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My Strength Is Tremendous Nuff To Snap A Bears Neck
I Laugh At Those Who Fear Death - I'll Burn Cigarettes On Your Bare Chest
Till Theres No Hair Left - And Go Deep Enough Till I Tear Flesh
Then Liquidify Your Lungs With My New Product - Nair Breath!

Vex Always Stay Flagrant - Live Day To Day In The Main Matrix
Elder God Can Get Away Fuckin On The Period Of An Aids Patient!
Impale Your Body With Nine Rods - Till You Stop And Cry Soft
Then Put Your Last Words Under "Deathwishes" On My iPod!
Turning Mockerys Of House Sitters - While I Stomp Wizards
Then Mock Lizards Like Godzilla In My House Slippers!
Taking On 50 Ninja Warriors - Putting Clips In Foreigners
Sucking The Tits Of A Whoring Nurse - Grab Acid Take A Sip Then Pour On Ya
Ghostriding A Helicopter - Laughing At Jokes From Melon Choppers
If I Die I Tell And Haunt Ya - Turn Ya Face To A Christmas Tree At Kwanza!

Its Ya Favorite African With Tha Philly Flow - Beatin Me Must Be Silly Bro
For Really Though - I Keep My "Clan Close" Like Ghost On 9 Milli Bros
And I'll Keep You Fake Bitches In The "Trenches" With My Feel Me Flow
So Niggas Stay Trying To Tempt Me - With Their Flex'd Heat
Even The Haters Agree Must Be Retarded To Bring Vex Beef
So Stepping In My Path - Unleashed The Rage That Mike Ty Had
Do You Want Impaled And Left In A White Bag - I Might Ask?
So Niggas Quit Biting My Style - While I'm Fighting For Trial
Call Me Papoose I'm Bulletproof Only Way Wet Is Ridin In "De-Nile"! lol

not bad............delivery of ur concepts can use a lil work

u started off pretty hot and it kinda died down as u got towards the end....the denile wordplay is pretty played, but i like ur imagery....structure was solid.....flow was good, a lil off in some places......but i dont care

My Strength Is Tremendous Nuff To Snap A Bears Neck
I Laugh At Those Who Fear Death - I'll Burn Cigarettes On Your Bare Chest


Vex Always Stay Flagrant - Live Day To Day In The Main Matrix
Elder God Can Get Away Fuckin On The Period Of An Aids Patient!
Impale Your Body With Nine Rods - Till You Stop And Cry Soft
Then Put Your Last Words Under "Deathwishes" On My iPod!
Turning Mockerys Of House Sitters - While I Stomp Wizards
Then Mock Lizards Like Godzilla In My House Slippers!


best lines to me.....great imagery, keep spittin consistent like this, and ull make classics, reminds me of me when i get on this type of ish

"blindfold light till its near night// spearfight on a kite with my ear as my eye for a year till I hear sight//" - Omega

keep it up

if this the vex i know then this the dude that tought me most i know

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Im a hustla man i supply all the feinds, im a hustla nigga i'll sell u a dream/-Tony Yayo

Looks like he didnt do a good job, because your below shit, y? Is he from BS too?

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Yes he's from BS

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well damn......how is it that this dude is pretty nice and the rest of yall gotta bite somethin to be nice......

smh...w/e
Ryp post ya damn verse

This Shit Is Wicked Man This is One of the Hottest pieces I seen nice Wordplay and use Of Rhyming Scheme Ill rate This 9/10


RETURN THE FAVOR ( Ghostly Rhymez SICK SHIT )

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lol I'm busy I have it written on paper, I keep forgetting to post it......aint that a shame..

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lmao omega keep talkin bout bitin shit yet none of us have seen links to it *taps fingers* were waiting for the links for proof

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NGN
$MoneyMaker$
~6lu loC~
Froze
Cyko
Enlightened
Convict
Playboyblaze
Future


Im a hustla man i supply all the feinds, im a hustla nigga i'll sell u a dream/-Tony Yayo