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04-13-06, 06:06 PM
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-da prophit-
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is tupac dead?
IP: CF86 0039
its the night of the tyson fight way back in 1996.
tupac and his gang brawl up some dude, punches and kicks. riding off he gets shoot 5 times at a stop light. cause of the fight? no1 knows the driver right? well its the tyson fight, and we in las vegas. so how come no one saw the killers faces. oh wait there was one,Yafeu Fula, but she is dead. got shot in the head in her apartment building on the 10th. (of november) oh and on the cover of the album "the 7 day theory"....... .................................................. ..........he is crucified with 5 holes in his chest, funny, just how he died. "i wonder if heaven got a ghetto" there a town called Rukahs. interesting cus if u spell that backwords u got shakur. he goes in some room which says clearly number seven. and at the end it shows a clock with 4:03 the time he went to heaven. funny shit, he got shot the 7th and lasted till the 13th. hense the seven day theory isnt as crazy as is seems. so with some little hints do u really think he is dead. or is it another conspiracy stuck in our heads.... if liked some yall can send me some verses like this and ill throw them iin there, just facts though i dont want no bullshit in here.
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04-13-06, 06:08 PM
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-da prophit-
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IP: CF86 0039
did this fast tell me wut u think
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04-13-06, 08:46 PM
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do you think hes really alive though???
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04-13-06, 09:27 PM
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na i didnt really like it..............good structer though
but just write about somethin else.............. werd 
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04-14-06, 10:27 AM
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Drop two links or this will be closed
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04-14-06, 12:43 PM
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-da prophit-
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IP: CF86 0039
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=226327
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225325
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04-16-06, 07:09 PM
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i say u never rap bout 2pac again. wtf made u come up with that shit.... word... ur progress is ill but not that ill.hahahaha retard.
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04-17-06, 02:09 AM
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IP: 79DA DCDC
Okay, let me start off by saying that it was cool you actually provided some info as to why you think it's a conspiracy. Howeverrr.. the topic is so highly overplayed that it almost seemed boring to read. Don't get discouraged though, just find a new way to approach this kind of topic besides Tupac Shakur. I thought that your flow was really good but you never really established a good read. This can be improved by constructing a legit beat inside your own head and just flowing to it... or, the easier way, watch your syllable count. Make sure you're using close to the same # of syllables per line and at the end. Ie.
oh and on the cover of the album "the 7 day theory"....... .................................................. ..........he is crucified with 5 holes in his chest, funny, just how he died. ^it was alright, but could have been better if you reworded it... overall i think you have some pretty good potential, just continue working on how you word your sentences, keep reading others pieces, and everything will come naturally for future writing. peacee -my conspiracy verse http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=226331
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