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05-11-04, 03:34 PM | #1 | |||||||
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tragidy
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i was raised in the gutta,around hoe's and smuttas
didnt connect with my fam,really all i had was my brotha my lil sister was too young to understand the pain i felt like a punch in the head or gettin beat wit a belt moms stung out on heroin,4 niggas in my house,and it was scarin men seein my mom layed out,eyes glazed over like donuts not breathin god took her away and now he owe's us my younger brotha i couldnt reach him in time he followed after me and put his life on the line walking together to the corner store around the block like 4 niggas pulled out the heat and all i heard was shots now when i walk to the store i look in the spot where my brother was killed by 1 single shot 1 bullet to the chest,piericed his heart in the box i seen him in,man it broke my heart cause if i was standing where he was standing it would ov' been me not him and knowing that he's gone,and i'll never see him again my otha brotha,i take of him like he's my child cant have him runnin the streets all buck wild he's more like a book worm,a school boy not like my lil brotha,who was toatin them metal toys man if you got a lil brotha or a lil sister sit down and talk to em',dont play around and diss em cause once their gone,you'll realize how much you really miss em' |
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05-11-04, 03:43 PM | #2 | |||||||
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IP: 3700 1584
Nice, I felt that shit..... had some good metaz in it also.... some lines seemed a little long but shit is was coo.
pz O
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05-11-04, 04:43 PM | #3 | |||||||
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IP: 7EB0 FB8E
thankx bruh..like i said in my introduction,i spit about what i've seen,and what i've been thru..i write poetry too,you should peep that as well
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05-11-04, 05:09 PM | #4 | |||||||
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Well i feel what you sayin.i lost my sister cause of that shit and i haven't seen my mom.but that was a nice keep it comin.shiiiit io grew up hard to.
holla at ya girl |
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05-11-04, 07:52 PM | #5 | |||
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Hot shit...
Stay with yo head up... |
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