yo unf is ur crew leader..........and it wasnt explained welll........still uppin fa votes

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punches are more solid than your opponents. Rhymes have more versatilty and tech in them. Personls arent too strong but do come apprarent in spots.
could of been more solid with metaphors and such thru it.
But over all you dropped more solid than your opponent.

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thanks man appreciate it uppin to the top!

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VOTE:NiggaPlease!!!

OKAY, BREAKIN THIS DOWN...BATMANS VERSES ARE EXTREMELY CHILDISH...NO KINDA HATE BRO, HE JUST RHYMES SENTENCES...BUT I WILL SAY HIS OPENER WAS OKAY...BUT HE KINDA LOST ME AROUND THE END OF THE SECOND BAR...CHEESY LINES NO REAL GUT-PUNCHING PUNCH LINES...AND NIGGA PLEASE, TO ME I DONT THINK IT WAS YOUR BEST BUT HIS STRUCTURE WAS BETTER AND HAD PUNCHES THAT "MADE SENSE"...NO REAL HARD PUNCHES BUT ENOUGH FOR THE WIN...THEY BOTH HAD A FEW PERSONALS, ABOUT EVEN IN THAT DEPARTMENT...NEITHER VERSE WAS "KILLER SHIT" BUT NIGGA PLEASE HAD ENOUGH FOR THE WIN...

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PUNCH THAT BITCH!!!PUNCH THAT BITCH!!!

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^thanks man appreciate the vote.....uppin for more votes ya'll

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NiggaPlease

On this site hes a herb he calls him self bat man
But behind his computer screen hes really a fat man
^made me chuckle, not creative, still funny though 7/10

My lyrical flowz will bust ya head nuff said
This nigga couldnt winna battle even if he bit the frontlines thread
^first line self-glorifying, second was good one 6/10

They talkin bout this cat sayin he whack well its true
Cuz even ciarra got bigga goodies than you
^haha, laughed at the last line 7/10

In this thread he will be known for the l
This cat couldnt be hott if he were rappin in hell
^coo punch, solid stuff 8/10

Its too late, past the time to elevate
He needa new name Time for his comp to regenerate
^again aight shit 6/10

All his power his skill is undefined
Whats up wit that name? what goes on in ur mind
^coo closer 5/10

Total: 39/60 = 65%, work on more creative and hardhitting punches, more complexity in your verse


Batman

yo u wanna battle me all i got to say is nigga please
you better get in line bitch cuz theres sum merkage fees
^uhm no at second line, first one was decent 6/10

all kinds of people wanna battle me cuz they think i aint good
but they aint sayin that when i wreck they hood
^ uhm where is the punch? nowhere! 0/10

this might be added to your record but its still another loss
man u aint got no salad for bitches to toss
^aight shit right here, decent punch 6/10

i know it wasnt your idea for this battle but dont back out
ive seen ur battles and i knew i was gonna win without a damn doubt
^coo punch with personal touch 7/10

please nigga u cant measure up to me son
i listend to larry the cable guy and i got-r-dun*
^coo wordplay, decent stuff 5/10

Total: 24/50 = 48%, get more punches in your stuff, better wordplay, more creative things and overall way more punches!

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IP:

yo u wanna battle me all i got to say is nigga please
you better get in line bitch cuz theres sum merkage fees
^^^decent enuff, wit nameplay n shit

all kinds of people wanna battle me cuz they think i aint good
but they aint sayin that when i wreck they hood
^^wack, u jus dissed urself with that line! i mean theres no punch whatsoever!

this might be added to your record but its still another loss
man u aint got no salad for bitches to toss
^^^First line didnt make much sense and the second line is played and wack.

i know it wasnt your idea for this battle but dont back out
ive seen ur battles and i knew i was gonna win without a damn doubt
^^^c'mon man, there are no punches here whatsoever, its all self glory!

please nigga u cant measure up to me son
i listend to larry the cable guy and i got-r-dun*
^^iunno bout this, didnt really get it to be honest.

no hate at all, but when ur battling try to use nameplay and actually try to diss ur opponent, there shuld be a punchline in every bar.

IP:

On this site hes a herb he calls him self bat man
But behind his computer screen hes really a fat man
^^^ok, not the best but theres a diss there lol

My lyrical flowz will bust ya head nuff said
This nigga couldnt winna battle even if he bit the frontlines thread
^^^yeah i liked this one. again theres a decent punch

They talkin bout this cat sayin he whack well its true
Cuz even ciarra got bigga goodies than you
^^lol dissin him and ciara! humour is always good in a battle.

In this thread he will be known for the l
This cat couldnt be hott if he were rappin in hell
^^hell lines r played so u havta come extra original to pull them off, nice try tho.

Its too late, past the time to elevate
He needa new name Time for his comp to regenerate
^^^meh

All his power his skill is undefined
Whats up wit that name? what goes on in ur mind
^^dont really like this closer cuz theres not really a punch ya no..

Niggaplease wins because he actually has punches in his verse, some good, some not so good, but he definitely takes the win here, no hate!

v/niggaplease

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