U Challenged, U Spit First

10-20 Lines
No D/r
No C/r
No Hate

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As i step in the sceen tha curtan drops, never liked dealin with cops, but ma faith was surtain, spinnin wheels constantly u could say they where curly, destruction hit powerfull earth in its first stages, only 200 yeahrs ago streets witnessing mages, gorrilas locked up in cages, fuckit have patiance discover tha nations, i get day by day on ma head payling up complications, operate tha patians, take over invasions, cover her face with a flag on diffrent occassions, only let ma soldier out at hideout stations, turned 19 today my occupation involves transporting medications

i dont know if i should space my shit but whatever

This Is A Battle.....dumbass

Nigga Stop Wit The Real Shyt, Hop Off That/
U Wanna Sound Like Pac, But Ur More Like Nas On Crack/
Im Typin This And Askin Myself Y Am I Battlin U Dog/
Ur Out Of Ur Place, Like Ur Structure When U Battlin Ur God/
Oh, U A Fuckin Adult, Im Only Thirteen/
How U Use That Rap On Me And U Dont Kno Wut Ya Words Mean/
And We Can Tell When U Wrote This, U Were Jus Thinkin Of Meaningless Shit That Rhymed/
Cuz Part Of Ur Verse Is Garbage And The Other Part Was Missed Spelled The Rest Of The Time/
Nigga I Aint Gotta Go Hard, Cuz U Got No Punches/
I Knew U Were Garbage U Pmed Me Cuz U Didnt Wanna Make Challenges In Public/
See Im The Underated Champ Awaitin The Parade/
U The Laughin Stock Of The Whole Board, And U Havnt Been Here One Day/
Me Alone Can Knock Out Ur Whole Team Out Like Atomic Bombs/
Ur A Failure, Fuck U, I Feel Sorry For Ya Moms/
Im Done, Nigga I Dont Kno How Much U Can Manage/
Look Like This Green Martian Jus Got Knocked Backed To His Planet/

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green martian=
i don't no wat you were thinkin but this is called a BATTLE
and i dont even have anything to say bout you spit...0/10

gottaasswhoopin4u=
Damn long ass name....lol, j/k
but honestly you should have saved that hot verse for sum1
who is worth it i like ya structure, punches, and wordplay
staup and keep advancin.....7/10

vote=gottaasswhoopin4u

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Big NomBig Nom


" "Front Line Destroyerz"

^^^^^^thx but doggy u aint poll ya vote.....poll plz....uppppppin

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thanx but u aint poll..........uppiin plz vote, and leave links if u want a favor returned

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greenmartian: well shit basically your structure made the verse very
unreadable, your flow I wasn't really feeling too much.......your punches
never in the verse hit hard..... vocab not near good at all......

gotaasswhoopin4u: well you wasted a perfectly good verse on this
cat, structure was way better, flow was better than martian,
punches hit him harder than the punches he did & your vocab was
good.............you merked this cat

vote: gotaasswhoopin4u

drop a honest vote on my shit like I did on yours:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=126013

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iight iight...

First off, this dude GREEN MARTIAN aint even come at this dude Assswhoopin he was talkin about his life while he should be offendin the other opponent, he's talkin about
"turned 19 today my occupation involves transporting medications" but that has nothing to do with battling a person..yes that line is a lyric but this is called "rap battles" not "rhymin speeches" iight..

who started off better was--whoopin4u because it was very true
who had the best ender--whoopin4u i dunno bout martian but he was in a whole different perspective talkin about his job
punches--whoopin4u because MARTIAN aint got no punches
personals--whoopin4u no personals for martian
multies--didnt see nuttin..

oh chea...forgot to say who was the winner....ummm..this is a tuffy...

VOTE: GOTTAWHOOPPIN..

gotsstawoppin4u, got this 4real. Greenmartian i seen u do better, in this battle your shit was garbage compared to gosstawoppin4u, cause i know u can do better!

Vote:gotsstawopppin4u

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