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Old 05-12-05, 01:44 PM   #1
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Debit - Omen Diss

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This is the songs forum, if you can't play like a big boy, then don't.

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Old 05-12-05, 01:45 PM   #2
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here are my lyrics to the diss...enjoy

u ain't on my level, look coward
u don't sling no dope, the only white shit u touch is foot powder
i been banging since ya sperm days
and u don't come that hard, we all know ya half bitch like mermaids
ya not nice, go and price toys for days
u don't fit in rap well like white boys with braids
u ain't hood nigga none of ya death threats turn slugz
i ain't running from raps of a redneck turned thug
i know ya going to the prom an
but test me and slugz throw u straight towards the corner like common
ya diss sucked dog but one lines tight
i heard from a source that u ain't even unsinged hype
i know u think ya hood with hot wheels but selling chromes old
u a rat, stay with wires like a telephone pole
get off of my dick i got enough groupies for now
reject an autograph, u be like he shooting me down
i ain't playing, slugz sit on ya head like hair clips
keep mouthing off, get left in the woods like bear shit
in the snow or in the woods, in the thorns we clash
i got guns that'll turn ya brains to corn beef hash
ya run mouth off alot so really u must care
quit rap and find way to try and pay for ya bus fair
ya not hard, u a bitch, so fix ya blouse
and slugz leave u still tippin like swisha house
niggaz respect my name dog it's the same as mister
the glock'll have u bending back like a game of twister
i know u suck at rap but u ain't gotta blame ya sister
and look at omen d/r cali, frame this picture
ya mixtape is garbage dog so how u claim the sale fits
nigga falling off his tracks like train derailments
u want beef dog then shit, rape males
and i ain't going anywhere like ya talent or ya mixtape sales
i take ya life, i'm polluting the air u breathe with
u may have guns but them shits is smaller then eve's tits
i'd fuck ya girl but in the end my hands might rip her
u the type to get a dance from a transvestite stripper
i'm on my mixtape now but i'm killing slay's next
u should sign with dipset and start filming gay sex
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Old 05-12-05, 02:20 PM   #3
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you cant even pretend to sound tough it sounds forced on your shit and your quality either needs to be fixed or take that dick outa ya mouth plus your flows off like crazy stop trying to turn text to audio it dont work write to the beat them lines is way too long sun beat is played kinda like your punches and shit you just cant sound tough with a voice like that no bass at all i give this two thumbs down...........omen killed you..........
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Old 05-12-05, 02:24 PM   #4
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hahaha, fuck tha.. frail.. shit! cuz when tha coke come in i gotta use tha scale they use to weigh tha whales with.. yea that was the original lyrics not urs, lets peeps urs n see if they live up to that...lol ya voice is sooo funny sounding... damn my player isnt workin so ima download it n listen... aight, ya on flow slightly, ya punches are booty tho, half bitch like mermaid...ehhh... not realy feelin when ur tryin to hit there... i know ya going to the prom an...l..o..ll?? i think that alot of these punches completely missed me... what duz prom have to do with n e thing?i heard from a source that u ain't even unsinged hype best line yet....stay with wires like a telephone pole that lines aight... so far u arent attacking me tho, ur just throwin out a bunch of punches that arent even tru, if u wanna get at me then u should attack me for tha things that are reall..... cuz so far u just spittiin babbleish lies...i know u suck at rap but u ain't gotta blame ya sister... i dont have a sister dog... its seems to me like ya just throwin together a bunch of words that rime but dont make sence whatsoever...u want beef dog then shit, rape males... yea i guess i did kinda rape u huh?? lol...damn, i didnt spot one clever peice of wordplay or punchline material man... honestly im a little bummed..... thought u would come harder but im glad to see that after 2 weeks you finaly at least posted after duckin me that whole time... just sad that you had to work on this peice for 2 weeks n this is all u came wif.. i did my diss within 12 hours that u posted u were gonna diss me n mine still raped urs....lol at ur voice again... dam u need to get ur own style man, u tryin to sound just like lloyd banks..... like how u say ur ending rime syllabols is always tha same...n its just like banks, u need to switch it up to ur own steez man... honestly the only good thing i can say about this is that it rode the beat nycely but lyrically this was garbage u need to learn how to not "Just write what rimes" and throw together sum honest hard hitterz...
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Old 05-12-05, 03:02 PM   #5
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for the tlmfao @ these two dumb fucks...for two people who hate me u guys are on my dick pretty hard and i could give a rats ass what u two say because *drum roll* u guys are haters...i knew u two would come in here and hate *waits for response from fat albert and the muslim boy*...thank u omen for saying i say my ending rhyme syallbles just like banks...that makes me happy...anyways thank u for the feedback and it's always nice to know that u guys have that much time to type shit to my song thread...u guys must really love me...anyways thank u for the feed...uppin for more feed
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Old 05-12-05, 03:04 PM   #6
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and to cali...hmmm...i love how u can find time to leave feed but can't find time to accept a pink slip battle...lmao
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Old 05-12-05, 03:51 PM   #7
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son...i hope im next...but fa real tho..step ya game up for me son..this typa shit wont slide..

and u got another nigga thats gonna come ya way thats supposed to be ya boy...so be on the look out for that..i wanna see u diss this nigga...lmao..ckuz ud get murdered man...just record ya shit for me...callin me fat and shit..so i can brush it off and hurt ya feelins..
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Old 05-12-05, 04:12 PM   #8
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wow let me think...would that person be gattas...gee how'd i know
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Old 05-12-05, 04:26 PM   #9
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lol if gattas disses him i must be in this track lol, itll be my follow up to wiping tha floor with u....honestly i dont hate u at all i find ur antics quite amusing honestly... and saying u copied lloyd wasnt a compliment, i never said you SOUND LIKE HIM, i said u tried to, big difference but when u try it u just come off fake as shyt n gay. u need sum cadence in ya voice all ya notes u hit are the same... n im pretty sure that tha only good responces from this is gon b wicked clown n 20grand so duz that mean every1 is a hater? or maybe u should face tha fact that u need to drop tha mic till u come off with ur own style?
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Old 05-12-05, 04:37 PM   #10
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wow...ur still on my nuts...i'll take on all of rv...don't make a difference to me....hell u can even get a diss together with u, cali, diabolic, gattas, seventhird, dv,....i don't care who...anyways thanks for the feed omen and u did say i sound like banks with the ending syallbles...

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like how u say ur ending rime syllabols is always tha same...n its just like banks
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Old 05-12-05, 04:50 PM   #11
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dam u need to get ur own style man, u TRYING to sound just like lloyd banks..... like how u say ur ending rime syllabols is always tha same...n its just like banks, u need to switch it up to ur own steez man...


yea yea? <me

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<debit trying to break the brick wall with his dome peice
<all of rap verse laughing at his stupidity
<20grand and wicked clown staring in astonishment as their friend gets ripped to shreds.
<my job here is done!














o yeah n.........................................
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Old 05-12-05, 04:51 PM   #12
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i fucked ur momz too homey chicka chicka boaw waow! chikc buhd ta! baaaaaaoooooowwwww!
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Old 05-12-05, 05:02 PM   #13
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lmao...funny shit...honestly...what are u 3
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hahahaha...


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Old 05-12-05, 06:16 PM   #15
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Lmao... omg @ me dissin debit... i'm finna make a track right now

Good diss man - but u focused on punches 2 much u should of used more personals beat was kinda fruity for the fact it's beef but lyrics was good - didn't hear personals but this wasn't whack fam... HOLLA


lol@ who i diss... Y'all see me MAN! YOU SEE ME!!!
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