yo lets get this over with

Rules:

30 minute blind spit-no pre writtens.....

no hate
no d/r
no b/s votes only fully explained ones.......
no diting.....
no recycling...

May the best man win..............

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once u check in then we both start our spit ight.............

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yo, da fuk is 'diting'? i always dit, so i ain't gon b able to battle foo!

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lol i meant no biting.......now type in....Check In....i aint got all day...........

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you know, if i wasnt high, i dont think axe's smart ass remarks would be funny, but because i am, they are pretty funny, LOL!

^yo foo, u no u luv me, fag. don't act like u all straite, get wiv da luvin.

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ill take dat as a check in have urs by 30 mins aight ho.....and i asked kuniva in a pm if he luvs u n he said no LoL

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he denigying it. that fag, u luv me two, get wiv da luvin.

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its like u walkin up da stairway 2 heaven da way ur stepin up 2 da greatest//
u pickin up an "L" to a god so theres no reason to hate this//
I bust more SIC flows than you can flow when your SICK//
your like a constipated kid on a toilet, ur never dropin ill shit//
on R.B im a legend with my words, "W's comin so fast dey pass blurs//
you might think im ur neighborhood pusher the way i bag these herbs//
gotta make an alias 2 win,but like Butcha n Toon ull b placed on suspension//
cuz my abstract thoughts will overtake ur adolescent intentions//
if u got a weak stomach dont bite,ull find my rhymes hard 2 digest//
n even if u plagerized u still couldnt win,so how u eva gonna progress//
when push cums 2 shove not even M.C Hammer could touch this lyricist//
on R.B i just be fukin around and still leavin these kids with cyphilis//

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^^^^^^^^^^^^WTF^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^


And Axiom Said Front Lines Was Full of Herbs? LMAO

Only On Verse and This Kid Already Voted...

LMAO...Uppin For Axioms Verse...

Nice Drop DJ

~R~

*Sigh* Kids still posting that verses were the same calibur. I give up. Morons.

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DJ EM SCE
its like u walkin up da stairway 2 heaven da way ur stepin up 2 da greatest//
u pickin up an "L" to a god so theres no reason to hate this//
-nice opener...got me interested in his flo...y axe wud git a L to a god

I bust more SIC flows than you can flow when your SICK//
your like a constipated kid on a toilet, ur never dropin ill shit//
-i liked this bar..first line liked tha wordplay...second line had me thinkin... nice shitt

on R.B im a legend with my words, "W's comin so fast dey pass blurs//
you might think im ur neighborhood pusher the way i bag these herbs//
-one of tha best bars in this verse...good flo, but tha first line wuz confusin..at first..i caught it l8r

gotta make an alias 2 win,but like Butcha n Toon ull b placed on suspension//
cuz my abstract thoughts will overtake ur adolescent intentions//
good vocab on this one...i guess that wuz a punch??shoulda came harder tho..not tha best bar

if u got a weak stomach dont bite,ull find my rhymes hard 2 digest//
n even if u plagerized u still couldnt win,so how u eva gonna progress//
GOOD PUNCHES...liked tha vocab-u sed plagerized instead of common word like "bite"

when push cums 2 shove not even M.C Hammer could touch this lyricist//
on R.B i just be fukin around and still leavin these kids with cyphilis//
damn..not tha STD syphiliis..that's harsh..good closer
OVERALL-nice vocab and wordplay..a few points lost on punches...i give it a 7/10

Axiom's break down is on tha next reply

AXIOM-tha bitch
DJ's chasing a victory, and it's playing hard to get.
I would've ended your career... but it hasn't started yet.
--good opener...almost played but not quite..soo...good opener

So when I trash this fuck, he'll be napping in the ocean.
I don't know what's worse, ya verse, or the fact that you're postin.
--good punches in this bar...i liked tha last line in it

It's true, I fucked your mom, but I didn't expect the condom to break.
So when I clown you, don't trip, I'm just correctin' mistakes.
--FIRST LINE IS PLAYEEEDDD OUTTT..second line wuz OK..still a lil played wit that one too

This battle's regressin, you'll feel bad as gays disperse.
You didnt say I was full of shit... until AFTER I ate ya verse.
--First line is PLAYEEDD..that's 2 in a row......second line is preety Heavy..i liked tha second line..nice punch rite thurr

Axe is the realest with rhymes, so expect me to kill this bitch
The way I shut this dummy up, you'll think Axe's a ventriloquist.
--hmm..OK bar...OK punches...OK vocab...overall OK bar

Lets play, like your verse came and I'll give you a sneek peek
Kid just came out of the closet, and it wasn't during hide-n-go-seek
--mediocre closer...first line wuz weak but tha last line wuz OK
OVERALL-notta whole lot of vocab...great flo...same structure as DJ-good...Punches good 8/10

Results on next post....
sorry there's so many

D.J. Em Sce-nice vocab and wordplay...Flo wuz preety good...good sturcture...a few points lost on punches..but i loved tha verse....i give it a 7/10

Axiom:tha bitch-notta whole lot of vocab...great flo tho...same structure as DJ-good...Punches good....wordplay-missing..i give it a 7.5/10

both of ya'll wurr missing meta4s...wurr they at?
but a great battle
even tho DJ is my leader i gotta go wit tha truth of THIS battle
so VOTE-AXIOM:tha bitch

this is as explained as it gits so accept it or not..its tha truth