All Right, you said,

no dick ridaz
no krew
no hatin...

drop 15 min afta check in
10-15 lines

Check in

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PenPalz

What are you thinking, you must be insane//
you lay on the floor, in a pool of blood stain//
my rhymes, they go against the grain, but i dont strain//
i just conjure up a word or two in my enchanced brain//
Case scenario worst? You were destined to leave here in a hearse//
Rap is voodoo, and I just cast a curse//
the only redemption, is to haul your ass to church//
Im gonna make it loud and clear, just who you're dealin with//
Im a white suburban kid, and you dont know shit//
Rap isnt a game, you might as well quit//
Your raps arn't good, i dont deem them fit//
I say this as i walk away, This seems to be it//
Your face here, my certificate//

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PenPalz

Ok, you got 24 hours. That means by tommorow at this time, you need to have yours posted. All right, im just gonna wait now.....

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PenPalz

i was bored and uncreative when writin, but anyway:

This fag could be a pussy, his Rymes still wouldnt be tight
i could wire ur the left side of ur jaw up, u still coudnt ryme right

This rap business is a game to i got this game in a wrap
beatin me aint possible , beatin me aint logical, face it ur shits crap

always gonna be top oif the leauge, other try and raise their game
but ur rymin at the bottom of a table, u cant up ur skills, bitch ur lame

i pop open ur brain up let the whole world in to c
i open up ur window and let the whole world c a vianilla ice wanna b

Ur just trailer park trash, no cars, no hopes, no cash
ur momma the whore, u was born and she passed on the STD Rash

In the last 10 lines ive sent u to hell, people we say ur wer lucky
to still be breathin, now im done drag ur white arse back to kentucky

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rapper_bigga
ilLogics
trivia 101

Killin all u wack arse rappers

Uppin

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PenPalz

Uppin and im gonna keepin uppin till i get 100 words, uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin1

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--B.L.P--
rapper_bigga
ilLogics
trivia 101

Killin all u wack arse rappers

Opener:ilLogics
Closer:ilLogics
Flow:iLogics
Enjoyment:neither
Obvious winner: ilLogics:- i want Feelin d otha dude at all! No Beef Doh!take a look at dis please :-: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...398#post1066398

pUnches - Illogic
flow - Illogic
Metas - Ilogic
Opener - Illogic
Closer - Illogic

OBVIOUS winner - Illogic just harder punches and over all tighter verse

vote on this
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105075

Uppin 4 votes
(i need 5 times as many as the allowed number of carry-on-totes)
little rhyme for 100 characters

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PenPalz

punches - Illogic
flow - Illogic
Metas - Ilogic
Opener - Illogic
Closer - neither

rhymetime is a very bad newb, you should check the W.E.B or else u will go str8 down the tooilet my UNOFFICIAL vote goes to Illogics, i will vote when i reach 100