya crib up like a scene from bad boys two
skills who? shit aint no skills round this town holmes
and if you thought it was then you fucked up in tha dome
and speakin of fuck bitch fuck you and yo pimpin
fuck everyone you know who died and fuck who livin
fuck yo city and fuck yo bitch shit im tha fuckin shit
fuck yo block and fuck whoever you run wit
fuck a response and fuck this site, good fuckin night
or fuckin good day for all you otha time zone dykes
fuck battlin but if i get dissed imma be fuckin pissed
i'll call you out take ya name and take a fuckin shit
all over ya reputation nigga my flow is mean
i put my mid finger up to competition and scream FUCK YO TEAM

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fuckka B-I-G and L yall burn in hell
its all bout wayne and jeezy thought yall could tell
fuck who you think is tha best shit i know im right
so to ya cock suckin hoes, goodnight
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Old 03-09-07, 07:43 PM   #2
NoSkills
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"Fuck Yo Team" OM

fuckka B-I-G and L yall burn in hell
its all bout wayne and jeezy thought yall could tell
fuck who you think is tha best shit i know im right
so to ya cock suckin hoes, goodnight
muthafucka
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Old 03-11-07, 12:05 AM   #3
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some of your lines didn't rhyme.
Your overall rhyme scheme was off, and i wasn't all that impressed wit ya verse.
it was aigght son. but def. need to ellevate.
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Old 03-11-07, 10:52 PM   #4
NoSkills
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man all my lines did rhyme...u must cant read or sumthin. but thanks for readin (or skimmin) it anyway mayne. yeah
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fuckka B-I-G and L yall burn in hell
its all bout wayne and jeezy thought yall could tell
fuck who you think is tha best shit i know im right
so to ya cock suckin hoes, goodnight
muthafucka
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Old 03-12-07, 12:33 AM   #5
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ahh this was alrite.. ya jus need to elevate dude, throw some multi's in and don' tjus rhyme with one word at the end of every sentence.. haha the 20 fuck this fuck that's made me laugh though
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Old 03-12-07, 07:23 PM   #6
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haha, yeah i feel everythang ya tellin me tho 4real. its nuthin serious in this, i was jus bullshittin around.
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fuckka B-I-G and L yall burn in hell
its all bout wayne and jeezy thought yall could tell
fuck who you think is tha best shit i know im right
so to ya cock suckin hoes, goodnight
muthafucka
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Old 03-14-07, 08:48 AM   #7
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That was so bad my eye's hurt !!! you didn't have anything that showed a little bit of potential...

Your rhyming is weak, lines are weak and played,.. it was just boring I see why
you call yourself NoSkills.

Need to elevate badly, sorry no hate but you wont learn from lies.
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Old 03-15-07, 04:40 PM   #8
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Lookz Like U Frontin To Me........ As If U Got Something To Prove....... You Need To Get In Character And Put That Real Shit Out There...... This Shit Is Better On Audio Than Text......... Keep Spittin And You'll Get There
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