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U can say what chu want but neva seen the green deamon,
Laughin loud filled ur girls mouth with green's dirty seman,
Eyes red constantly cause i cant stop the smokin,
My style raw potent im not suprised ur choking,
how u write succesfull lirycs when peps cry when u joking,
pokin in cocain quick like shogun spread blood flash of ma katana workin,
Farming goods shine u off with a thousend carrots,
drop pursuing internet pirecy on shoulder wearing fake parots,
Spark a blunt an insent elevate the concetration,
How u gona spit u havin trouble keping a conversation,
Dirt shake u off ma rotation,
5 plantations im fuckin rich thats why i made the sperm donation,
congratulation cutin ur corps up worst than ma first patient,
Why u call this freestyle sound like ur verses pre-writen,
I left the battle when i was finished felt like ma ass was bitten,
Legendery, how can bitches call me cow when i don't eat dairy, goin out vilont make ur rear look more purple than bluebarry, life ordinary mind further than my home galaxy,
Close ur wounds bledding all on tha floor hee is a pad from maxi,

blah...

i only bothered to read half ya verse cause u only got half ass skill
ill cut ya tounge in half but then ill be holding all of your skill

You actually posted about to be toasted and im surprised your still standing
And you boasted that you’re a martian but your punches aren’t landing

i 'm rippin this tame-hoe, flippin his gay-flows, dealin defeat like I was cutting off his toes
its just how the game-goes martian bitch couldn't match me if we was wearing the same-clothes

truthfully ya verse-is-fake not original just like everyone else here you impersonate
im goin from worse-to-great. but to ever even step to me was your first-mistake

call u cow?
I hop-on-the-saddle ride away sayin fuck-the-beef like stickin my cock-in-the-cattle
and by puttin your lyrics 1st.the only way you could've ever been on top-of-this-battle

ya judgement is done decisions-deminished.green martian-is-finished
da only tyme u gone see a -w- is when ya vision-is-mimicked

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i stayed within the line limit barz a lil stretched but multies make up for it


uppin for votes holla if you need an explanation for the wordplay

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illmatic got this bc his structure was better and plus martian used the same stuff in two different battles... that not right vote goes to ill

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repping 8th disciples...



record~9-2 (6 ko'z)

aight uppin for votes

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uppin for votes will return favor drop links

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To me i think green martian had this, cause his verse was more intresting. To me illmaticstatic's opening bar wasn't that good(Skills twice)!!!

Vote: greenmartian

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Ok; heres what i Thought:

I just was not following that rhyme Martian, I couldn't get the flow, might have been me, but I didnt follow. The punches were good, a little weak but good, Whats with the farming theme anyway, that doesn't go down well anway.

I really liked the verse, Illmatic'

'i 'm rippin this tame-hoe, flippin his gay-flows, dealin defeat like I was cutting off his toes
its just how the game-goes martian bitch couldn't match me if we was wearing the same-clothes'
That just won it for me, great verse,
vote IllmaticStatic

Wow thsi was one sided. I wish I could vote on this. Sorry Illmatic but theres that thing ya knwo so I can't vote on this.

But Green Martian are you from Alabama or sum shit like that? Whack assed lyrics n shit....

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I've Been Gone Longer Than You Been Writing

yeah you can vote unless u are now in ill intentionz
anyway uppin for votes

oh you taling bout lyrikal assasins yeah i get you we are old crew members so i guess you cant vote

any ways UPPING FOR VOTES i will return the favor

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This Is A KO, One Sided!Martian Ya Verse Was Kinda Weak Man, Felt Ya Were Lost In This One, No Established Flow and kINDA weak punches, Illmatic...... Ya Verse all in all was pretty good, decent puncjes with established flow, that right there takes it, I Believe This Is A Ko

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Lines Crush Ya 'n' Make Ya Appendix Burst In Ya Nutsack, Ya Rhymes Are Crap So I Flush You Like Ya Came From An Ass Crack/

Fourmost aka Verb