Usual rules apply, 10 to 20 lines, u spit first

check this bitch........

so you wanna do this fast and furious/
you fukin bitchin like you past your period/

im way to serious, like george im way to curious/
the only way you can win is if you get 1 vote and fukin mirror it/(reflect your votes nigga)

like pyros my rhymes stay lit, and my crew stay strapped like dykes with fake dicks/
and i stay patchin niggas up like first-aid kits/

you anotha knock off like silicon tits/
you punches lack the real feeling like a silicon clit/

you just a bitch wit high dream of sucess,thats just gonna let down soon as my verse wrecks/
who you wanna impress, take them pumps off, give yo mama her dress/

who wanna battle a vet?you couldn't get that title even if you healed an injured cat/
my verbals killin niggas suddenly like cardiac arress,& i got warrants out for my arrest/

so protect your chest or get or get a whole in your vest like titanic when it wrecked/
i don't give you respect cuz you ain't evn got 2 post what the fuck you expect/

im way to meek, you way to weak, niggas wouldn't vote even if bush can to speak/
im past my peak, you ah fuckin geek go home and your accordion while you beat you meat/


match this bitch...................

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THIS RAP SHIT IS NOT A GAME CRAZE

I GOT THE ARTILERY THAT AH RING YAH HEAD 4 DAYS

SO ONLY COME AT ME PROPER IF YOU DON'T WANT TO RAP LIKE MACE

so protect your chest or get or get a whole in your vest like titanic when it wrecked/fucked up right here, should say

so protect your chest or get a whole in your vest like titanic when it wrecked/

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THIS RAP SHIT IS NOT A GAME CRAZE

I GOT THE ARTILERY THAT AH RING YAH HEAD 4 DAYS

SO ONLY COME AT ME PROPER IF YOU DON'T WANT TO RAP LIKE MACE

im past my peak, you ah fuckin geek go home and your accordion while you beat you meat/ i fucked up right here to its suppose to say:

im past my peak, you ah fuckin geek go home and play your accordion while you beat you meat/

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THIS RAP SHIT IS NOT A GAME CRAZE

I GOT THE ARTILERY THAT AH RING YAH HEAD 4 DAYS

SO ONLY COME AT ME PROPER IF YOU DON'T WANT TO RAP LIKE MACE

ONLY GOD CAN SAVE YOU NOW

put your palms together let prayer slip throught your lips
you a bitch so u used to letting dick slip through your hips
continously I have continued destroyed niggas
my rap stlye is golden but urs dont amount to monoply figgas
u weak and played out, ur vet style bout to fade out
whateva book you got that rhyme from, u need to rip the page out
ur style is sweet like cotton candy and shit
lyrical, change ur name to charmin coz ur soft enough to wipe my ass wit

ur raps are phoney like gucci from chinatown,
call urself a vet well a rookie took you down
decapitate your flow froms its knees and then head up
lock u in a verbal straight jacket, boy Furious dont let up
Its endless the way I spit it,
my raps bomb you from above like I was a soldier and you lived in Iraq
this is wartime nigga and u aint got weaponry to fight back

your ill equipped to test furious, unable to touch this
bullet proof exteriour, I must be mis-reading ya
you say your like pyros and ur rhymes stay lit
I piss on your lines coz them lines aint shit

I can't blame you for trying
But punks jump up to get smacked down
This is NFL
And My rhymes just touched down
Talk about titanic you just died like di Caprio
U just drowned in my ocean
I evaporatde your liquid flow with my hard concrete
Furious=nice, you dont believe? check your dictionary

this battle was pretty close but i give it to lyricalmethod

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I had to give this to my man lyrical method also, cause his verse was on point...to me. Furious u started out great, but then u feel at the end!!

Vote: lyrical Method

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Eclapt(DQ)

DQ my vote if u want...i don't feel like typin

weak battle

vote: Furious...LMs verse sounded like a song/freestyle...F's sounded like a diss at least

lyrical method got hiz yea furious ur verse waz mad good at the begginning but it juss fell apart which gave lyrical method the decision good battle

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Weak battle and Lyrical I tried to set that shit up but you aint answering me.

"like pyros my rhymes stay lit, and my crew stay strapped like dykes with fake dicks/
"-Lyrical hot but the first part curious doesn't rhyme with mirror it can't stretch words 2 make em rhyme when u type unless ur change the spellin homeboy(just some advise)

"who wanna battle a vet?you couldn't get that title even if you healed an injured cat/"-Lyrical it was okay

"you anotha knock off like silicon tits/
you punches lack the real feeling like a silicon clit/"-Lyrical pretty dope bar

"my verbals killin niggas suddenly like cardiac arress,& i got warrants out for my arrest/
"-Lyrical kind of a played out line

"ONLY GOD CAN SAVE YOU NOW

put your palms together let prayer slip throught your lips
you a bitch so u used to letting dick slip through your hips'-Furious the "ONLY GOD CAN SAVE YOU NOW" part helped which made it an okay little bar

"continously I have continued..."-Furious not creative @ all even the parts that don't rhyme have 2 have thought n them

"u weak and played out, ur vet style bout to fade out
whateva book you got that rhyme from, u need to rip the page out"-Furious pretty good but u should've found something besides out// and out// 2 rhyme u know?

"ur style is sweet like cotton candy and shit
lyrical, change ur name to charmin coz ur soft enough to wipe my ass wit"-Furious I like, I like

vote-LyricalMethod

his punches were hotter and there were more of them, quality and quantity
Furious put up a good fight but in the end Lyrical's verse just left more of an impression on me than Furious' did

i gvie this too furios lol that shit was sick furious ..well sick for a newb..<--and this comin from a vet ..feel proud...pretty hood shit dawg your punches was aiight your good but you need to fix your structure and your vocabulary and multi's but your shit was pretty good for a newb keep elevatin

lyrical ur shit was aiight but u need to fix ur structure and flow..that shit ruined it...if it was better you would of got this

vote:furios

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KiLlAh BwOy

this was a decent battle:

lyricalMethod: you had a strong verse and what caught my eye was all the multies and wordplay good shyt....your punches lacked in a few areas but other strong punches made up for it...structure was off...flow was consistent...no personals except for the 2 post line...besides that nice drop

overall: 7/10

furious: for a noob you had a hott verse...or at least the first couple bars were hott then ya style fell off...and u didnt get it back on track...your first "paragraph" was hott but the rest of it lacked in all areas except for flow and structure if u elevated alil and stayed consistent you would be an ill emcee

overall: 6/10

vote: LyricalMethod...i think he won this battle with all the good multies close decision though

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