10 lines

3-0 KO
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First to 5

no d.r
no crew
no hate
no feedin

u set up

due tonight by 5 eastern

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check check....will spit after the hockey game

i will make the deadline

alright, ill spit a bit later 2

this bitch wants alot of time, he'll spit after hockey
he'll probly see my verse posted and straight up mock me

he challenged me, and then made me make the thread
if fill you up with lead, not from a gun, ill stab u wit a pencil head

this bitch is like, blind spit, but u spit first, aight
i was like, why spit first, blind spit, have i heard right

look at his sig, what the fuck are we supposed to vote on
ill spit the rest of my verse when im done wit hockey, so hold on...




ok, im back, and im ready to finish this beef with mentality
to battle me, this mothafucka should change his name to insanity

Goin Easy..

Most times this shit is serious but this time I'll son this chump for fun
Taciturn must be a drunk facing me...just to get that loss column to 1*
0-0 how the hell could you even consider trying to step to me
Cause if the winner takes the cake.... I'm the one who wrote the Recipe
You know the reputation kiddo and you still decide to mock it
Shit, if your mic was made by NASA you still couldnt rock it*
Still thinkin you got a chance, haha i'll leave you drownin in a pool of piss
Cuz Everyone knows that you'z a ho and beatin me is strictly ludacris*
So the time has come to rip your ass like a dysfunctional sex toy
And leave your candy ass the one herb that brings all men joy*

*hes got no lossed and no wins
*NASA makes rockets(rock it=rocket)
*ludacris sings a song named you'z a ho
*All men joy=Almond Joy...that is a candy bar

i kno explanations are gay but i felt that i need to do them for the newbs out there...

gl .........votes!!

gay you both suck donkey dick

there is my vote bitch's

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this bitch wants alot of time, he'll spit after hockey
he'll probly see my verse posted and straight up mock me
weak and whack...whack and weak
he challenged me, and then made me make the thread
if fill you up with lead, not from a gun, ill stab u wit a pencil head
mad played
this bitch is like, blind spit, but u spit first, aight
i was like, why spit first, blind spit, have i heard right
ok...badly worded tho
look at his sig, what the fuck are we supposed to vote on
ill spit the rest of my verse when im done wit hockey, so hold on...
Hockey shit again=gay
ok, im back, and im ready to finish this beef with mentality
to battle me, this mothafucka should change his name to insanity
whack
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Most times this shit is serious but this time I'll son this chump for fun
Taciturn must be a drunk facing me...just to get that loss column to 1*
ok...kinda played
0-0 how the hell could you even consider trying to step to me
Cause if the winner takes the cake.... I'm the one who wrote the Recipe
ok
You know the reputation kiddo and you still decide to mock it
Shit, if your mic was made by NASA you still couldnt rock it*
good meta
Still thinkin you got a chance, haha i'll leave you drownin in a pool of piss
Cuz Everyone knows that you'z a ho and beatin me is strictly ludacris*
ok
So the time has come to rip your ass like a dysfunctional sex toy
And leave your candy ass the one herb that brings all men joy*'
played

Mentality wins this....Both came kinda newbish..but Mentality jus had harder punches...Tact came with weak and played lines..Nothing good

PLease hit this up honestly http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114710
I'll poll whe you do Mentality

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mentality straight murked tact...
tactiturn you need to elevate
start throwin punches
instead of sayin im dope you suck
i rock gats you dont...
thats herbish shit learn to use punches
and use personals that hockey shit
wus also whack... wusnt really a punch

mentality you took punches flow structur metafors
blahj blah
mentality wins
My V/Metality Ment...go back and poll vote on me n makaveli battle other guy vote on my battles... ment i got one up with diverse in my sig its topical h it it up...
_-SyaNidal-_...PzOuT..

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taciturn - eh.. didnt like any aspect of it.. u tried bein personal but jus came across as talkin bout nothin.. that 'blind spit' bar didnt mean anything so it doesnt come across as a punch.. rest of the verse was like that.. no lines were connectin..

Mentality - much better.. tho still a few played concepts.. ya personals were put into harder punches that were effective.. went a bit general at points an the flow was choppy.. but there were enuff nice metas an the punches were consistant enuff to win this..

VoTe - Mentality

Drop a vote on one of these plz:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114168

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112698

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111096

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Where did Taciturn's vote come from???

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