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View Poll Results: Affliction vs criminal | |||
Affliction | 5 | 100.00% | |
criminal | 0 | 0% | |
Voters: 5. You may not vote on this poll |
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09-03-05, 01:37 PM | #1 |
Banned: Biting
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Affliction vs criminal
IP: 10E1 4D65
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10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 09-03-05 at 02:37 PM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
09-03-05, 01:56 PM | #2 | |
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IP: 08F2 A85D
Affliction has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-03-05 01:56 PM.
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09-03-05, 02:08 PM | #3 | |
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IP: 10E1 4D65
criminal has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-03-05 02:08 PM.
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09-03-05, 02:08 PM | #4 |
Flyweight
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IP: 08F2 A85D
Yo criminal might be throwing punches but he aint hittin nothing
Go back to your name, so you become a sayain and get pumping If you had any Senses you should've known this lost was comin You could put ! at the end of your lines and still ..............................................Your punches wouldn't be frighten Man I thought you was rolling nice until you lost to a dude name daubs You couldn't be viciously nice even if you have mouth full of soapy suds You could do an 180 and still wouldn't have no chance to turn this around But you is helpless Like an Puppy that's been lost and never will be found Time to end this now .............................Kid your lower than homeless kids on the streets The only time you hitting hard is putting your fist on the concrete *His old name was "Vaita4" |
09-03-05, 02:29 PM | #5 |
Banned: Biting
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IP: 10E1 4D65
stop that, u 2-3 and expect to beat me?..pause
haha... i laugh so hard i pissed out blood like minapuse look i put men to crawl, u need 10 men to ball and like broken starters, ya flow expected to stoll this murder sceen like O.j hoping out the branco u spit fire?, not even after a bag full of lit charcoal so kid just fall-back or get lent like the eiffel-tower cause you're flow will still stink if u took 9-in-a-row-shower like psyschic-readers with explosives this verse i'll blow ya mind cuz you getting beat around the clock like you got drop and rolled ova-time something quick freestyle |
09-03-05, 02:30 PM | #6 |
Flyweight
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IP: 08F2 A85D
Um alright...Uppin for votes.......................
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09-04-05, 12:56 PM | #7 |
Flyweight
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IP: CD97 5139
Uppin............................................. ..
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09-04-05, 10:45 PM | #8 |
Banned: Biting
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IP: 10E1 4D65
bumpin............................................ ......
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09-05-05, 09:43 AM | #9 |
Flyweight
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IP: 8895 5149
Uppin biiiatches....................................
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09-05-05, 10:39 AM | #10 |
Banned: Biting
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IP: 10E1 4D65
bumpin............................................ ......
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09-05-05, 11:31 AM | #11 | |
A Life Of Chryme
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IP: 0825 899A
Voted For: Affliction
Structure-Both had poor structure........couldnt create a flow on either, this is a problem simply becuz then the punches arent as effective in the readers mind. Vocab-Gutta give this one to criminal, he had the only real vocab in his verse mina puse......lol both enhance ur vocab so its presented well in ur verse next time Multis-Niether had any multis so i simply cant vote on this catergorie................ Personals-Affliction had the more afflicting persnoals lol....criminal had some personals but afliction took it away, this catergorie-afflfiction Punches-Plain to see who hAd the harder hitting punches, Criminals punches were harder hitting and far more creative, this is consistant for him.......this catergorie-criminal Originality-Affliction had the more fresh verse...stood out more, his verse caught my eye and was presented better than criminals..... v/affliction rtf in 3 days on my sig links or this vote will be dq'd
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09-05-05, 12:47 PM | #12 |
Flyweight
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IP: 8895 5149
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09-07-05, 05:26 PM | #13 |
Banned: Biting
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IP: 10E1 4D65
bump bump bump.....................................
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09-10-05, 01:16 PM | #14 |
Flyweight
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IP: 62C3 7065
Lol @ Banned for Biting...damn...Oh well I'll tell strobe to give me my win...word.
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